An Illustrated Guide to Getting Published: An Author 'How to...' Manual
By John Chapman
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About this ebook
Author John Chapman leads you through the intricacies of getting your book to readers.
• Conventional publishing
• Independent - Print on demand
• Ebooks
...the choices are up to you, and are not as tricky as you may believe.
John directs you through cover design, book descriptions, keywords and book promotion because, unfortunately, getting sales is not so obvious.
Author John Chapman and his wife Shelia have written and published 17 books. As an ex-teacher, John can't resist giving you the benefit of his experience in getting books published.
John will show you how to publish your book and earn royalties each month from the sales. He'll show you how to avoid the many services offered to authors but which offer a poor return for their cost. Other services and software which offer good value for money. You can take advantage of these without going into debt.
An Illustrated Guide to Getting Published assumes you have a word processed story but also a limited budget. It will show you how to self-edit and proofread your book or find services to do the editing for you if this is your wish.
It will suggest how and why you should approach literary agents rather than publishers and warn you of the difficulties and timescale involved.
If you choose to publish independently it will guide you through formatting your book - a relatively simple process for both print-on-demand books and ebooks.
This 'how to...' book will teach you to produce an ebook from your word processed document using free software. It will show you how to make your book discoverable amongst the millions of books available.
Hints and tips abound in this book. You'll find everything from recruiting affiliates to guidelines on pricing your book for the greatest profits. It offers a handbook on creating or having created covers which will draw prospective readers to read your book description and think "I must read that."
Like other self-publishing 101 courses this guide tells you how you can become a 'best-seller' but also points out that being a best-selling author doesn't necessarily mean you'll get lots of sales.
An Illustrated Guide to Getting Published will show you how an author can convert their hobby to being a business. It will show you how to research keywords and use analytics to draw readers to your books. Whether you are writing children's books, women's fiction, action/adventure, a novel, a textbook or a PhD thesis. Whether writing in English, Spanish or Hindi it will suggest strategies to get your work into print.
Amazon should be the primary retail platform to launch your book in ebook format. The advantages and disadvantages of Digital Rights Management (DRM) are covered as well as Kindle Select and Kindle Unlimited. John will walk you through the process of publishing at Amazon but also cover publishing on other platforms such as Google Play. Through distributors such as Smashwords or Draft2Digital he will show you how to publish at Apple iTunes (iBooks), Barnes and Noble, Kobo and others.
Has anyone told you how to deal with tax on author income? John will tell you what records you need to keep throughout this guide.
Social media will have a significant effect on your earnings. Email lists are incredibly powerful promotional tools. This author manual will tell you what to do to build your social media network and more importantly, tell you what not to do when launching, marketing and responding to reviews of your book.
Finally there's a reference section with useful articles, links and contacts which may help authors whether they are novice or expert.
Not every technique in this book will work for every author. There's a lot of luck involved in becoming successful. But the more you work at it, the luckier you'll be. Some of the information provided can be technical but you'll find lots of illustrations and examples to deal with this which is
John Chapman
We started the 'A Vested Interest' series in 2007 and it took over a year before I came up with an ending we were happy with. At 170,000 words A Vested Interest was too long though for a printed book. We cut it heavily but still ended with a 140,000 word book. There was no alternative, we had to split it into a two book series. Doing that, we thought, would allow us to put back some of the content we had cut and expand the second book (Dark Secrets) a little.Well that was the plan. We ended up splitting the second book and making a trilogy by adding 'No Secrets'. The original ending didn't quite fit now so we moved it into a fourth book - Stones, Stars and Solutions.And so it goes on. We are now writing book 10 and 11 of the series. Shelia has written a spin-off 'Blood of the Rainbow' trilogy. Altogether it's 2 million words so far! In terms of time, we've only covered a few months. There is an end in sight but not for another 5,000 years. Maybe I'll get to use my original ending then?About the AuthorsJohn and Shelia Chapman are a husband and wife team who met on Internet and crossed the Atlantic to be together. John, an English ex-science and computer teacher contributed the technology and 'nasty' bits while Shelia drew on her medical experience in the USA and produced the romance. The humour? That came from real life.
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An Illustrated Guide to Getting Published - John Chapman
An Illustrated Guide to Getting Published
An author ‘How to…’ manual
John Chapman
Hexham 2017
John Chapman has asserted his right under the Copyright, Designs and Patents Act 1988 to be identified as the author of this work.
All rights reserved. This book or any portion thereof
may not be reproduced or used in any manner whatsoever
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Copyright © 2017 John Chapman
All rights reserved under International and Pan-American
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ISBN: 9781370862986
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DEDICATION
For Shelia, without whose encouragement I would never have considered publishing a book
Contents
An Illustrated Guide to Getting Published
So you want to get your book published? - Introduction
Things you can forget now
So let’s get started
Part I - Editing your book
Editing your book
1st step - Read the book through.
2nd step – Use a proof reader.
3rd step – Use a grammar checking program
4th step - What else to look for when editing.
5th step - Get the title right
Think you’ve got your book ‘perfect’?
Save the final document
Part II - Moving into Print
The next choice – Conventional or Independent
Conventional Print
Using a literary agent
Proofreading and preparing your book
Agent enquiry letter
Finding an Agent
Twenty ways to get an instant agent rejection
Writing a synopsis
What next?
Formatting the Agent Manuscript Sample
Rejected?
Got the Agent? What you can expect.
Do You Pay an Agent?
Had more than 30 rejections?
Taking the Independent Publishing Route
Using a Print-On-Demand Service (Part 1)
Producing a document to upload
Setting up a CreateSpace Account
1st. Start a new book
2nd. Title and Author
3rd step. ISBN
4th step. Book Size
Creating your own Printed Book Template Document
Creating your book’s front matter
How to create and insert your front matter
Front Matter Page numbers
Starting Chapter 1
Creating Your Book’s Back Matter
Using CreateSpace’s Formatted Template
Checking the formatted document
Continuing with Create Space
Upload the body text
Bleed Choice
Producing the cover
Cover images to avoid
Finalizing your book
Choose a second genre
Price
Proof copies
Part III - Producing an Ebook
Creating an ebook
Why many ebooks are full of errors
Making your ebook Word file
Stage 1 - Remove hidden data
Stage 2 - Use only minimal styles you set up
Stage 3. - Create front and back matter.
Who do I send my ebook to?
Creating an ebook for Amazon
First Stage – Check what your ebook will look like
Second Stage - Using calibre to produce an ebook
2nd Stage alternative - Using Amazon’s KindleGen to create an ebook
Creating the Table of Contents
Making Your Ebook Available at Amazon
Kindle eBook Content
Upload the source file
Upload the cover
Preview the book
Kindle eBook Pricing
Kindle Matchbook
Getting paid royalties
For those who are NOT US citizens and NOT living in the US
Is Amazon KDP easy to use?
Publishing an ebook with Smashwords
Step by step publishing at Smashwords
Creating the Word File
Is Smashwords easy to use?
Publishing through Draft2Digital
Is Draft2Digital easy to use?
Publishing on Google Play
Step 1 – create a Google account
Step 2 – create a publishing account
Step 3 – Add a Payment Profile
Step 4 -Tax details
Step 5 – Add ‘Sales Territories’
Step 6 – Turn on Currency Conversion
Step 7 – Add a book template to the Catalogue
Step 8 – Setting a book template price
Step 9 – Settings
Step 10 – Adding your book to Google
Is publishing on Google Play easy?
Part IV - Promoting your Book
Book promotion in the past
The Indie Book Promotion Plan
The Magic Promotion Button
Checking your ID - Author - Who do you think you are?
What if I want to use a pen name?
Author—How easy is it to find your book/s?
Search results
How well are your book sales doing?
Analysing social media accounts
Tumblr
Google+
YouTube
BuzzFeed
Quora
StumbleUpon
More on the Author Book promotion Plan
Things to do while you are writing your book.
Read.
Learn not to offend people!
Start a Blog
What sort of blog post should an author make?
Twitter for Authors
Avoiding the Fake Followers
Who not to follow
Who to follow
To manually follow someone else’s followers:
Using ManageFlitter to copy followers
What to tweet
Twitter – a snapshot in time
Twitter Spamming
What constitutes spam on Twitter?
Making your tweets work for you
Twitter Lists
Twitter searches
Helpful websites for Twitter are:
Create a Website
Start a mailing list
Join Forums
Find the time to do all this!
Things to do when your book is published
Write the next book
Reviews
Amazon reviews
How do you find reviewers?
Dirty trick reviews
What if my book on Amazon gets a bad review?
Starting to promote your book
Promotion sites
Paid promotion sites
Free promotion sites
How do you determine which promotion sites to use?
Newsletters
Website listing
Twitter promotion
Beware of the I’ll make you a best seller…
courses
Promoting through blogs and websites
Business cards and bookmarks.
Did I just get conned?
What can you do with a business card?
Bookmarks
Have you considered putting adverts on tickets?
Use YouTube to promote your books
Direct selling your book?
Selling Printed Books
Selling ebooks
Affiliate Accounts
Amazon Affiliate accounts.
Smashwords Affiliate Accounts
Making your book permanently free
Smashwords Coupons
A book marketing plan
Things to do after your book is published
How to track your book sales at Amazon
Find out ‘why?’ if there is a sudden change in sales and downloads
Get your book on Amazon’s ‘Customers Who Bought This Item Also Bought’ list.
Join Amazon Author Central
Getting the Title, Keywords and Description just right
What influences a reader to buy a book?
Title
Keywords
Choosing Keywords
Other methods of selecting keywords
1. Steal them
2. Get them from Smashwords
3. Use the free keyword research tool at scientificseller.com
The description
Getting the cover right
Five top ebook covers. Which is best?
The Cover Image
Author Name
The Title (and sub-title)
Follow-up
Setting the best book price
Part V - Bits and pieces
A collection of hints and tips
Beware the word 'Bestseller'
So what do Amazon’s overall book ranking mean?
What if I find errors after my e-book has been published?
Heading order and the Table of Contents
Text Separators (Dividers)
Optimum blog post length
How much does editing cost?
Persuading people to sign up to an email list
Copyright
Make Google forget searches
Creating ‘Look inside’ links at Amazon
Getting seen on Twitter
Keep it Short
Be long winded
Twitter videos
Time management
Avoiding distractions
Where do you inscribe/sign a printed book?
More about Twitter
Cultivate a perceived higher value price
Re-tweet those who re-tweet you
Pinning a Twitter Post
Bump your tweets to the top:
Numbers are important
Twitter Research Shows:
What authors should tweet about in their promotions
Twitter Hashtags
Web of Trust
Reviews – the good and the bad
Good reviews:
Bad reviews:
Dirty trick reviews
Call to Action
So what should be in a CTA?
Adding a CTA as an HTML table
Part VI – The Appendix -
Kindle Select program
Advantages:
Disadvantages
Choosing a second genre at Amazon
Use the KindleSpy Application
Social Media Management Tools
Using Buffer
How to capture a successful Tweet from Buffer
HootSuite
Alternatives to Microsoft Word
Scrivener
Google Docs
LibreOffice
Not recommended alternatives
Modifying MS Word Styles
Font, Font size and justification
Why Garamond font?
Line spacing, paragraph spacing, Widows and Orphans
Basic styles used in printed books
Getting the first line right in Word 2007+
Here’s how to do it in Word 2007/2010+
Basic styles used in ebooks
Customising MS Word’s Quick Access Toolbar
Creating a Table of Contents in MS Word
Creating an Index in MS Word for print
Creating an Index in MS Word for ebooks
Making a Word Book template
Reading aloud on a tablet
How to send a file to a Kindle
How to send a file to another Android device
Using the calibre editor to correct formatting
Dealing with tables
Recreate the table as a list
Recreate the table using CSS styles
Special Kindle Formatting
Things you can change in Word
Getting the Start Location Right
Things to do in an HTML editor or the calibre editor
Start location - EPUB instructions
Lists
Improve Graphic Quality (Older versions of MS Word)
How to create drop capitals
Amazon’s Kindle Publishing Guidelines
Features supported by the KF8 format
Bibliography
Books
Publishing Websites
Software
Social Media Sites
Blogging Sites
Useful websites/links worth exploring
Publishing services
Useful Blog Posts Worth Reading
From the Author
What's the 'A Vested Interest' series about?
There are three rules for writing a novel. Unfortunately, no one knows what they are.
― W. Somerset Maugham
So you want to get your book published? - Introduction
This book isn’t about writing a book – it’s about what to do with it once you’ve written it. You must decide what you are going to do to get it published.
Things you can forget now
If you think you’ve done the hard bit, forget that idea. Your journey into print is just beginning and the hard bits are still to come.
Forget any idea you have of sending the complete manuscript off to a publisher. That’s no longer the way it works. Most publishers work through literary agents today.
Forget too, the idea that all your mistakes will be corrected by an editor. If your book isn’t already polished a publisher will just reject it.
Forget the idea that a publisher will promote your book. That facility is only offered to big name authors who already have successful books.
Forget any dream you have of making a fortune. You are probably more likely to win the lottery. It can happen, but for most it doesn’t. It is possible to make enough money to make a difference, but it’s going to be hard work. Those who stick with it are those that will make the money.
If you’ve handwritten or typed your manuscript out on a typewriter you are going to have to type it on a word processor. I know of no publisher who still accepts typewritten books on paper.
So let’s get started
I’m going to assume in this guide that you don’t have a fortune available to have your book edited, printed and promoted. I will assume that you are prepared to do much, if not all, of this yourself. I’ll also assume you are using a PC rather than a Mac.
If you are looking for a completely free option, then this isn’t the right book. (I’m working on that one.) I promise the amounts you must spend will be worthwhile though.
I’ll assume you have written your book using a word processor. There are many of these but probably the best known is Microsoft Word which saves files in .doc or .docx format. You can use other programs (see the appendix for a list of them). It helps if they can save in .docx format.
I strongly suggest you use the latest version of MS Word and keep it up-to-date. The easiest way to get up-to-date, and most painless on your finances, is to subscribe to MS Office 365. I spend £7.99 ($9.99 US) per month on that and get the full MS Office suite which includes the useful OneNote, Excel and Outlook programs. A current version of MS Word is particularly important if your book contains images since only recent versions allow images to be saved in the high-quality formats needed for printing on paper. Spending money on that and a computer will be an expense but remember that every penny or cent you spend should be recorded to set against your earnings. Watch out for the tax hints as below:
Don’t forget that this is an author expense which is tax deductible so record any payments.
Whatever process you’ve used to write your book you’ll need to edit it. This is probably going to be a harder task than writing it so I’ve devoted a chapter on this.
When you’ve done that you’ll have two choices:
You can approach a literary agent with an initial submission (no - not the complete book).
You can take the independent publishing route.
Whichever method you choose; you’ll have to start work on promoting your book. Fortunately, you can work on that at the same time as you are editing and producing your book.
Promoting your book, unless you are the sort of person who habitually wins the lottery, will be your hardest task.
Did you purchase this book? Did you find it on Internet after searching for a guide? If the answers are ‘Yes’ then don’t forget to record its purchase price as a tax-deductible expense. Claim some of your Internet costs too.
Part I - Editing your book
Editing your book
Assuming your book has been produced using Microsoft Word, you should already have used the spellcheck and grammar check available in the program, so you might think this step is pretty well covered. Right?
Wrong! It’s probably still full of mistakes. Here are the steps my wife and I go through before we send a file to a publisher.
1st step - Read the book through.
Reading it yourself on your word processor isn’t the best solution; after all – any mistakes were made on that. When we read our own work, we tend to read what we expect to be there rather than what is actually written. Here’s an example of how we can be fooled.
After reading the
the sentence, you will
now be aware that the
the human brain often
does not inform you that the
the word ‘the’ has been
repeated twice every time.
When you are proofreading a book, you need to get your text read aloud to you. A computer voice will read what is there rather than what you expect to be there. There are several ways of doing this:
Get Word to read the highlighted text aloud to you. Try [Ctrl] + [Alt] + [Space bar] You can also add a ‘Speak’ icon to your quick access bar. (§ Customizing the Quick access toolbar)
Send the file to an ebook1 reader or tablet computer and get it to read it aloud while you follow it. (§ Reading aloud on a tablet)
2nd step – Use a proof reader.
You can use a professional proof reader or a friend or do a swap with another indie author. Consider using a proof reader on the other side of the ocean at this stage to find those words and expressions which don’t quite have the same meaning. Here’s a couple of examples
Midgie – midget or small candy in the US.
Midgie – small biting fly, especially in Scotland.
I’ve seen books written by English authors referring to ‘tarmac roads.’ In the US these are known as ‘blacktop roads.’
Make any corrections you need on a copy of the original document. Make sure you save it with a different filename. Each time you make major changes I suggest you use a different filename so that you can revert to an earlier version if you wish later.
Hint - I would also keep a backup copy of your book on a different media such as a USB memory stick. Sooner or later you will have a computer disaster and you don’t want to lose all your hard work. If you are paranoid keep a copy in a different building or ‘in the cloud’ – online.
If you pay for online backups, flash drives or pay a proofreader – keep a record of the cost.
3rd step – Use a grammar checking program
Put the text through a grammar checking program. We use Grammarly (www.grammarly.com). It’s a subscription service but I find it well worth the money. An alternative would be another subscription service Ginger (http://www.gingersoftware.com). You might also want to investigate a free online service called Hemingway - http://www.hemingwayapp.com. There are other grammar checking programs and online services. If you decide to use one, make sure you check them out by looking for online reviews first.
Assuming you are using Grammarly:
Grammarly will find mistakes, which you didn’t spot, but not all of the ‘mistakes’ will be real mistakes just as the grammar checker in Word frequently finds false errors. I find it’s best to put no more than one chapter at a time through it.
These author services are tax deductible so keep a record of your payments.
4th step - What else to look for when editing.
Too much detail? Does it matter the route your character took to get to work? Must you describe his/her lunch in detail? Do you describe your protagonist in too much detail? Are there bits you could cut out of the story without damaging the plot?
Unnecessary words – dark black (does light black make sense?) – a loud shriek (quiet shriek anyone?)
Are you sure you have used the correct word? The classic example is ‘there/their/they’re’ Get this one wrong and your manuscript is unlikely to ever be printed. There are other common mistakes though.
effect/affect; off/of; to/too; your/you’re
Spelling I live in the UK and normally use UK English. My books mostly sell in the US and are expected to be in US English. I also have a US wife as a co-author. When I started writing I used UK English and was annoyed to be taken to task for my ‘poor spelling’. I presume Australian, South African and Canadian authors have had a similar experience. I used words such as colour, favourite, tyre, centre, neighbour, paralyse, traveller and leukaemia. All are correct in UK English but are seen as mistakes in US English. Although I felt I was betraying my country a little I eventually settled on using US English for my writing. I have had bad reviews from US readers who don’t recognise (oops make that recognize!) UK English but have so far not had a bad review from UK readers about my US spelling. I recommend that if you intend to sell world-wide, you adopt US spelling. If you don’t want to do that insert a note on the copyright /ISBN page that you use [Your country] English. US readers probably won’t notice this though so expect the reviews about poor spelling.
Are you too verbose?
Have you used author forbidden words? Have you used words such as ‘just’, ‘very’, ‘really’, ‘suddenly’, ‘then’, ‘started’ and ‘like’? If so seek them out and delete them or replace them with better words.
‘It started to rain’ or ‘raindrops pattered around them’.
‘She looked really sad’ or ‘She looked sad’.
Which do you think is better?
Samuel Clements (Mark Twain) once said:
Substitute ‘damn’ every time you’re inclined to write ‘very’, Your editor will delete it and the writing will be just as it should be.
When I went through this book I looked for occurrences of ‘very’ to delete. I found 46.
5th step - Get the title right
A catchy title will help sell your book. Take some time over choosing it. In general, you should try to keep fiction titles short – four to five words or less. If you need more words – consider a subtitle. For non-fiction a longer more descriptive title works better. If necessary, use a subtitle also. You might at this stage, want to read the section on Producing the cover where it talks about the emotional marketing value of words
Think you’ve got your book ‘perfect’?
Even after going through this process you are still likely to have made or overlooked errors. Professionally printed books contain them. Take consolation in the fact that errors can be corrected in a print-on-demand book or ebook far easier than in a conventionally published book.
You are also unlikely to suffer the fate of the printer who in 1631 accidentally missed out a crucial ‘not’, producing what came