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Bitten: Bitten Vampire Series, #1
Bitten: Bitten Vampire Series, #1
Bitten: Bitten Vampire Series, #1
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Bitten: Bitten Vampire Series, #1

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When Ally embarks on a night of Halloween fun, she envisions herself escaping reality at one of the trendiest nightclubs in town.

Armed with her girlfriends, Ally is having the time of her life. When, unexpectedly, she finds herself drawn to a mysterious stranger. His sensuous lips smiles at her, and he leans casually against the bar. Beckoning.

She was mesmerized; Her friends, not as much.

There was something peculiar about him.

Yet, despite her friends' objections, Ally follows him towards the back, and out the door. Standing in a dim alley, her heart racing, she pursues him, and soon realizes that her world will never be quite the same again.

When Ally embarks on a night of Halloween fun, she envisions herself escaping reality at one of the trendiest nightclubs in town.

Armed with her girlfriends, Ally is having the time of her life. When, unexpectedly, she finds herself drawn to a mysterious stranger. His sensuous lips smiles at her, and he leans casually against the bar. Beckoning.

She was mesmerized; Her friends, not as much.

There was something peculiar about him.

Yet, despite her friends' objections, Ally follows him towards the back, and out the door. Standing in a dim alley, her heart racing, she pursues him, and soon realizes that her world will never be quite the same again.

LanguageEnglish
Release dateAug 25, 2011
ISBN9781458111609
Bitten: Bitten Vampire Series, #1
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Merrill Gemus

Merrill Gemus started blogging in January 2009 and found an interest in writing short stories and novellas in her spare time. She published her first novella, Bitten, in May 2011, and later published its sequel, Stolen, in August 2011. She took a small break from writing between 2012 and 2017. During this time, she married her best friend in 2012, had a first child, a daughter, in 2015 and another little girl in 2017. In 2016, she finalized the outline and completed the Bitten Vampires Series, Unbroken, in February 2018. Published works: Bitten: Book One of the “Bitten” Vampire Series (Bitten Vampire Series 1) Stolen: Book Two of the “Bitten” Vampire Series (Bitten Vampire Series 2) Unbroken: Book Three of the “Bitten” Vampire Series (Bitten Vampire Series 3) Learn more about Merrill Gemus at: www.merrillgemus.ca

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  • Rating: 1 out of 5 stars
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    I couldn't finish it. I tried, really I tried, but the editing was, well, there was no editing. The story seemed generic, and there was no real connection to the characters. The whole premise on how Ally gets bitten is absurd in the extreme- what kind of vampire bites another person just because they're in a vampire costume on halloween? come on now. Unfortunately, about a quarter of the way through, I had to delete it off my Kindle.
  • Rating: 2 out of 5 stars
    2/5
    Alice Korman is one of the stupidest women in literary history. Who see a man at a club (doesn't even meet him), follows him out at 2 am and down dark alleys at that, then goes to his home with barely an introduction. I get love at first sight, but this was just dumb.I do not recommend this book to anyone. It found it very immature and poorly written. The phrasing, punctuation, grammar, and repetition made me feel like a 12 year old wrote this book.I downloaded book 1 and 2 for free at the same time. But I don't think I want to bother with book 2.

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