Vampire: In the Beginning

By Charmain Marie Mitchell

Vampire – In the Beginning By Charmain Marie Mitchell

Vampire – In the Beginning, is the first in a new serial of novellas detailing the life of Gwen, a 500 year old vampire. Bursting with love, hate, adventure, and betrayal, the 'Vampire' series is historically correct, fast-paced, romantic, and sometimes horrific.

Excerpt from VAMPIRE – IN THE BEGINNING

‘Tom’s mother Martha was sprawled across the large kitchen table, her clothes ripped, and in places, torn completely away; her breasts fell from her laced bodice, flaccid and drooping to the sides of her lifeless body. Her legs were at a strange angle, and her skirts bunched up into a ball at her waist. I could see, even from where I was standing, that she was dead. Martha's eyes were open, staring into nothingness and devoid of life, but it was her throat that caught my attention, it gaped open, and it looked like what I imagined, the huge black cavern of hell to look like.’

Read the 'Vampire' series and discover the true story of vampirism.

Praise for Vampire - In the Beginning:

Loved it I would recommend this book to anyone!! I really thoroughly enjoyed this book!! Amazing author gunna find more books!! - Lauren Potts

Short and sweet, but enjoyable. Sets up the story for the next book. Looking forward to the next book, good author , descriptive writing throughout. - Liz Gilson

Wonderfully written, I didnt want to put it down. I had to know what was going to happen next ! I really enjoyed Vampire. - Janet Caban

• Language: English
• Publisher: Charmain Marie Mitchell
• Release date: Aug 18, 2013
• ISBN: 9781301333745

Charmain Marie Mitchell

Hi, I'm Charmain Marie Mitchell, I'm 40 years old, and live on the south coast of England. I have very many years of experience in writing articles, personal projects, and ghostwriting projects. Creative writing is my passion, I feel that nothing in the world can compare to a well written creative extract of writing. Words can inspire people, make them laugh, make them cry, make them feel wonder and excitement. How wonderful is it to know that you have caused such emotions and that you will live forever in your own words! I really hope you enjoy my stories, and I hope that you will offer some feeback and reviews (good or bad). Bye for now, Charmain.

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Reviews for Vampire

[Larry · Rating: 4 out of 5 stars]

The story was imaginative and well presented. However, the writing is in dire need of a good editor. The grammar mistakes, punctuation errors (many question marks at the end of statements), and unnecessary tense changes were distracting. That said, this is a budding author who is cerainly worth reading.

[Graham Downs · Rating: 2 out of 5 stars]

This had the makings of a decent enough story, but bad writing let it down.

I struggle to stay immersed when I see things like missing apostrophes, incorrectly used phrases (“must of” instead of “must have”, for example), commas everywhere except where they should be... things like that.

I know those things don’t bother some people, but they bother me. It’s a real shame.