Rough Submission 3: Ganged by the Groomsmen

By Marilynn Fae

Eighteen-year old Sallie's life is about to be turned upside down. When her best friend asks her for a favor a day before her wedding, it seems rude to deny her, regardless of how crazy her request is. She wants Sallie to sleep with her groom so she can have her own last night of being crazy fun with men of her choosing.

She should say no.

Dominic is devastatingly gorgeous and powerful. And she's in love with him.

Inhibitions are shed when she finds herself in the presence of the Alpha Werewolf she promised to bed. Dominic likes things hard and fast and he is not about to hold back just because of her inexperience or their difference in size.

Little does she know the night of passion is about to change everything. She's claimed by not just the Alpha, but his pack mates in public as strangers look at her petite body being filled up in every way imaginable and she is helpless to do anything but submit.

• Language: English
• Publisher: Fanciful Erotica
• Release date: Jun 29, 2020
• ISBN: 9780463683248

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M y wolf likes you, he says, hands resting by her head, leaning down but not pressing too much of his weight on her body, ever wary of their difference in size and weight.

She gasps when he continues to rut into her hole, and he lets out a bitten-off groan as he comes inside of her again from behind. I don't understand, she squeaks, her voice pitched a little too high to hide the fact that she's panicking a little bit. It feels really big inside of her and she feels like it's still growing, which is impossible because there's just not enough space in her body for all of him.

My knot, he hums again like that's supposed to explain anything. My wolf wants you as a mate, he rumbles, pressing his nose to her neck, breathing in her scent like she has been hiding the air he needs to survive. He wipes away the tears she doesn't realize she's crying from how overwhelmed she's feeling. Shh... We have company, he announces suddenly and she wishes sorely that he hadn't because she is perfectly fine just passing out completely, but she turns to the door and realizes that he's being completely serious. There are men piling in, laughing and jostling around like they've just had a few drinks.

That's probably exactly it.

Embarrassed, she tries to pull away and drag and blanket up to cover her naked body, but he only twists her around and spreads her legs wide with both hands on her inner thighs.

It pulls the knot in her pussy, making her cry out in both humiliation and pain and the sound draws everyone's attention immediately.

No, don't look! she gasps, reaching her hands between her legs to cover her modesty, but it's impossible to do and she knows all of them have seen their Alpha's cock buried deep inside of her.

Keep your hands away, he says. Or I'll tie them up.

She clenches her eyes shut and shakes her head. No, Dom, she pleads even though the thought of being seen is making her aroused and awake all over again.

Now, pup, he growls and lifts her slightly, dropping her and forcing her to sink into his cock without warning. She cries out sharply when he does it again and again, stopping only when her hands shift away from between her legs, giving the men a perfect view of her naked pussy being filled by Dominic's massive cock. Good girl, he hums and her body goes slack with relief.

This short story contains scenes of public humiliation, domination and submission, werewolf knotting, size difference, age difference, double penetration, exhibitionism and voyeurism, gangbang, and so much more.

Chapter One: An Unreasonable Request

One last hurrah, her friend called it. Sallie doesn't think it's a good idea, but who is she to stand in the way of a bride's last day of singledom before she turns into someone's wife.

She feels stupid for agreeing to this in the first place, but she's not a philanthropist. She's been in love with Dominic for even longer than Jenny and wishes she was the bride instead.

She blinks up at the long trek ahead of her and groans. The taxi driver had been an asshole, not wanting to make an extra turn in the heavy snow and decided to drop her off in the middle of the street instead, reassuring her that it's just on the other side of the road. She knows he was just reluctant to make the u-turn. The snow is getting too heavy and he wants to head home as quickly as possible and he reassured her that she'll have 'no trouble' crossing the road.

No trouble her ass.

She's wearing a pair of killer

Reviews for Rough Submission 3

[Alex V · Rating: 1 out of 5 stars]

Not a fan. There were lots of typos that felt like they could’ve been fixed by just a reread. And the POV was confusing. The story didn’t really grip me and the steamy scenes were blah. What really took me out of the whole thing was the emphasis on her small size and young age. There isn’t actually any consent and she’s supposed to be a virgin that he just doesn’t treat well and she never really has a voice. The whole thing is kind of a mess and even for a quick steamy read, I just couldn’t get past it.