A Place No One Should Go
By DL Havlin
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A Place No One Should Go
Canoeing into the Florida wilderness is a near weekend ritual for the Callison family. Even the youngest of their three children at five years old knows how to safely navigate the dangers of the wild. But what happens when the wilderness they are required to traverse is contained within a man's soul? Ben Callison and his family's latest camping trip takes a strange and sinister twist when they meet a mysterious Indian where they elect to pitch their tent. The Seminole warns Ben he's camped in a place that evil calls home. Is the terror that lurks there a resident of the mound Ben's camped on or does it reside within him? Ben must find out if the shapeless dread he faces is from within or without, and if he makes it out alive, does anyone ever really return from A Place No One Should Go?
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- Rating: 4 out of 5 stars4/5Article first published as Book Review:A Place No One Should Go by D L Havlin on Blogcritics.Is evil a person or a state of mind? Can evil affect the very ground where it resided. Does evil have the power to move at will? In A Place No One Should Go by D.L. Havlin we follow a family into the Florida wilderness for a holiday camping trip and get just a glimpse of that answer, and a bit more.The father and leader of the expedition is Ben Callison. Not always a nice guy, he nevertheless insists on family time when it comes to their camping outings. Having always gone to the same place, he has heard from another friend of a place just a bit further that might have much better results for fishing. However, he is warned that he probably should not camp there.His friend has recently died under strange circumstances, and Ben loves a challenge. In fact he thinks he may just know better. The place more than likely has even more treasure and his friend probably just wanted to keep it for himself. As the trip progresses and Ben and his family go further into the wilderness we begin to get an inkling of who Ben really is. He is controlling, and he is not a very nice man. But he will have his way regardless of what the rest of his family wants.Setting up camp, they find some wonderful fishing and actually begin to have a good time, but when a visitor, an Indian man that suggests that they should move on to somewhere else to camp once they have done fishing, the family is understandably concerned. They are startled, as the man seems to come from nowhere. In his mind, Ben believes he is right and he refuses to move on. He is in fact more convinced than ever. He believes the only reason he is being warned off is so that this man can then move in and enjoy the rewards of the excellent fishing and game.As evening falls, Ben only now begins to get a glimpse of something not being right. His family in their tents, he is alone at the fire when he begins to see things. These strange and unnatural things make no sense. Fearing he has had too much to drink, he finally calls it a night, but uneasiness follows. Can Ben brush aside the strange things he remembers, and why does he feel so uneasy? Even as he and his family head back home, the uneasiness follows. Is there something following him, what was the real reason behind his friends death?Ben and his family are somewhat typical as families go. What Havlin has added is just the small amount of inner evil and feeling of superiority to Ben. Just the bit of anger and a little you owe me attitude. He has done a wonderful job of setting the stage for a background to explain the evil that seems to lurk in the wilderness. His stories are strange and unsettling and you can visualize the fear. The family seems to do the best they can, having been around Ben their entire lives they are used to this controlling nature. However, they still feel just a bit of fear around him. He is just not a nice man.If you enjoy horror and strange happenings in your reading this would be the book for you. It is small and compact but carries a big punch. The fear begins to engage quite early and weaves throughout the story, setting the stage for the bizarre and yet somewhat inevitable ending. This is a book best read during daylight, or if you are an evening reader, turn on the lights and lock the doors, it keeps you uneasy throughout the telling.This book was received free from the author. All opinions are my own based off my reading and understanding of the material.
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A Place No One Should Go - DL Havlin
About Author DL Havlin
DL Havlin is an eclectic author whose rich, varied background mirrors his novels, novellas, and short stories. DL has packed three lifetimes of experiences into one brim full existence. He believes, The one big advantage writing at an advanced age provides is that life is what you know and not what you project it might be.
Schooled in Ft Myers, Florida, Anderson H.S., in Cincinnati, Ohio, and the University of Cincinnati, his widely varied career included: systems analyst, procedure writer, production manager, materials manager, licensed boat captain, fishing guide, high school football coach, product sales manager, manufacturing manager, worldwide divisional customer service director, chemicals distributor general manager, call center tech service rep, president and general manager of a small manufacturing company.
An avid lover of the outdoors and sports enthusiast, his passion for fishing, hunting, and camping are frequently included in his writing. A deep love for nature and especially wild Florida often furnish settings for his work, but his travels make places such as Kiev, Singapore, London, New York, Modena, or Saxonhausen backgrounds for his stories as well.
His unique combination of vivid imagination and ability to weave intricate plot lines, seasoned by his lifetime exposure to fascinating story possibilities, provides the heartfelt, enjoyable reading his novels provide.
He answers, Why do you write?
by saying, To entertain—that’s first, but to provoke thought is a close second. I firmly believe both are done through the heart, for the mind is seldom opened until it is emotionally conditioned to respond.
Works by Award Winning Author
DL Havlin
1.Novels
Bully Route Home
Blue Water Red Blood
The Cross on Cotton Creek
September on Echo Creek
The Hangin’ Oak – A ghost story
Hidden Door
Three Lives of Larry Siegel
Lifessons
Frances’ Flowers
2.Novella
A Place No One Should Go
3.Short Story Collection
Story Time-R
4.Awards
Winner FWA-Royal Palm Award – best Literary Fiction ms, Promoting Outstanding Writer, Best Book 2008 & Author of the year 2008, Winner FWA-Royal Palm Award – best Historical Fiction ms, Winner Promoting Outstanding Writers Award – best Literary novel, Winner Promoting Outstanding Writers Award – best ms in genre
Keana-eno-pa-watchee,
A Place No One Should Go
a novel by
DL Havlin
All rights reserved. No part of this book, form or substance, maybe reproduced or transmitted in any form or by any means, in print, electronic, or mechanical, including but not limited to photocopying, recording, computer assisted data capture, or by any information storage and retrieval system without the prior written permission of the author. No adaptation of the material in this book may be used for stage, television, film, radio, or any other performance form, unless written authorization is obtained from the author.
All characters in this book are fictional. Similarities between characters and real individuals, living and dead, are coincidental.
Copyright © 2010
By DL Havlin
First market survey printing – October, 2010
Printed in the United States of America
Dedication and Acknowledgements
Dedication To: Babs Brown, dear friend and respected editor.
Acknowledgements
I used to read acknowledgements with little or no appreciation and with less feeling for the author and those cited. No more! After my writing journey of the last 17 years, I truly know the value of those who vitally contribute to the success of any author on their quest to produce a worthwhile work.
My first major debt is to Babs Brown and Robert Fulton, Ph.D., my patient, skillful, editors and to authors Bev Browning and Mary Ann Evans both mentors whose efforts have immeasurably improved my craft.
The second special debt is to my readers, past and present, that took the time to critique my work. Present readers Chet Collins, Tonya Player, Paul Owen, Judy Galinski, Sandra Pirman, Jeanne Miller, Carol Robb, Gayle Marie Hackbarth-Harting, Todd Sharp, Pat Cole, Andrew Schickowski combine their criticism with suggestions and encouragement. Backgrounds include: high school principle, teacher, editor, book store owners and managers, lit majors, seminary grad, ages (28 to 64) provide feedback. Their comments such as I hope you understand this for no one else will,
Provide alarm to wake reader when chapter 6 is complete,
Ya-da-da-da-da,
and Bullus shitus.
kept me on track and Written with heart and conviction,
I cried and I don’t do that often,
Wonderful thoughts written in beautiful prose,
This is twelve on a scale of ten,
fired my enthusiasm to write the next page, chapter, and book.
Finally, I reserve my largest, most heartfelt thank you for my loving wife, partner, do-everything assistant…Jeanelle. Without her support, encouragement, understanding, and tolerance I would have abandoned writing long ago.
Keana-eno-pa-watchee
A Place No One Should Go
Prologue
A place’s past often portends its future. We’ve heard of the house that brings misfortune to all those that live in it, a stretch of highway that repeatedly claims lives for no apparent reason, or a location like the Bermuda triangle where mysterious tragedies occur again, and again, and again. Why do these sanguine places play host to repeated tortured portraits? Is there an eternal mystic force creating such events in these spots? Is it the knowledge of the past’s awful occurrences that suggest new ones? Does a place share a human trait in that its personality and its behavior can be shaped by its past? Is it a combination of all these? As with so many things, know what has happened to know what will.
The following is a letter written by Don Carlos Escavaro, Governor General of New Spain’s Florida District. It was sent to Don Pedro Savalas del Tradezo, King Ferdinand’s Chancellor of the Iberian Treasury, in 1516. The original document was translated into English from Spanish when a privateer seized the dispatch after capturing, plundering, and sinking the galleon, Christ is All.
The surviving translation, shown here, is the work of the English sea captain.
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April 18, 1516
To His Excellency, Don Pedro Savalas del Tradezo
Written to his Excellency from the galleon, Christie es Todo in the Harbour de Char- lotta, Florida, New Spain
Your Excellency,
It is with a gladdened heart I write of progress made in our quest for the treasures we know are hidden in this new world. A great obstacle to our control of the heathen natives has been removed by their own hands.
Eparrollik, the primary war chief of the Calusa tribe, has been assassinated by his own people.
This chief was the most warlike and untrustworthy of the chieftains in the South Flor- ida Golfo de Mexico coastal territory. I have but to relate a meeting with this devil to explain the depth of his evilness.
Under a flag of truce, Eparrollik invited me and our company to his war camp near the great lake the natives call Okeechobee, he claimed for discussions of peace. Though this is far from the Calusa’s costal villages, I accepted and took my troops, Father Francisco, and his priests. The meeting between all Eparrollik’s south Florida tribal chiefs and our party was convened in this remote village. In order to impress me with the power Eparrollik held over his people, he proclaimed he would sacrifice one of his men. The heathen chose a warrior from those sitting in the conference circle, walked up behind the man, and savagely crushed the warrior’s skull with a battle axe. This demon sent for the slain man’s woman and raped her in front of our party and the other warriors. He finished the revolting act by dis- patching her with his knife.
Eparrollik cut off the warrior’s head, telling us to carry it with us and display it so any Calusa approaching our party would see and recognize it as a sign in- suring safe passage back to our ship. I’m sure the real reason he gave me the horrid thing was a warning of what might befall us if we challenged his rule, for this Satan of a man told us to leave and to never come back.
On our return to our ship, five men sent ahead to scout and protect the landing boats disappeared and were not found. I believe Eparrollik captured and killed them. His choice of the inland village was to provide him this opportunity and to remain out of the shadow of our galleon’s cannon. I am also sure the devil was displaying the large number of warriors at his command and demonstrating the difficulty in attacking him so far away from our ships.
Word has reached us today that this evil man was killed by warriors from his tribe who could no longer stomach his atrocities. So in fear of this man were his own people, they dismembered Eparrollik’s body and moved it a day’s journey from their village. In accord with their religious belief that a person’s eternal soul lives in their pupils, they removed his eyes and buried them in a separate location so not even his spirit would be able to find and terrorize them. They described the spot as an isolated mound in the middle of a prairie, where anyone approaching can see Eparrollik’s spirit before they get near. The Calusas call it keana-eno-pa-watchee or a place no one should go.
The new chief has asked to discuss trade and peace with Father Francisco. Though the Inquisition has been denied a devil incarnate, Eparrollik’s death will be a great aid in controlling the area and searching for its treasure. It is a good day for New Spain and the Throne. I will begin an immediate campaign to bring the heathens under control and to find the riches herein.
Your most humble servant,
Carlos Escavaro, Governor General, Florida, New Spain
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The Spanish never found the riches they sought, but the evil didn’t stop. New evils were perpetrated by Spaniards, not Eparrollik’s successor. Subjugation of the Calusas, whose effort to resist was valiant, bloody, and futile, created a vile page in human history. The Inquisition’s thumb print covered the land. But even the inhumane tyranny sponsored by fanatics in the church could not kill as fast as the diseases imported by these illegal aliens.
Gold hungry Dons searched the palm hammocks, pine flats, and oak hills bringing the scourges of small pox, tuber- culosis, and other European ills which exterminated an entire race of people.
The disappointed Conquistadors discovered the gold and silver they believed was buried in the land Ponce De Leon called Florida, wasn’t there to find. Spaniards thought so little of the sandy peninsula they got rid of it twice; once to the British and later to the United States as parts of treaty settlements. In fact, they were happy to rid themselves of a scrap of land they saw as having no material value. They left little evidence of their occupation except some sturdily constructed forts, cattle that were to multiply into vast herds and form the basis for Florida’s earliest economy, and a heritage of evil doing. And, evil is undying.
Chapter 1
The trip in—
It’s time to get your asses in gear.
Ben Callison nodded to his wife and daughter. Both women obediently took positions next to the family SUV, standing under the bow of one of two canoes sitting on the car’s top. Three sets of hands grasp the craft’s gunwales. You have good grips?