Aoleon The Martian Girl: Part 2 The Luminess of Mars

By Brent LeVasseur

Gilbert never knew that school could be so dangerous!

Determined to accompany his new friend, Aoleon, wherever she goes, Gilbert soon finds himself back in school – at the Martian Space Academy. There he’s introduced to Martian society, hears a history lesson on the Draconian and Andromedan races, and even gets invited to a psiball match. But Gilbert soon finds out it’s not all fun and games. Not only is Aoleon’s arch nemesis, Charm Lepton, determined to make sure that Aoleon doesn’t make it through the psiball game, but Gilbert also comes under attack when a mysterious force attempts to control him.

Do our two heroes have what it takes to survive? Find out in this exciting middle-grade science fiction adventure that’s sure to please young readers!

• Language: English
• Publisher: Brent LeVasseur
• Release date: Feb 2, 2015
• ISBN: 9780986208225

Brent LeVasseur

Mr. LeVasseur enjoys crafting good stories based on lovable characters designed to translate well to multiple media formats such as books, games, movies, and toys. He lives in New York when he is not commuting between Southern California and Olympus Mons, Mars. His hobbies include writing, 3D animation, musical composition, and intergalactic space travel. He also enjoys various sports such as skiing, running, and exospheric skydiving.

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Welcome to Part 2 of the five-part Aoléon The Martian Girl series.

CONTINUE THE SAGA!

Aoléon The Martian Girl — Part 1 First Contact

Aoléon The Martian Girl — Part 2 The Luminess of Mars

Aoléon The Martian Girl — Part 3 The Hollow Moon

Aoléon The Martian Girl — Part 4 Illegal Aliens

Aoléon The Martian Girl — Part 5 The Great Pyramid of Cydonia

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TABLE OF CONTENTS

LUMINESS

BIZWAT THE PROCYON

MARTIAN SPACE ACADEMY

PART TWO

LUMINESS

CHAPTER SIX

MARTIAN MEGALOPOLIS / OLYMPUS MONS / PLANET MARS

"Whoohooo!" Gilbert cheered as he ran and jumped high into the air using the newly found power of his suit combined with the slightly lessened gravity of Mars relative to the Earth. He had almost superhuman strength and speed.

Please, you must not draw attention to yourself, Aoléon cautioned.

Oh, sorry. I’m having so much fun, I can’t help it, Gilbert said smiling guiltily at her. It’s just that I can’t do that on Earth. I feel like Superman in this thing. It’s fantastic!

Superman?

You know — he’s a superhero from the planet Krypton that can fly.

Ahh, Aoléon said in recognition as if she had just snatched the image of Superman right out of Gilbert’s head the moment he thought about it.

You reading my mind again?

Aoléon shrugged. Blue tights and a red cape, she giggled.

They emerged from a side artery lined with giant spherical buildings and headed onto a main thoroughfare and toward the city center.

What is that huge building there? inquired Gilbert as he gazed toward the city center where a gigantic citadel stood perched above all other buildings in the far distance.

That is the Luminon’s palace, replied Aoléon.

Buildings stretched out in front of them as far as Gilbert’s eyes could see, and saucers flew back and forth overhead, swarming like insects. Just above them, a giant Martian ship hovered, projecting an enormous holokronic broadcast of yet another public service announcement from the Luminon to the crowd of Martians below.

An advertisement for a Martian rock band called Andromeda Supernova and the Black Holes appeared. The closest thing Gilbert could think of to describe it was a neon day-glow, head-banging, Martian, punk rock band complete with a Zero-G mosh pit. They were scheduled to play at the Galactic Stadium after a very successful sold-out gig at the seedy underground club, Emo’s Paradise.

As they moved further along the street, Gilbert could hear the band’s music playing in his head like a bad pop song that wouldn’t go away. Amazingly, the music was not being broadcast over loudspeakers but was somehow being beamed directly into his brain, bypassing his ears completely.

Man, if the governments back on Earth got hold of this technology, they could beam whatever thoughts they wished us to think directly into our brains, thought Gilbert who tried unsuccessfully to block the music playing in his head.

Aoléon smiled and nodded. For all must agree with all, and they cannot know if their thoughts are the thoughts of all, and so they fear to speak. And they are glad when the candles are blown for the night, recited Aoléon bringing Gilbert out of his thoughts.

Huh? wondered Gilbert. I don’t get it.

"Anthem — by the Terran author, Ayn Rand," replied Aoléon.

You read our books?

"I have not exactly read them myself, but someone sure did. I just remembered it! Aoléon exclaimed laughing. Which is exactly my point — being telepathic, my thoughts and memories are not always my own. Your individuality in spirit, in thought, and in your wide range of emotions is what makes Terrans unique among all other races of sentient beings. In a sense, I think many other races either envy or fear you — for what you are and what you might become."

Really? I had no idea.

Really, Aoléon said, smiling.

And what might we become? wondered Gilbert.

That is a question only you can answer.

You’re incredibly wise for a teenage Martian girl.

"Well, I am considered to be a teenager by other Martians, primarily

Reviews for Aoleon The Martian Girl

[sheillaz-1 · Rating: 5 out of 5 stars]

Such a fun book with a female lead character so full of pranks such as crop circles and flying cows! "Yeah right, thought Gilbert. That means a lot, coming from a nutty alien girl who attracts trouble like flies to a cow patty." (Pg. 114) And Aoleon loves excitement. Fantastic story, beautiful graphics, complete with a glossary in case you don't know what a parsec is: a unit of astronomical distance in which 1 parsec = 3.26 light years. Middle school readers will laugh and enjoy the ride!

[bemislibrary · Rating: 4 out of 5 stars]

Gilbert watches the stars and dreams of aliens. Then it happens, Gilbert sees a light and meets Aoleon. A Martian, she is visiting earth making crop circles and having fun. Soon there are flying cows, space chases, and fights with other aliens. Well the plot is average, the graphics are outstanding, hence a score of four. Young teenage boys will enjoy the book.

[celticlady53 · Rating: 4 out of 5 stars]

Aoleon The Martian Girl is a middle grade sci fi story. This review is for part one of the book. I don't usually review this genre but thought I would give it a try. I really liked it and think that most children, boys or girls would enjoy the book. The main character is a Gilbert, young farm boy from Nebraska and a young Martian girl. There are crop circles appearing in Mr.Johnson's fields and he thinks that Gilbert is the culprit, but that is not the case but Gilbert goes to investigate and finds Aoleon, a Martian girl just sitting within the crop circle. Now this is most peculiar as Gilbert has never seen such a thing as crop circles let alone a Martian girl. His curiosity is piqued though so he goes along with her on her saucer. Of course any young child enjoys a good adventure and so does Gilbert. I think it will be fun to see what adventures await him with Aoleon in the next chapters.The book is illustrated, by the author, and the pictures are very vivid and imaginative that will be sure to delight the reader. I think at this age pictures that go along with the story are a great thing. It gives the childs imagination something to give them an insight into the story.

[laura6thomas-5 · Rating: 5 out of 5 stars]

This story is so fast paced I was dragged along like the flying cows. When you read it you’ll get the thing about those cows.Gilbert is woken up from another weird dream . This one about killer robots. In no hurry to return to that dream, he goes over to look at the night outside through his telescope.Spotting strange lights in his neighbors farm, the one where the strange crop circles kept appearing, he slips out to investigate and literally bumps into adventure, in the form of Aoleon, a martian girlThe bright lights also catch the farmers eye and he discovers Gilbert and Aoleon, the martian girl, chasing them to her ship where they take off to the skies.It’s a laugh riot as Aoleon pilots her baby blue space craft around the world, giving Gilbert the ride of his life while she dodges the USAF fighter jets that pursue them.I received this book in my dropbox and chose to read it there. The illustrations are black and white on my kindle and don't do them justice.Excellent descriptions compliment the exciting illustrations, so brilliant in colors they explode off the pages.Young and older readers alike will be enchanted by Gilbert and Aoleon and this authors world.I understand there are four more adventures in this saga and an iTunes album.I plan to follow these adventures. You’ll wish you had a friend like Aoleon, and envy Gilbert as he explores his dreams of space.An out of this world delight.

[redhead.with.book · Rating: 4 out of 5 stars]

After quickly flicking through the pages of this book the thought that came to mind was “oooo! this is going to be fun!” The story was charming with quite a bit of dry humour that a young person would enjoy. Brent used vivid descriptions to describe Gilbert’s home in the Nebraskan countryside. I especially enjoyed reading them as they transported me back to my childhood living on a farm in the prairies. The artwork just popped and I felt myself wanting to see this as a film.

What is so special about this book is the fact that Brent uses a fun method to teach young people about astronomy, geography, physics and science. (don’t tell your kids!) The vocabulary is pretty impressive – this book makes learning fun! The end of the first book is really action-packed and I hadn’t expected a cliff-hanger. I really want to know what happens next…when is the next book coming out? :D

[swingdancefan · Rating: 2 out of 5 stars]

Aoleon The Martian Girl: Science Fiction Saga - Part 1 First Contact by Brent LeVasseurPaperback: 150 pages Publisher: Aoléon Press (January 31, 2015) Language: English ISBN-10: 097912851X ISBN-13: 978-0979128516Approximate Lexile: 730Publisher’s Blurb:Mars wants our cows (yes, cows!), and they're sending an invasion fleet to take them from us. Only Gilbert and Aoleon the Martian Girl stand in their way! Gilbert always longed for adventure, but now that he has it, he's not sure that it's everything it's cracked up to be. Ever since the night he met Aoleon the Martian Girl sitting in the middle of a crop circle in Farmer Johnson's field, it's been nothing but one wild ride after another. From fighting off swarms of giant killer robots to dealing with strange aliens from another world - never mind trekking across the vast Martian desert and skyboarding deep into the center of a (hopefully) extinct volcano - Gilbert has had his hands full just trying to keep up with it all. And now it's up to him and his new friend, Aoleon, to face off against the evil Martian overlord and keep our cows safe at home where they belong. The launch of this exciting and innovatively illustrated new series takes the reader deep into the heart of an unforgettable and out-of-this-world friendship in a story full of hijinks, hilarity, and good old-fashioned fun. Join Gilbert and Aoleon in this exciting middle-grade science fiction adventure today!I really wanted to like this book, but the author made it very difficult. Looking at the high ratings on Goodreads, Amazon, etc., I frequently wondered if I was reading the same book. The writing is often stilted, with an emphasis on telling rather than showing, and the author lacks a fundamental understanding of how to use commas. I wondered how it got past an editor in its comma-less condition. After a little research, it appears that this book and its sequels are self-published. Any author who self-publishes should invest in a GOOD editor, not just one who got an A in English that one time.So many things that bothered me… the neighbor’s name appears to be Old Farmer Johnson. Likewise, Airman Buzz. Is Buzz his last name? How trite can we be? And does the author really think an airman whose job is to monitor the skies for incoming threats would be playing games on his smart phone while on duty? That seems to me like a one-way ticket to court martial. Aoleon is the only real female character in the book, and she comes off as a little bit irresponsible.The book says it’s aimed at middle grades; the simple language and straightforward plot make it more suited to grades 2-4. Then the author throws in a lot of science-speak that brings it back up to middle grades—or even high school. I get the impression that maybe he doesn’t hang out with many kids, so he’s not sure how they talk or think.The illustrations are pretty—especially the ones of the planets as Aoleon is inbound toward earth.It’s sad—this book had potential, but it remains untapped.Who would like this book: Kids grades 2-5 who like stories about space.Possible objectionable material: Sneaking out a night. General mischief.(I received an advance reader copy from NetGalley in exchange for a review. As you can see, it’s an honest review!)

[grgenius_1 · Rating: 4 out of 5 stars]

You can't help but fall under the spell of these two as they face down everything from mean girl wannabe's (aka Charm and her cronies) to the power behind the ruler who is most DEFINITELY hiding something to a galact laden feast that while sounding odd is actually somewhat tasty. Oh, and did I fail to mention that they are getting closer to finding out what Pax meant when he told them both (in the last installment) that they will play an integral role in the events about to unfold? Silly me...well, they are and while it isn't clear what that is exactly yet, the trials and tribulations they are put through in the mean time only serve to strengthen their bond.

I love how the author made the unusual assortment of classmates easier to relate to by giving them humanoid issues and problems. For example, Charm and her envy of Aoleon's flying abilities despite not having the best equipment available in the galaxy. Then we have the two squid type students that suffer the fate of many of new/different student....bullies. *sigh* Guess it goes to show you kids can be mean in any atmosphere (or in none at all!). Don't worry, they're okay after all and some of the bullies actually get their breakfasts served back to them later on. Next on the love list would be the continued friendship of Aoleon and Gilbert. No matter what gets thrown in their way, they find a way to overcome it and turn it around. For her, it's just another walk through space but for him, it's a skip through a minefield. His secret isn't so secret anymore (the fact that's he's a human boy from Earth) and yet those in the know have taken it exceedingly well. Can't say that I'm certain that will be the continued pattern though as there are darker forces shadowing the pair. I for one though can't wait to find out what's next....


**review copy received in exchange for my honest review....full post can be seen on my site**

[carlathelibrarian · Rating: 3 out of 5 stars]

This is the first book in a series and it sets the stage for the rest of the books. I have to say it was not my cup of tea, but I believe that middle graders who are interested in Science and Astronomy might take to this series. The book was fast paced with a lot happening, but the vocabulary might bog down some readers.

Gilbert is a farm boy from Nebraska who has dreams about flying and fighting in space. One night he wished that someone or something would come and take him away. He tries to go to sleep but sees a strange light. He gets dressed and heads off to see what the light is from and he stumbles upon Aeoleon, a Martian Girl. The farmer next door also heads off to the field to see what is causing the light with his 3-legged dog Tripod. Aoleon and Gilbert take off in her ship. Between flying cows, being chased by the US Airforce,, Aoleon being chastised by her mother, they finally reach Mars and what an interesting place it is.

The illustrations are the best part of this book for me. They were cute and innovative.

I received a copy of this book from Netgalley in exchange for an honest review.

[cherylk_44 · Rating: 4 out of 5 stars]

Gilbert and Aoleon are back in part two. This time Gilbert gets to see where Aoleon comes from. City of Luminon. It is a spectacular city. Gilbert is learning that even through he and Aoleon come from two different planets, they do have things in common like on Aoleon's planet, they also eat ice cream and pizza. There is just one problem...low milk supply. The cows have disappeared. Where Gilbert comes from, there is a large supply of cows in Nebraska. For now, Gilbert is just along for the adventure as he learns more about Luminon. I had have the chance to review this series. I am so glad I did. Yet, the only problem I have is that I am reading the books the way I am is that I only get to read the books in parts. I have read part 1 and now part 2. This is the problem. I like this series so much that I am having a hard time waiting to read the next part. Gilbert and Aoleon are a great pair. I like all of the mis-adventures that they have gotten into so far. Although I was expecting to learn a little more about the great mystery that is plaguing Luminon. I did not learn much other than it involves Luminon's milk supply. Before I end, I have to talk about the illustrations. I did not think they could get any better than in part 1 but Wow. They are just as good if not better. If this is possible. They really jump off the pages and this is hard to do when you are reading the book on a computer monitor. I feel like I am part of the "experience" and not just reading these books. I can't remember the last time that I have read books not just for the story but for the illustrations as well. I can't wait to get my hands on part 3.

[dwatson2_1 · Rating: 5 out of 5 stars]

At the end of book one of Aoléon The Martian Girl, Aoléon had brought Gilbert to Mars and was showing him what Martians do for fun. Gilbert was just getting use to his new space suit and the lighter gravitational pull on Mars when they receive a mission. They are given the task to investigate the Luminon of Mars who is suspected of planning an invasion of Earth to steal its milk cows. This is all in addition to attending Martian school and Gilbert having to learn about Martian culture.I loved how in Aoléon The Martian Girl: Luminess of Mars, Brent LeVasseur starts to show the difference between Martian culture and Earth culture. I was surprised that a quote from Ayn Rand is used to describe the differences between Martians and Earthlings. Aoléon points out how Martians share thoughts and memories telepathically while people on Earth are more individualistic. She continues to say that this is why beings from other planets fear Earth. I loved this idea and it showed me that despite this book being meant for a middle school audience, adults can get something out of it as well. Another part I enjoyed was hearing what goes on in a Martian school, I’ll tell you that it’s a little different than earth school.Much like the first book in the series, this book is filled with action, comedy and some great computer art. I think the art in book 2 is better than the art in book 1, because in this book there are more pictures of Martian cities. The detail that goes into showing the physical differences between each martian is unbelievable and I can only imagine how much work goes into each picture. That’s not all though, the buildings that are in some of the art looks like something that you would want to see in a gallery of Science Fiction art. On the cover you get a small sample of what a Martian city looks like, but in the book there are more detailed pictures that are out of this world, literally.Aoléon The Martian Girl: Luminess of Mars is a book that works on several different levels. It’s a kid’s book that adults will love and includes great art and characters that will make you want to read the next book in the series. Not only has Brent LeVasseur given some breathtaking art in this book, he has also created a Martian mythology that Science Fiction fans will love. I can hardly wait to see where this book series will go next. This is a great book that will get kids to see what new worlds can be explored by reading Science Fiction.

[beverlyjean-1 · Rating: 4 out of 5 stars]

Aoleon, our lovable Martian girl, and Gilbert, our adventuresome Earthling boy, are back. Author Brent LeVasseur’s AOLEON: THE MARTIAN GIRL, PART 2, follows our hero and heroine on another wild adventure as Aoleon introduces Gilbert to life on her planet. The reader learns a lot about Mars. For instance, on Mars, Gilbert has almost super human strength and speed. Nice. We also learn there is an age difference: Aoleon is a teenager on Mars, but according to Earth time she’s around 108 years old. The Martians can read each other’s minds, too, which sounds like fun, but it does have disadvantages. You can’t tell a lie because everyone knows when you do. Gilbert and Aoleon do a lot of fun things on Mars, like eat pizza, even though it’s quite a bit different to Earth pizza. They also attend school with students from Mars and “exchange students” from other planets, which is pretty interesting. Everything about Mars isn’t fun though. Danger also threatens the kids, and they soon find themselves on a mission to discover exactly what’s going on.Mr. LeVasseur has invented some very unusual characters. Or has he? Do we really know what’s out there on other planets? Aoleon and the other characters in the story could be real. Who knows? The author also scatters colorful and fascinating illustrations throughout the story that give the reader a visual image of the characters and the planet. AOLEON: THE MARTIAN GIRL PART 2 is a nice follow up to the first book. I wonder what the daring duo will be up to in book 3.This is a fun read for middle grade/tween readers. Adults will enjoy it too.###

[mishker-1 · Rating: 3 out of 5 stars]

Part Two of Aoleon the Martian Girl picks off right after Part One. Gilbert and Aoleon are exploring Mars and Aoleon is teaching Gilbert all about her home planet. Gilbert sees the Luminess, one of the leaders and notices something different about her, which results in a chase by the Elite Guards and a promise to go rooting around in the Luminons Palace. Gilbert also learns that the main food source on Mars is Galact, a milk like substance. Aoleon also takes Gilbert to Space Academy where he learns about the colonization of Mars, their history and the exciting game of psi-ball!In this installment there was more explanation and information vs. action; although there is a lot of set up for action in the coming installments with the mystery of the Luminess and the Galact shortage. The mystery of the Luminess is intriguing and the psi-ball game was really exciting. I really did enjoy learning about Mars’ history and technology; however there is a step up in vocabulary in this book that might make it a little more difficult for some middle-grade readers. Scientific and technical terms are used throughout, such as names of stars that some people are familiar with such as Rigel and Betelgeuse, and AU’s which are astronomical units. For kids with inquiring minds, this will get their curiosity flowing. It was also interesting to see that school is the same no matter where you go, even mean girls exist on Mars! There was one curious thing though for me: a name of one type of Alien is a Viagraa’n, this looks a lot like a type of blue medicine we all know, doesn’t it? And then there was this sentence: “He is a Viagraa’n…they get easily excited.” Believe me, there were a few snickers from the pre-teen boys when they read this… Anyway, with that weird exception, I still want to see where Gilbert and Aoleon’s adventures take them in the third book.This book was received for free in return for an honest review.