Aoleon The Martian Girl: Part 3 The Hollow Moon

By Brent LeVasseur

First it was Earth’s cows, and now it’s the Martian galact supply! When will this madness end?

While spying on the Luminon, Aoléon and Gilbert uncover the Martian leader's plot to steal Earth’s milk cows for his own nefarious ends. Even more shocking is their discovery of the Luminon’s intent to sabotage and disrupt the Martian galact supply. Now the young duo must race against the clock and the Luminon’s saboteur to warn the manager of the galactworks (Aoléon’s father, no less!) of the imminent danger before it’s too late.

Join Aoléon and Gilbert as they fight back against everything the universe throws their way – from horrible space accidents to angry squads of Royal Paladin Guards, to a megalomaniacal Martian leader bent on capturing them – in this exciting episode of the middle-grade science fiction series, Aoléon the Martian Girl.

• Language: English
• Publisher: Brent LeVasseur
• Release date: Feb 8, 2015
• ISBN: 9780986208232

Brent LeVasseur

Mr. LeVasseur enjoys crafting good stories based on lovable characters designed to translate well to multiple media formats such as books, games, movies, and toys. He lives in New York when he is not commuting between Southern California and Olympus Mons, Mars. His hobbies include writing, 3D animation, musical composition, and intergalactic space travel. He also enjoys various sports such as skiing, running, and exospheric skydiving.

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Welcome to Part 3 of the five-part Aoléon The Martian Girl series.

CONTINUE THE SAGA!

Aoléon The Martian Girl — Part 1 First Contact

Aoléon The Martian Girl — Part 2 The Luminess of Mars

Aoléon The Martian Girl — Part 3 The Hollow Moon

Aoléon The Martian Girl — Part 4 Illegal Aliens

Aoléon The Martian Girl — Part 5 The Great Pyramid of Cydonia

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TABLE OF CONTENTS

LUMINON

GALACTWORKS

HOLLOW MOON

GILBERT SKYBOARDS

PART THREE

LUMINON

CHAPTER NINE

LUMINON’S PALACE / MARTIAN MEGALOPOLIS / OLYMPUS MONS / PLANET MARS

In the center of the Martian megalopolis stood a colossal fortress, a citadel — the newly acquired palace for the Luminon after his army had overthrown the democratically elected government, the Supreme Council of Twelve. The enormous palace, constructed as an architectural tribute to the Luminon’s power, was designed to trigger a feeling of insignificance to any foreign dignitary who might pay the Luminon a visit. Standing more than two miles high, the palace conveyed the essence of power. Near the top of the citadel resided the Luminon’s main throne room with its high-arching ceilings and huge portal windows on every side that presented the Luminon with spectacular views of the entire megalopolis.

In a flash of light, Aoléon and Gilbert phased to the top of the Luminon’s palace, having made the jump directly from her home. Gilbert caught his breath as he fought off the shock of phasing and the disorientation that followed. Viewing the layout of the buildings of the megalopolis from high above, Gilbert could see that the pattern they formed resembled quite closely the center of a sunflower. The megalopolis was designed and arranged in concentric overlapping spiral rings based on phi, the golden ratio, giving him the feeling that the city was somehow a giant living organism, and he was a bumblebee perched on top of its center-most bud.

The largest buildings were placed in the outer ring, farthest from the center of the megalopolis and the citadel, with the buildings gradually getting smaller, at the rate of the golden ratio, the closer they were positioned to the center. This architectural feat was designed so that when the Luminon gazed out of his window onto the city below, none of the buildings seemed any larger than the ones in front of it and certainly not larger than his citadel. It was an optical illusion, of course. However, it gave the false impression that none of the buildings were taller than the citadel where Aoléon and Gilbert now stood.

At that moment, though, the view from the top of the citadel was the last thing on Aoléon’s and Gilbert’s minds. Instead, they focused their attention on the business at hand — a force-field barrier

Reviews for Aoleon The Martian Girl

[sheillaz-1 · Rating: 5 out of 5 stars]

Such a fun book with a female lead character so full of pranks such as crop circles and flying cows! "Yeah right, thought Gilbert. That means a lot, coming from a nutty alien girl who attracts trouble like flies to a cow patty." (Pg. 114) And Aoleon loves excitement. Fantastic story, beautiful graphics, complete with a glossary in case you don't know what a parsec is: a unit of astronomical distance in which 1 parsec = 3.26 light years. Middle school readers will laugh and enjoy the ride!

[bemislibrary · Rating: 4 out of 5 stars]

Gilbert watches the stars and dreams of aliens. Then it happens, Gilbert sees a light and meets Aoleon. A Martian, she is visiting earth making crop circles and having fun. Soon there are flying cows, space chases, and fights with other aliens. Well the plot is average, the graphics are outstanding, hence a score of four. Young teenage boys will enjoy the book.

[celticlady53 · Rating: 4 out of 5 stars]

Aoleon The Martian Girl is a middle grade sci fi story. This review is for part one of the book. I don't usually review this genre but thought I would give it a try. I really liked it and think that most children, boys or girls would enjoy the book. The main character is a Gilbert, young farm boy from Nebraska and a young Martian girl. There are crop circles appearing in Mr.Johnson's fields and he thinks that Gilbert is the culprit, but that is not the case but Gilbert goes to investigate and finds Aoleon, a Martian girl just sitting within the crop circle. Now this is most peculiar as Gilbert has never seen such a thing as crop circles let alone a Martian girl. His curiosity is piqued though so he goes along with her on her saucer. Of course any young child enjoys a good adventure and so does Gilbert. I think it will be fun to see what adventures await him with Aoleon in the next chapters.The book is illustrated, by the author, and the pictures are very vivid and imaginative that will be sure to delight the reader. I think at this age pictures that go along with the story are a great thing. It gives the childs imagination something to give them an insight into the story.

[laura6thomas-5 · Rating: 5 out of 5 stars]

This story is so fast paced I was dragged along like the flying cows. When you read it you’ll get the thing about those cows.Gilbert is woken up from another weird dream . This one about killer robots. In no hurry to return to that dream, he goes over to look at the night outside through his telescope.Spotting strange lights in his neighbors farm, the one where the strange crop circles kept appearing, he slips out to investigate and literally bumps into adventure, in the form of Aoleon, a martian girlThe bright lights also catch the farmers eye and he discovers Gilbert and Aoleon, the martian girl, chasing them to her ship where they take off to the skies.It’s a laugh riot as Aoleon pilots her baby blue space craft around the world, giving Gilbert the ride of his life while she dodges the USAF fighter jets that pursue them.I received this book in my dropbox and chose to read it there. The illustrations are black and white on my kindle and don't do them justice.Excellent descriptions compliment the exciting illustrations, so brilliant in colors they explode off the pages.Young and older readers alike will be enchanted by Gilbert and Aoleon and this authors world.I understand there are four more adventures in this saga and an iTunes album.I plan to follow these adventures. You’ll wish you had a friend like Aoleon, and envy Gilbert as he explores his dreams of space.An out of this world delight.

[dwatson2_1 · Rating: 5 out of 5 stars]

We’ve all heard the phrase curiosity killed the cat, for Gilbert curiosity led to a discovery that few people knew about. Gilbert had been having strange dreams ever since crop circles appeared in his neighbor, farmer Johnson’s corn field and he wasn’t sure what they meant. One night Gilbert saw a mysterious light over the farm, he decided to go investigate and finds a Martian girl named Aoléon sitting in the field.When farmer Johnson sees them he starts shooting, thinking they’re vandals. The two new friends make a quick getaway in Aoléon’s space ship. As they’re leaving, Gilbert accidentally causes farmer Johnson’s cows to start flying and gets the attention of the U.S. air force. Gilbert was wishing for an angel to take him away from life on the farm, what he got instead was an adventure that most kids only dream about.Aoléon: The Martian Girl Part One by Brent LeVasseur is an awesomely illustrated outer space adventure. This book not only includes an excellent story that kids will love but there is also some great 3D animated pictures that bring the story to life. Even if you don’t like the story, the art will still make you want this book. I found myself spending a lot of time looking at the space photos and wondering how long it took to make them. The pictures of the cities on Mars were enough to make your jaw drop.If the visual art itself doesn’t convince you to get this book the story should. Its intended for a middle school audience, it has lots of humor and some good lessons on how it’s important to help others. I loved how Brent LeVasseur built suspense leading up to Gilbert and Aoléon meeting for the first time. Gilbert comes across as a nice kid that is looking for some excitement and Aoléon who is a thrill seeker, is the girl who will change everything for him. This is a tale about friendship with non-stop action that adults will like as much as kids.I think Aoléon: The Martian Girl Part One is a great book to get kids into reading Science Fiction and Fantasy. The characters are lovable and easy for kids to relate to, the art is fantastic and the story moves quickly. I also loved the explanation on how the space ship works and the description of life on Mars. This is the kind of book that will show kids how much fun reading can be. Adults will appreciate it also because it will remind them of why they like to read as kids. The best part is that this book is the beginning of a series and if the storytelling in this one is any indication, this series is going to be one fascinating thrill ride.

[beverlyjean-1 · Rating: 4 out of 5 stars]

Lots of kids have dreams. Good dreams. Bad dreams. Scary dreams. Fun dreams. Gilbert Sullivan has dreams too, about giant killer robots that chase him. To add to his troubles, Gilbert’s mother and father fight a lot. He prays for an angel to take him away. And his prayers are answered. Sort of.Aoléon: The Martian Girl, a novel for middle grade readers by Author Brent LeVasseur, takes the reader on a journey through the universe with, not an angel, but a Martian girl. She’s looking for the perfect spot to make crop circles in the fields when Gilbert spots what he thinks is a star but turns out to be a space ship flown by Aoléon. The reader is soon flying around the planet with the alien. They see floating cows, famous places such as the Arc de Triomphe and other spots, while being chased by U. S. fighter jets. Aoléon and Gilbert are delightful characters. To add to the beauty of the book, the author has spread colorful illustrations throughout the story, showing us not only what the characters look like but also giving us a glimpse of outer space as the kids zip through the sky on what possibly is an important mission. I don’t want to give anything away so that’s all I’ll say. Continuous action and lively conversation make for a great story as the reader learns more about the boy and the alien girl.Aoléon: The Martian Girl would make a great addition to school classrooms and libraries, as well as your public library. This is a nice beginning to a new series.I was given an ARC of the book for my honest review.

[redhead.with.book · Rating: 4 out of 5 stars]

After quickly flicking through the pages of this book the thought that came to mind was “oooo! this is going to be fun!” The story was charming with quite a bit of dry humour that a young person would enjoy. Brent used vivid descriptions to describe Gilbert’s home in the Nebraskan countryside. I especially enjoyed reading them as they transported me back to my childhood living on a farm in the prairies. The artwork just popped and I felt myself wanting to see this as a film.

What is so special about this book is the fact that Brent uses a fun method to teach young people about astronomy, geography, physics and science. (don’t tell your kids!) The vocabulary is pretty impressive – this book makes learning fun! The end of the first book is really action-packed and I hadn’t expected a cliff-hanger. I really want to know what happens next…when is the next book coming out? :D

[swingdancefan · Rating: 2 out of 5 stars]

Aoleon The Martian Girl: Science Fiction Saga - Part 1 First Contact by Brent LeVasseurPaperback: 150 pages Publisher: Aoléon Press (January 31, 2015) Language: English ISBN-10: 097912851X ISBN-13: 978-0979128516Approximate Lexile: 730Publisher’s Blurb:Mars wants our cows (yes, cows!), and they're sending an invasion fleet to take them from us. Only Gilbert and Aoleon the Martian Girl stand in their way! Gilbert always longed for adventure, but now that he has it, he's not sure that it's everything it's cracked up to be. Ever since the night he met Aoleon the Martian Girl sitting in the middle of a crop circle in Farmer Johnson's field, it's been nothing but one wild ride after another. From fighting off swarms of giant killer robots to dealing with strange aliens from another world - never mind trekking across the vast Martian desert and skyboarding deep into the center of a (hopefully) extinct volcano - Gilbert has had his hands full just trying to keep up with it all. And now it's up to him and his new friend, Aoleon, to face off against the evil Martian overlord and keep our cows safe at home where they belong. The launch of this exciting and innovatively illustrated new series takes the reader deep into the heart of an unforgettable and out-of-this-world friendship in a story full of hijinks, hilarity, and good old-fashioned fun. Join Gilbert and Aoleon in this exciting middle-grade science fiction adventure today!I really wanted to like this book, but the author made it very difficult. Looking at the high ratings on Goodreads, Amazon, etc., I frequently wondered if I was reading the same book. The writing is often stilted, with an emphasis on telling rather than showing, and the author lacks a fundamental understanding of how to use commas. I wondered how it got past an editor in its comma-less condition. After a little research, it appears that this book and its sequels are self-published. Any author who self-publishes should invest in a GOOD editor, not just one who got an A in English that one time.So many things that bothered me… the neighbor’s name appears to be Old Farmer Johnson. Likewise, Airman Buzz. Is Buzz his last name? How trite can we be? And does the author really think an airman whose job is to monitor the skies for incoming threats would be playing games on his smart phone while on duty? That seems to me like a one-way ticket to court martial. Aoleon is the only real female character in the book, and she comes off as a little bit irresponsible.The book says it’s aimed at middle grades; the simple language and straightforward plot make it more suited to grades 2-4. Then the author throws in a lot of science-speak that brings it back up to middle grades—or even high school. I get the impression that maybe he doesn’t hang out with many kids, so he’s not sure how they talk or think.The illustrations are pretty—especially the ones of the planets as Aoleon is inbound toward earth.It’s sad—this book had potential, but it remains untapped.Who would like this book: Kids grades 2-5 who like stories about space.Possible objectionable material: Sneaking out a night. General mischief.(I received an advance reader copy from NetGalley in exchange for a review. As you can see, it’s an honest review!)

[grgenius_1 · Rating: 3 out of 5 stars]

This installment puts us right back in the range of fire. This time we learn that school nemesis's may be hiding more than we bargained for, the leader of the Mars colony is not what he seems, and the man in the moon is far from a figment of one's imagination...and is better said to be "men" as in plural times thousands (well, they aren't really men but you get what I mean). There's shocking moments in the ventilation with a spider like robot. There's a game of chicken played at over a thousand feet in the air without a net against Paladian guards (eep!). There's a rescue attempt by Bizwatt, the undercover fella from the last book, and a BIG BOOM as a result. All that and more occur, while we're still trying to unravel the bigger picture to see just how all the pieces will fall. It's quite the ride with the right amount of action and mystery to keep you coming back for more.

While the story was certainly actions packed, I must say my eyes were more captivated by the illustrations than before. The colors are just so vibrant, matching the out-of-this-world vibe of the story, and though only 2D, they manage to capture the action of the moment depicted to a tee. Imagine what you'll get from a full page color image of the Mars city, or the moon that Pax is directing them to investigate for some reason or another, or the chase scene when Aoleon and Gilbert are trying to outrun a few Paladian guards.

All in all, though we're delving into deeper space than I usually care to investigate, I'm still invested in the read and want to know how the series draws to a conclusion. Two more books and I'm so there! Will they figure out how to expose the powers that be behind the planned attacks and stop the invasion? Or will they be captured and meet a dire final end? Only one way to find out....



**review copy received in exchange for my honest review...full post can be seen on my site**

[mishker-1 · Rating: 4 out of 5 stars]

Aoleon and Gilbert uncover the Martian Government's plot led by the Luminon to starve the Martian society by depriving them of their galact, invade Earth and steal their cows. Aoleon and Gilbert race to the Galactworks plant to try and stop the sabotage. After a strange discovery and a close escape, Aoleon has to take her final pilot's exam where trouble catches up to her once again. This book was filled with excitement from beginning to end. After learning a lot about Mars and the government in the second book it was nice to have an action-packed third book. It was great to finally see the Luminon and his cronies, the pictures really helped to bring these characters to life. Also, the galact factory, I had been wondering what those Martian Cows looked like. The events within Aoleon's pilot exam were surprising, there was more excitement with more nefarious characters and I was glad that Gilbert began to step forward as the hero a bit. With the event that Aoleon and Gilbert uncovered in book three, I'm sure book four will hold more mysteries and excitement as well. This book was received for free in return for an honest review.

[cherylk_44 · Rating: 4 out of 5 stars]

Luminon is hungry for world dominion. He wants to take the rebels out. He has a plan that affects the milk supply. Aoleon and Gilbert hear the plan and try to stop Luminon before he can complete his plan. Yet, they find themselves in way over their heads. Can they get out of the predicament that they find themselves in before it is too late?OMG, I am having such an enjoyable time reading this series. It is not just for the younger readers. This is due to Mr. LeVasseur. He does not write doen to the younger audience yet at the same time he kepts it interesting with fun characters like Aoleon, Gilbert, Luminon and the rest of the residents of Mars. The adventures that Aoleon and Gilbert are finding themselves in are crazy, entertaining, and fun. I know I have said it again and again but I will still keep saying it. The illustrations in this book are out of this world! They just jump off the pages of the book. They just add so much to the story.