Destiny's Revenge (Destiny Series Book 2)

By Nancy Straight

There was no reason for Lauren to be in a coma. Her physical injuries had healed, but she had been non-responsive for so long that her doctors told her family and Max to move on. She awoke to find her life in a shambles; the man she loved was gone, her friends had moved on with their lives, and her family was ripped apart by her accident. No one knew of the evil forces watching, waiting for her in the shadows, in the lonely corners, even in the eyes of those she loved. Lauren needed to reclaim her destiny, to get her life back; the last thing she ever expected was Destiny’s Revenge.

• Language: English
• Publisher: Nancy Straight
• Release date: Aug 2, 2011
• ISBN: 9781450788489

Nancy Straight

Nancy was born in Sioux City Iowa, left the cold of the Midwest in 1991 and only returns to see family in the summer time. She spent ten years traveling the world as a US Marine and settled in Moncks Corner, SC with her husband and two children.

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Chapter 1

All my visitors were gone. Now was the part of the day I hated the most. I had been comatose for two and a half years, and awake for less than a month. It isn’t like it’s portrayed in the movies or the crazy daytime television shows, where the person wakes up and everything is suddenly all roses. I didn’t have some new lease on life, determined to do good deeds and fix all the wrongs I had ever done.

I was terrified of what had happened to me and the fear that it could happen again. I was the only one who knew I hadn’t been in a coma - at least not a conventional coma. I had been held captive by something or by someone in my own head – disconnected from the world, disconnected from my own body. Everyone believed I’d been mauled by a bear. I knew better.

My doctor told me most people who awake from a coma don’t remember anything that happened to them. It was supposed to be like waking up from a really deep sleep. That isn’t at all how I felt. He also told me it’s extremely rare for someone to wake up after a year – I’d been down for over twice that long.

No one has been able to explain why I was in a coma, other than I had a brain injury. Once my physical injuries had healed, there was no real reason for me to still be unresponsive. Because I had been non-responsive for so long and they had no idea why, the doctor told my family I would never wake up. If I did, he said I would have long-term brain damage. He basically told my family to move on. What a jerk!

While I was locked up inside myself, my thoughts and memories consumed me. I couldn’t hear family or friends reading me books or talking to me, I couldn’t feel them holding my hand, brushing my hair, or even exercising my limbs – though I know they did. I didn’t respond to any reflex or pain tests – I just wasn’t there. I didn’t awake refreshed - I had escaped an endless blackness. It wasn’t like being in a dream, because at least with dreams there are images. I couldn’t see or feel anything.

I thought I was dead, suspended in some strange purgatory. I didn’t know what was going on other than I knew I wasn’t in heaven and thought maybe I was stuck in hell. I was alone with my thoughts for more than two years. I relived every major incident in my life without the sights or sounds that accompanied them. It was as if I were trapped, not alive but not dead. No light, no colors, no sounds - just nothingness.

I might still be there if it weren’t for Rewsna. Rewsna is this clairvoyant, telepathic, mind-reading woman who I met a month or so before my accident. I don’t know how to describe her. When I’ve been in extreme circumstances, I’ve heard her voice in my head. I don’t know exactly how she does it. When she first started talking to me in my head, I was really worried that I was crazy. Most people who hear voices are.

I have only seen her in person twice, both times on the same day. I was riding a city bus on my way to the mall when she introduced herself. She was able to tell me about my future and knew about things she couldn’t possibly have known. She wouldn’t let me follow her off the bus - she told me to Keep to my path. It turns out I was supposed to go to the mall and meet someone who needed my help.

I’m not sure why it was so important that I help the guy at the mall. My help consisted of getting him arrested, jailed under suspicion of murder, I bailed him out, and a couple weeks later someone killed him. For some reason it was vitally important that I save his life just so that he could be killed later. I don’t pretend to understand why – even after over two years of reliving the incident over and over again, the whole path thing still baffles me.

I used to try to make sense of it, but the only conclusion I had was: murder is a senseless act. The fact that some lives are pre-determined to be short made me feel powerless. Rewsna never gave me a straight answer to any of the questions I asked her. She was more like a fortuneteller in that respect. She always shared with me just enough information to get me paranoid but never gave me enough help or answers to satisfy my questions.

As I lay there in bed, I found myself with pangs of fear gripping me, threatening to rip my insides out. I had always been very strong, I wouldn’t say fearless, but I wouldn’t describe myself as overly cautious either. Oh sure, at some point when I was a little kid I’m sure I was scared of the boogie man, but since I was eight, I don’t remember being scared of much of anything.

Things have changed. I am in a room with all the lights on, terrified that as soon as I close my eyes, some idiot is going to come turn them off. I’m beyond afraid of the dark now, a better description is paralyzed of the dark. I hope it’s something that will pass.

The morning I woke up from my extended slumber, the daylight was everywhere – warm and all encompassing. The light from the window touched every surface in my room, and it was all so new and welcomed after my stretch in the dark. After a full day of every test the medical staff could perform and visits from nearly everyone I knew, I was exhausted. That night when a nurse came in to dim the lights in my room to help me sleep, I about had a melt-down. I don’t believe either one of us knew what to make of my reaction; needless to say they aren’t saving any money on the light bill around here with me.

I guess having been suspended in darkness for so long made me averse to the feeling again in any form. I used to be fine with my own company, now I craved people around me. I didn’t have to be the center of attention or anything, I just needed to know that I wasn’t alone.

When I was stuck somewhere between life and death, it was Rewsna’s voice that I could hear. I called to her, I told her I knew I was alive, and to my complete shock, she acknowledged that I was, and then helped me break free.

The doctors here are great, but they’re baffled by my extended coma, so they’ve done every test known to man. I can’t tell them what really happened, so I’m forced to endure test after test that shows up as inconclusive. Everyone believes that I was mauled by a bear on a camping trip. My body was torn up pretty badly, but it wasn’t a bear that did it to me. I don’t know what he was - he wasn’t an animal, although he looked it - he couldn’t have been human either.

I was camping with my boyfriend Max when something spooked the horses; one of them got loose and took off. He went after it, and this man-thing came into our campsite and attacked me. When Max came back, he phoned for help and a life-flight helicopter came and took me to a hospital.

All my injuries were treated, I just never regained consciousness. I guess they plugged me up to all kinds of machines, and every one of them said my brain activity was normal. They tried a few reflex tests, and it was as if my body had just shut down. After my injuries were healed and no one could wake me up, I was transferred here, to a nursing home, where I became the resident Sleeping Beauty. A little over three weeks ago, to everyone’s surprise, I woke up. Since then I’ve found out life was much the same for everyone I had left behind, except Max.

Max blamed himself for the bear attack, like he could have stopped it even if it had been a real bear. The doctors told him there was no reason for me to be in a coma, but because they couldn’t explain what caused it, they didn’t think I would ever wake up. Truthfully, without Rewsna answering me when I reached out to her, I might not have. Up until then all I really remember was being suspended. I don’t remember the supposed bear attack, but from what everyone keeps telling me, maybe it was better that I don’t.

It turns out that if you don’t use your arms or legs for a couple years, they stop working. The whole time I was out, someone was moving my arms and legs for me several times each day. Lucky for me that they did. I have control of everything, but today I spent nearly two hours in physical therapy working on my motor skills. The muscle atrophy is reversible, but having not used my limbs for so long – the work to get back up to a hundred percent is exhausting.

I like the physical therapist; her name is Rebecca and she is by far the coolest lady I’ve ever known. When she decided today’s program would require me gaining proficiency with a spoon and fork, she brought me mint chip ice cream and warm brownies. I don’t know how she knew this was my favorite, but it sure made for a great therapy session. I wanted to walk today between two parallel beams, but the muscles in my arms are too weak to support my weight, and my legs are closer to cooked spaghetti than appendages.

Rebecca had a pulley installed over my bed so I could work on my strength. As I looked around my empty room, I reached up and pulled on the bar a few times. My upper body seemed to be recovering more quickly than my lower body, and I was pleased that after three weeks I could use the pulley-bar for several repetitions.

I settled back on my bed and looked at my clock: it was ten p.m. I was approaching my fourth week awake with still no word from Max. My mom told me he couldn’t take it anymore, so a little over a year ago, he just left. Max had been a paramedic and decided that he would join the Navy and become a Corpsman. The last she had heard he was in Afghanistan. Geography was never my strong suit, but I don’t think there are any oceans in Afghanistan, so I’m not sure how he could be there if he was in the Navy. I asked if maybe she meant the Army, but she said no.

I closed my eyes, exhausted from the day, waiting for sleep to take me. My day started pretty early with doctors, nurses, and another new battery of tests; a couple hours later family and friends began arriving. The afternoon was full of visitors, more tests, and physical therapy. As evening began to encroach on the day, I knew I would be alone again soon. It’s funny how more animated your personality can become when you’re anxious for the people you care about not to leave you. I knew they all needed to get back to their lives, but I didn’t want any of them to go. I used to be so independent, now I felt a little like a basket case.

I began to drift off to sleep when Rewsna’s voice whispered in my head, "Lauren, I will see you tomorrow. Get your rest. We have much to talk about." Her message came in quiet, but clear. Her voice startled me for a second, but I could hear the echo of her words in my mind as I drifted off to a peaceful sleep.

Chapter 2

I awoke to a woman sitting at the edge of my bed. She was as still as a mannequin, as if posed as a pseudo visitor. My dreams had been so vivid that I had startled myself awake several times throughout the night, so I wanted to be sure I wasn’t still dreaming. Once I realized who it was sitting there so calmly, I nearly jumped out of my skin. I reached over and grabbed her hand, squeezing it hard. Her eyes bulged, a little like a cartoon character; my reaction had clearly startled her.

She eyed me closely, Lauren, you look terrible.

My first response to anyone was always sarcasm, I have no intention of going back to working on my beauty sleep, so you’ll just have to get used to this.

Her tone didn’t waiver with my attempt at humor, How do you feel?

I had been asked this same question hundreds of times, but hearing it from Rewsna made me not want to answer with my usual, fine, good, great.

I took a deep breath; she was my ray of hope, my light in the dark. How fair would it be to completely unload on her? I owed her my life. Did she know that if it weren’t for her I would still be lost somewhere between life and death? I feel like I lost two years of my life. I feel like I lost two years of everyone’s lives. My body’s shriveled up to almost nothing, I can’t walk, I can’t feed myself without a bib, and I have no idea where Max is. I wasn’t looking for sympathy, but I needed to say it out loud and in doing so I could feel the emotion welling up in my eyes begging to be released. "I don’t know whether to be thrilled that I’m alive, pissed off that I lost over two years of my life, or just thankful to be out of the dark.

She must have known that this was an answer I needed to give someone. She patted my hand, I know, Lauren, I know.

We sat in silence for a short while. Previously, when we were silent on the outside, she and I were carrying on a conversation telepathically, but today her mind was not filled with questions or advice of any kind. I finally broke the silence with, Thank you, Rewsna. If it weren’t for you, I would still be locked up inside myself.

She nodded understandingly. I was surprised you were able to summon me at all. He had you so tight in his grips that no one had been able to reach you.

Cautiously I asked, "Who was he?" The curiosity of what exactly had happened to me had been eating at me since I woke up. Rewsna was the first visitor who wasn’t so preoccupied with the fact that I was awake, and she may be the only person on earth who could give me any answers at all.

"Not who, Lauren, the correct question is, what was he."

I waited for her to answer as she sat on the bed staring off into the distance. Finally she shared, We have had many names for his kind over the years. The Council thought his species had been obliterated decades ago. The one that found you was unknown to us. We couldn’t see him until he had taken you. You must know that I would have prepared you had I known it was a possibility.

Prepared me? You mean this wasn’t some random attack? But what was he?

He doesn’t have a real name because there is no creature in folklore or mythology that you would have heard of. Well before my time, the Council determined this was a creature they did not wish for humans to know about. Every writing, hieroglyph, story, that could have been passed down from one generation to the other was destroyed. The Council had attempted to erase the Beast from existence. You, Lauren, are the only one outside of the Council that has ever freed yourself from one. It is a dangerous beast that can camouflage himself as human, shifting his shape into nearly any animal he chooses, feeding on others’ misery until he completely extinguishes them.

So this monster that just happened to find me in the middle of nowhere – you are saying he was feeding on me?

Not physically, but he fed on your life force - that which makes you who you are, your soul. He dimmed yours badly for a period. The entire Council came to your side to try to reach you, but you were lost in him. The thought was that our combined abilities all touching your lifeless body might have been able to draw you from him. We were disheartened to know that our combined strength could not overpower his hold on you. He had lain dormant for so long that we foolishly thought his kind was extinct; he was gaining strength, becoming more powerful than those of us who should have been able to come to your aid.

She had to have anticipated my question, but I asked it anyway, Why me?

Because of your potential, Lauren. He targeted you because he too sees what you are capable of, as well as your untapped potential.

Questions started forming in my mind, and I could see her reaction as she heard them.

She began answering before I was able to speak them aloud. The Council has had many names over the years. We do not interfere with the population. We do not wish to impact anyone’s destiny, as lives are mapped, and challenges are selected from each person’s beginning. Although some people select very difficult lives, many ultimately require a small nudge in the right direction. That is where we come in. Many times we are that voice of reason, or a conscience when someone has to choose a path for their life. We have been called guardian angels, we are seen as kind strangers, we have been many things to many people.

So you are my guardian angel? Astonished at the thought, I was disappointed to see her shake her head.

"Lauren, it is not like that. I do not watch over you per se. But an evil so vile attacked you that it altered your course in life. It was not supposed to exist, it was not supposed to attack you. Because the Council was unaware of the Beast’s existence, it was allowed to feed from you and change your path. I will stay with you and watch you, not because I have wings or have been sent from anywhere – I am with you because we cannot permit that evil to attack again. It was unsuccessful in extinguishing you – it views you now as a threat, rather than an accomplishment. I warn you, Lauren, the Beast will return."

Horror gripped me from the inside out. My stomach knotted as her words sunk in, He’s coming back for me?

Chapter 3

Rewsna nodded. This time you will be prepared; this time you will be ready. The Beast will not be able to take you by surprise again, and when he faces you head on, you will have the power of the Council supporting you." Her words of encouragement did nothing to unknot the fear I felt. She must have felt now was not the right time to go into the details of exactly how. She had given me enough of a warning that I knew the hardest part was far from over.

Rewsna and I spent the rest of her visit on subjects that were far less frightening. We talked about the weather, about my rehabilitation, about stocks and bonds (her idea, not mine). We talked about everything under the sun except this evil Beast. Being clairvoyant must be a real asset because as soon as our conversation changed from general topics to impending doom, she must have known I was ready to shut down. She quickly changed the subject to nothing important and kept on talking.

It isn’t that I wasn’t interested in this beast thing - I think it was just too much to process. She avoided the whole subject of Max, too. It isn’t like she didn’t know about him. She knew all about him before we ever met: she knew how he used to visit me in my dreams telling me about our destiny together. But having now been awake for weeks with no word from Max, I was appreciative that she avoided mention of him.

Shortly after Rewsna departed, my friend Rachael stopped by to see me. My brother Steve made an appearance on his way home from work. Seth stopped by with a vase full of flowers. Conversation with each of them was easy, and they were as insightful as Rewsna by not asking if I’d heard from Max yet.

The next morning I looked at my wheelchair and started to reach for it when it hit me, it wouldn’t do me any good, and I wouldn’t get out of here any faster by taking it easy. I shoved the wheelchair out of the way and reached for the walker that was placed on the other side. Balancing the best that I could with part of my weight on the table, I extended my arm and pulled the walker to me. Up until now I had only used it a few times just to steady myself from the wheelchair to the parallel bars. Today was a new day. I was going to see Max soon, really see him – not some phony dream. When I did, I would be on my own two legs. I stood up from my bed and started making my way out of my room. I got as far as the doorway and could see a chair ten feet down the hall. Though my legs ached both from doing nothing for a couple years and from the physical therapy I’d been going through, I was sure I could shuffle through the ache.

I made it to the chair and sat down. Collapsed into the chair might be a better description. The blood rushing to my feet was an awkward sensation. There were so many things, little things that I had taken for granted, I actually found myself pleased with this minor accomplishment. I sat in the chair for at least ten minutes. Looking further down the hall and another twenty feet away set an identical chair to the one I was seated in. Summoning all the strength I had, I pulled myself up from the chair so I was upright behind my walker again. The shuffling of my feet wouldn’t look like a major achievement to most, but I was walking, I was moving on my own, and I didn’t need anyone’s help. I made it to that second chair and was starting to feel a little cocky, looking for another chair that might be strategically placed a little further down. When I didn’t find one, I decided not to risk it and sat down for another breather.

This repetition took place all the way until I reached the dining area. I looked at the clock on the wall: 7:40. It had taken me over thirty minutes to walk a little over a hundred feet. This didn’t bother me a bit when compared to the distance I had walked over the last two years. As I sat at the dining table, a staff member asked what I would like for breakfast.

A voice to my left warned, Don’t get the sausage biscuit. It tastes like leather, and you’ll need a laxative to get it out.

The dining facility staff member glared at the man’s advice, but I laughed. She must be responsible for more than just getting the residents’ food from the kitchen. Enjoying this man’s humor, I asked, What do you recommend?

McDonalds’ down the street, but if we left now I don’t think either one of us could make it there before lunch.

This guy was a riot. I guess once you hit a certain age you just speak your mind

Reviews for Destiny's Revenge (Destiny Series Book 2)

[itsbookishme · Rating: 5 out of 5 stars]

I really hope things get better for Lauren and Max's relationship, I've never seen a PNR couple have so much obstacles keeping them apart. I don't even think they spent an entire six months together since meeting approximately three years ago. That being said, I really enjoyed Destiny's Revenge as much as or possibly more than Meeting Destiny. The story was fast paced and there was always something taking place. Lauren and Max faced even greater roadblocks to their ultimate destiny. Can't wait for the next book.

[noetical · Rating: 5 out of 5 stars]

I definitely like the second book more than the first as the characters develop and grow. As the story evolves, so does the theme as the author adds new and intriguing complexities to the struggle between good and evil. As such, she requires us to reevaluate which characters are good and which are evil...in fact, we begin to realize that the question of who and what is evil may not even be the most important...or one with an answer.

[gigisiriereads · Rating: 5 out of 5 stars]

I really hope things get better for Lauren and Max's relationship, I've never seen a PNR couple have so much obstacles keeping them apart. I don't even think they spent an entire six months together since meeting approximately three years ago. That being said, I really enjoyed Destiny's Revenge as much as or possibly more than Meeting Destiny. The story was fast paced and there was always something taking place. Lauren and Max faced even greater roadblocks to their ultimate destiny. Can't wait for the next book.