Thanks to current patrons Leah Joy Espinoza and Michelle Coleman who have edited their memberships to one of the new tiers. They will both get the limited edition sticker and entry to the drawing for the Goody bag that includes a 2024 Passion Planner and coaching with me, along with a couple of other fun things. Thank you to our existing patrons for believing in our work offline and here in the podcast.  This podcast is sponsored by our patrons at Patreon.com/valerieihsan. Become a patron of the arts at Patreon.com/valerieihsan.  Patreon.com/strangeairstories for short stories in the paranormal mystery genre Patron comment: Both were great sessions! Thank you!!! Announcements:  Early Bird registration is now for the 2024 Writer Craft Writing Retreat, at this point, there is only five private tickets left and three shared tickets. We'll likely sell out again. I'm in a new anthology by Tsunami Press with my essay "Eye Contact." It's in stores now. You can order at http://www.tsunamibooks.org/shop/pre-order-tsunami-press-first-anthology with free shipping in the U.S. or order wherever books are sold. Preorder of Season of the Shadow up now. (Erick's new title.) Nov 30th.   I'M READING:  Woman in Cabin 10 by Ruth Ware Catching the Big Fish by David Lynch Starling House by Alix E. Harrow Harness: A Systemic Approach: Guaranteed to Revolutionize Your Coaching by Tess Cope Up Next: What's a Poor Girl to Do?: Prostitution in Mid-Nineteenth Century America by Elizabeth A. Topping Soiled Doves: Prostitution in the the Early West by Anne Seagraves Frog Music by Emma Donoghue Ma and Me by Putsana Reang Erick's Reading:  Hidden Pictures by Jason Rekulak The Singer's Gun by Emily St. John Mandel https://www.oldgodsofappalachia.com podcast KimBoo is reading:  History of the Book (nonfiction), Master and Commander (audiobook), Family Secrets (podcast) SHOW NOTES: Find KimBoo on Ream and her website,  House of York.  1000-2000 words per episode/installment (but doesn't matter) post one a week or every two weeks 5000-10000 once a month up to six months Find a rhythm. Hard things about serial writing (beware list): don't forget the long story arc (at least lurking in the background) Process: release in installments (as a consumer it's exciting) Go back the long arc in revision. What part does this season meet in the long arc? Story beats  Serial expectations Commitment: you can wrap it up and rush the ending if you need to--as long as know the long arc. (Maybe even within 2-5 episodes) novel=season The Wandering Inn (longest(?) running serial) Spreadsheet breaks down long arcs and season arcs. Link: https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1E6I6Z4TwKgVtUTaid28J2ng_tSxU0HjauV9OievkcTE/edit?usp=sharing Name of book coming out: By the Seat of Your Pants: Using the Discovery Writing Technique (in January 2024) Unstoppable Storyteller (current nonfiction available from KimBoo York) Tip: Character Motivation (ask the bigger question, what's the critical thing that drives the story's long arc) What makes a story exciting? Analyzing what makes a good long writing series (television, multiple seasons with structure, story arcs are nested = key) long story arc (hero's journey), season arc nested and have own structure (three act structure) when season ends, the long story is not resolved. Installment arcs (like a chapter in a book); cliff hangers are not necessary if you've done a good job with the long arc. When one ends, marry it up with a long arc beat. Lord of the Rings classic (side quests) Transmigrated Teri on Ream (but some on Substack). The Queen's Eiry is being serialized right now. (On Wattpad, romance) A serial story designed to be very long and complex. A different format. Different consumers of art: little bit vs big chunks Hit multiple markets. Serial fiction prior to Vella? LiveJournal, Archive of our Own, (for fan fiction) Options now: Radish, Ream, Patreon, Vella, etc.