Alex and Nick continue the 2020 Paper Team Mentorship with mentee Ben Warner, and the revised draft of his drama pilot THE PIRATE KING.

Step five of the process: revising the first draft of the original pilot.

We share our thoughts on Ben's revised draft.

Content
2020 Mentorship recap (00:00:45)
Discussion of "The Pirate King" revised draft (00:02:05)

Links
"The Pirate King" revised draft
2020 Paper Team Mentorship I - "The Pirate King" Overview (PT190)
2020 Paper Team Mentorship I - Ben's Update
2020 Paper Team Mentorship II - "The Pirate King" Beat Sheet (PT193)
2020 Paper Team Mentorship II - Ben's Update
2020 Paper Team Mentorship III – “The Pirate King” Outline (PT198)
2020 Paper Team Mentorship III - Ben's Update
2020 Paper Team Mentorship IV - "The Pirate King" First Draft (PT201)
2020 Paper Team Mentorship IV - Ben's Update


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