Words that Sell, Revised and Expanded Edition: The Thesaurus to Help You Promote Your Products, Services, and Ideas
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More than 6,000 words and phrases that make the difference between "yadda-yadda-yadda" and copy that sells
Looking for a better way to say "authentic?" Words That Sell gives you 57 alternatives. How about "appealing?" Take your pick from 76 synonyms. You'll even find more than 100 variations on "exciting." Fully updated and expanded, this edition of the copywriting classic is packed with inspiration-on-demand for busy professionals who need to win customers--by mail, online, or in person.
- More than 75 lists of powerful and persuasive words and phrases, including 21 new lists for this edition
- Cross-referencing of categories to jump-start creative thinking
- A crash course in basic copywriting techniques
- Helpful lists of commonly misspelled words, confusing words, pretentious phrases to avoid, and more
Roget's is fine for writing term papers and letters to the editor, but when it comes to the business of writing copy that translates into sales, there is no substitute for Words That Sell.
Find the perfect words and phrases to win over customers
Grabbers that get attention:
No-risk offer * One day only! * No strings attached! * What have you got to lose? * All the right ingredients * Inside information * Do you enjoy...? * Leap into...
Descriptions and benefits that create appeal:
Irresistible * winning * zesty * huggable * satisfying * You'll fall in love with...* Your ticket to... * king-size * Gives you the power * baby-soft *
Clinchers to win over your customer:
Reap the benefits today * Don't miss out! * No risk now, no risk later! * You can do it!* You be the judge * Send for our free catalog * 100% satisfaction guarantee
Special strategies that seal the deal:
Five-star quality * You're worth it * Don't fall for... * We make life easier * You're one of a select few... * discriminating * Your thoughtful gift
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Words that Sell, Revised and Expanded Edition - Richard Bayan
WORDS THAT SELL
MORE THAN 6,000 ENTRIES TO HELP YOU PROMOTE YOUR PRODUCTS, SERVICES, AND IDEAS
REVISED AND EXPANDED EDITION
RICHARD BAYAN
Copyright © 2006 by Richard Bayan. All rights reserved. Except as permitted under the United States Copyright Act of 1976, no part of this publication may be reproduced or distributed in any form or by any means, or stored in a database or retrieval system, without the prior written permission of the publisher.
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CONTENTS
Preface/Acknowledgments
Introduction to the Second Edition
How to Use This Book
A Crash Course in Copywriting
Categories of Copy
Part 1 Grabbers
Teasers
Free/Prize
Sale/Discount
Trial Offer/No Obligation
Heads and Slogans
Salutations and Invitations
Opening with a Question
Opening with a Statement
Opening with a Challenge
Snappy Transitions
All-Purpose Grabbers
Part 2 Descriptions and Benefits
Appealing
Authentic
Belonging/Membership
Big/Many
Choice/Control
Comfortable
Competitive
Complete/Thorough
Convenient
Distinguished/Status
Durable/Solid
Easy
Exciting/Stimulating
Experienced/Expert
Fabulous
Fast
Fresh/Wholesome
Fun/Cheerful
Gift
Good-Looking
Healthful
Honest
Improved
Indispensable
Informative
Luxurious
Made
Money-Making
Money-Saving
New/Advanced
Plain/Natural
Pleasure/Satisfaction
Popular
Powerful
Reliable
Results/Performance
Romantic
Security/Peace of Mind
Self-Improvement
Sensory Qualities
Service/Help
Sexy
Small/Less
Sophisticated/Smart
Stylish
Suitable
Superior
Timely
Traditional/Classic
Unusual
Useful/Practical
Valuable
Part 3 Clinchers
Persuading Your Audience
Minimizing Risk
The Moment of Decision
The Call to Action
The P.S.
The Lift Note
Guarantees
Order Information
Following Through
Part 4 Special Strategies
Enhancing Your Company’s Image
Justifying a High Price
Knocking the Competition
Using Demographics to Impress
Flattering the Reader
Selling Yourself: Personal Traits
Selling Yourself: Achievements
Selling Your Ideas
Appendix
Puffspeak
—And Its Alternative
Wordy Expressions
Commonly Misspelled Words
Commonly Confused Words
Further Reading
Key Word Index
PREFACE
Like magicians with their props or fishermen with their time-tested lures, advertising copywriters rely upon a handy assortment of contrivances for seducing an audience. A copywriter’s tools are words, and the most effective tools are words that sell. Infallible adjectives like luxurious and irresistible. Ageless phrases like a lifetime of satisfaction and right at your fingertips. And, of course, that sturdy old standard, FREE!
This volume represents an attempt to gather the most potent of these words and phrases into a single sourcebook. To compile this material, I rummaged through mountainous stacks of magazines, newspapers, direct-mail packages, and catalogs. I kept an ear open for compelling phrases that I heard over the radio and on television. I checked my e-mail for the occasional gold nugget embedded in the spam. I raided my own copy files, consulted more than one thesaurus, and, after organizing the entries into lists, added still more words and phrases as they came to mind. I rejected those entries that seemed to fall flat in print, and I shunned any slogans that were closely identified with specific products.
Think of this book as your personal magic kit—or, if you prefer, a bottomless tackle box filled with glittering lures. Use it whenever you require inspiration on short notice. Browse through its lists at leisure to expand your repertoire. With this book at your side, you’ll be able to go straight to the words and phrases that suit your needs. Instead of groping for words, your mind will be free to focus on the real task of advertising and other promotional writing: shaping a message that generates an enthusiastic response from your audience.
ACKNOWLEDGMENTS
During my formative years as an advertising copywriter, I thought it might be a wise idea to compile a notebook of words and phrases to help me in my work. I toyed with the notion and let it pass.
Then a strange thing happened: somebody offered to pay me for compiling such a notebook. Motivated by the prospect of fame and riches, I set to work, produced a boxful of note cards, and emerged with the first edition of this book (which I finally did get to use in my work).
Roughly 20 years later, my publisher approached me about creating an updated edition of Words That Sell. I would like to thank the people who helped make this new and improved
edition a reality: my editor, Monica Bentley, who offered me this project and remained gracious even through the deadline crunch; Pattie Amoroso, the kind of editing supervisor with whom every writer hopes to work; copyeditor Alice Manning and proofreader Frances Koblin, for their scrupulous attention to detail; production supervisor Cheryl Hudson, who helped turn a stack of pages into a handsome book; LaShae Ortiz, who designed the eye-catching cover; and marketing manager Seth Morris, with whose help (and a little luck) this edition of Words That Sell will reach even more readers than its predecessor.
I would also like to thank my wife, Anne, for her priceless love and support, and for letting me spread this project over the entire surface of our dining room table for nearly three months. Our son, Guy, who was a toddler when I compiled this edition, deserves a fatherly nod simply for being his delightful self.
I should also acknowledge, once again, all those nameless writers of advertisements, brochures, catalogs, and sales letters whose collective opus furnished me with so much of my raw material. Your work might not carry a byline, but it doesn’t go unnoticed or unappreciated.
INTRODUCTION TO THE SECOND EDITION
Those of us who write reference books enjoy a special privilege denied to practitioners of fiction. Unlike novelists and short story writers, we’re free to keep revising and improving our work after it has made its debut in print.
Just try to imagine a second edition of David Copperfield or