Screamcatcher: Web World

By Christy J. Breedlove

When seventeen-year-old Jory Pike cannot shake the hellish nightmares of her parent’s deaths, she turns to an old family heirloom, a dream catcher. Even though she’s half blood Chippewa, Jory thinks old Indian lore is so yesterday, but she’s willing to give it a try. However, the dream catcher has had its fill of nightmares from an ancient and violent past. After a sleepover party, and during one of Jory’s most horrific dream episodes, the dream catcher implodes, sucking Jory and her three friends into its own world of trapped nightmares. They’re in an alternate universe—locked inside of an insane web world. How can they find the center of the web, where all good things are allowed to pass?

• Language: English
• Publisher: Melange Books, LLC
• Release date: Apr 30, 2019
• ISBN: 9781680467499

Christy J. Breedlove

Chris Stevenson, writing as Christy Breedlove, originally born in California, and moved to Sylvania, Alabama in 2009. His occupations have included newspaper reporter, front-line mechanic and federal police officer. He has been writing off and on for 36 years, having officially published books beginning in 1988. Today he writes science fiction, fantasy, paranormal romance, young adult, adult thrillers and horror. He has a total of 10 titles appearing on Amazon. He was a finalist in the L. Ron. Hubbard Writers of the Future contest, and just recently took the first place grand prize in a YA novel writing contest. He writes the popular blog, Guerrilla Warfare for Writers (special weapons and tactics), hoping to inform and educate writers all over the world about the high points and pitfalls of publishing.

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Chapter One

I'm late! Jorlene Pike swung the front door open and leaped out of her apartment only to collide with a body. Their faces met with a hard clack, doubling her over in pain. Her purse slipped from her shoulder and hit the porch deck.

She bent to pick it up; the other figure also crouched and fumbled for it. She knew right then it was Choice Daniels. Another unexpected visit. I’d like to make time right now, but I can’t.

Jethus, Choice, if you were any closer to my door… she picked up the purse and threw her arm into the strap ...you would hass been made of wood. Her jaw hurt. She had some trouble forming words. Were you trying to thspy on me through the peephole? She took quick inventory of her teeth with her tongue—all were there, but her chewing gum was missing.

Choice straightened, fingering his jaw. If you were paying attention, you would have noticed I was just getting ready to knock. How come you’re blasting out of here so fast anyway?

She tossed her hair to the side and annunciated.I work, remember? And right now I’m late.

Oh, yeah. He looked at his watch. "You are late. We can take my bike and get you there faster."

She had no desire to straddle the saddle on his motorcycle at this time in the morning when the streets were wet. She’d been on the back of it before and it wasn’t too bad, her arms clasped tightly around his hard body—the scent of his neck, when pressing her face into it. There you go again.

Reminding me.

Marching past him, she headed for her Jeep Cherokee at the curb. As she dug in her purse for her keys, Choice’s plodding steps followed her.

Okay, you’re late, he said. But you owe me because you said you were going to let me spend the day at your grandpa’s shop. That’s why I stopped by. I have to get something for my brother’s birthday, so what better place to do it than White Feather’s Novelty Store?

She hesitated for a beat then continued on to the driver’s door of the Cherokee.

Before she could stick the key in the door, Choice had his hand on the handle. He pulled it a couple of times. Now he’s putting on the chivalry act.

Of course, the door wouldn’t open.

She waggled the keys at him and arched an eyebrow.

Aw, c’mon. Won't you even think about it?

There's nothing to think about, she said, unlocking the door.

If you say so. With a mischievous smile, he licked his lips. He gazed at her and sniffed. "Is this yours?"

Look, just…. She winced. He had a smear of cherry flavored lipstick on his upper lip. Impact transfer. She pulled the door open. Wipe your mouth off. You’re wearing me.

He rolled his tongue over his lips. It tastes mighty fine since I know where it came from. Sure you don’t need any company?

She ignored the question as she stepped in and shut the door. A twist of the ignition key and the car hummed to life. She looked back at him. Choice stood in the middle of the street, a look of abandonment plastered across his face. He looked pathetic, like a stray cat peeking up from the bottom of a cardboard box. It wasn’t that he didn’t pass in the looks department. He had a hunky body and a chiseled face, but he also had a fourteen-year-old mind hardwired into an eighteen-year-old body. And when it came to chasing after Jorlene Jory Pike—as he had for the last three years—Choice sorely lacked in the dignity department, much less the romance department where he had no more finesse than a tornado hurtling through a trailer park.

She buzzed the window down. Do you have any money, Choice?

"A hundred bucks. I’ve been slinging gravel for my uncle the last three days. You think I’m kidding? I told you I’d buy something."

It’s not that you have to buy anything. I was hoping you’d found a real job. She checked her dash clock. Ugh, now I’m really late. All right. Get in!

She unlocked the passenger door. After he fastened his seatbelt, she threw the car into drive and flicked on the wipers.

Out of the corner of her eye, she watched him study every item in her car—the candy wrappers in the center console, the crack in the dash panel, the small disco globe swinging from the rearview mirror. It wasn’t the first time he’d been in her Jeep, but he always noticed those little things. On other occasions, he’d used them as conversation pieces, just to start a dialogue. He was sweet and endearing at times, but he could wear on her nerves.

Got some new CDs, eh? He absently fingered a few plastic cases. Still having the nightmares?

Uh, yeah. The question surprised her as they hadn't talked about it for a while. I had a whopper last night. I didn’t really fall asleep until an hour before the alarm went off. That’s why I’m running late.

I could tell. Your eyes are still red from crying. You can always talk about it if you want, but if you don’t feel like it, just remember, time heals.

Yeah right. Time was sure having a hard time healing the sudden death of her parents. It had been thirty-four days and twelve hours since her parents’ car took a too-wide turn on Cloud’s Reach Pass and plummeted over the cliff edge. It had made no difference that her dad had been trying to get home for an anniversary party that he and Jory’s mother had planned for months. They’d never made it.

Jory screwed up her face, thinking about it. It’s like a really good film that got mixed up in the editing department at some studio, she said.

What is?

Everything. It's like somebody cut out a really sweet section of the story and put in a horror scene. She sniffled and then blinked back a tear. Jesus, here I go again.

Yeah…closure takes a long time.

She bit her lip. "I hate that word. Don’t ever say that word to me again."

Why?

Because it's not true.

Albert Pike’s White Feather Novelty Store was a single-story log cabin building that sat on a quarter acre flanked by multiple-story glass office buildings. It gave the impression that the store had been shoe-horned onto the property. Red geraniums planted in antique horse troughs sat on the long porch, while red and yellow wagon wheels leaned against rickety porch beams.

They arrived in front of the store and Jory parked at the curb. She locked the Jeep and strode up to the double-glass front doors, primping in her reflection before she swung one open for Choice, letting him take the lead. Once inside, she passed through a swinging door to step behind a glass display counter that stretched from the front of the shop to the rear. After stashing her purse inside a small cupboard behind the counter, she looked around for her grandfather.

Her gaze fell on her unplanned guest. You are so sweet, but insufferable.

Choice stood with his feet bolted to the main aisle where he had stopped, awestruck. Much of the inventory consisted of Native American tourist brick-a-brac—toys, apparel, books, posters, blankets, boots and moccasins. A small tack wall, holding some saddles, took up the rear corner of the shop. Hygiene items, camera film, medicines, snack food, tanning lotion and maps occupied the first aisle at the front of the store. Moving toward the rear of the shop, items got progressively older and more Indian in nature and craftsmanship. Dozens of quart and gallon jars of multicolored sand sat in neat rows supported by pine shelves. Potions and herbs took up small niches. All of the jewelry and semi-precious stones sat in neat rows inside the floor-mounted glass counters. She couldn't guess what Choice was thinking as his eyes panned back and forth, taking in all the sights. She’d seen it all dozens of times and never told him of its existence. She didn’t need a stalker at work.

This place is awesome! he finally said. Where’s your granddad?

He’s probably in the backroom. You don’t have to stand there. Check out the inventory if you want.

Choice walked off toward the rear of the shop, his focus pegged on an archery and slingshot rack.

Jory heard the faint noise of a toilet flushing in the back room. A moment later, Albert White Feather Pike stepped out into the counter aisle. His small, black eyes caught sight of Jory, prompting him to rush to her, which was still slow motion. She adored the way his arms and legs would scissor in sync, making him look like a tiny windup soldier. She met him halfway—as she had done for the past six months—and put her arms around him in a gentle embrace. Her chin rested on the wispy snow-white hair atop his head.

It is wonderful to see you again, Granddaughter, he said against her shoulder. I have fresh coffee in the backroom and I have already dusted the shelves.

Her grandfather always opened the shop for her, sometimes very early in the morning. He would read and wait for her arrival, like an expectant child waiting for a surprise toy. Since her parents had died, his need to be with her had intensified. Although he never mentioned the subject of her parents passing, he always waited for her to express any pains or emotions about it. He had a good ear and wise advice.

She sighed. The wild black cherry tea hasn't helped much. Whenever the vision comes, I jerk awake and imagine the scene all over again.

Albert pulled back from her and placed his gnarled hands on her shoulders. Perhaps the wild lettuce will let you remain in slumber through the dark spirit passage.

Grandfather, I don’t think the herbal medicines are working. Maybe this is something that has to pass with time.

Choice clopped up to the counter. That’s what I was trying to tell her. Closure takes time.

What did I tell you about that word?

I was just agreeing with you. Choice looked at the small man. It’s nice to meet you, Mr. Pike. I’ve seen you before at one of Jory’s stage plays at our high school about a year ago, but we weren’t introduced. He gave Jory an annoyed look. I’m Choice Daniels. Jory invited me to help out today. He waved his hand, gesturing at the store. This shop is dope, and I mean that in a good way. That’s an awesome long bow you have in the corner.

Albert looked him up and down. It was one of my own when I was a young man such as you. So you are the boyfriend of my granddaughter. I cannot see a tribe in your face, since your eyes are like the sky on a cloudless day.

He’s not exactly a boyfriend, said Jory. Just a friend. She felt awkward saying it.

I’m black Irish, said Choice. At least that’s what my parents tell me. Jory and I just hang together.

Hmmm…you are black, you hang, and you are Irish, said Albert. That must be a good thing, and we could talk about that all day. But to other matters… He took Jory’s hand and pulled her down the counter aisle until they arrived at a large, black velvet board screwed to the wall. Two dozen webbed hoops hung on tiny hooks, their bottom portions trailing feathers and stringed beads. Some of the hoops were circular, while others had teardrop-shapes. Of course, Jory knew that these were the dream catchers, and was familiar with some of the tribal legends associated with each variation. Albert pointed to the board and began to explain. Choice, who had followed them, sidled up to the counter to listen.

It is said that Iktomi, the great trickster and searcher of wisdom, appeared to an old spiritual leader in the form of a spider. Iktomi, the spider, picked up the elder’s willow hoop, which had feathers, horsehair and beads on it and began to spin a web. He spoke to the elder about the cycles of life and the many forces—some good and some bad—and how it was important to listen to the clean, good forces and to avoid the darker ones that could hurt and lead you astray.

The big spider was the teacher, then? asked Choice.

Jory rolled her eyes, having heard the legend before.

Albert’s eyes became slits. Yes. When Iktomi finished the web, he returned it to the elder and said, ‘The web is a perfect circle with a hole in the middle. All of the bad forces, visions and dreams enter onto the web where they are trapped and held. All of the good forces find their way into the center and slip through, to travel down the feather and bead path, arriving upon the sleeper. If you believe in the Great Spirit, the web will filter your visions and give you pleasant dreams. The bad ones will never pass.’

But, Grandfather, said Jory, the dream catcher was used for babies and small children to comfort them. They were used above cradleboards.

Albert seemed not to have heard her words, having focused on Choice. And when the sun rose the next morning it would wash all of the bad spirits from the catcher, cleansing it for another sleep cycle. It was always made to fall apart and wither after years of use so that it would never be filled up with the dark things.

Damn, said Choice. What’s it made of? Little sticks and strings?

"They were made for adults too, said Albert, looking at Jory. The hoop is made from the twigs of the red willow, formed and dried. It is woven with the thread from the stalk of the stinging nettle. The very old ones have sinew for web. The beads are a decoration, and only one gemstone is used to show that there is only one creator in the web of life. Long ago, the government of this country outlawed the use of real eagle feathers, so most are made from feathers of other birds."

Choice nodded and waved his hand at the board. Then they’re just copies?

Not these, said Albert. I made many of them as a youth when no such law existed.

You’ve got the real deal then, said Choice, his eyes roaming over the board until he looked up toward the ceiling and saw an enormous dream catcher hanging from a rafter. Jory had seen it before. It was as large as a basketball hoop, trailing long, elegant feathers. But it appeared that it hadn’t been cleaned or dusted, which gave it a brittle, antique appearance. It looked like thick strings of gut or leather had been used to fashion the web. A few talons and claws hung from individual strands, a marked difference from the construction of the others.

Where did that one come from? asked Choice, indicating the large catcher with the flick of his eyes.

Albert steadied himself with a hand on the counter to look up, his voice a mystic whisper. It is the oldest one, the one passed down from the ages, from the time just after the great turtle. It was not meant to be used, but only copied. It is the one that carries the design for all to learn from…the one you would say is the…I have not the word for it.

The prototype, said Choice. The original.

Yes, said Albert. It was considered a treasured heirloom. I cannot say whether it was used to capture the bad spirits or not or whose hands and tribe it passed from. I only know it is the greatest grandfather of them all. It represents all the nations of all the human beings.

Albert lifted one of the smaller dream catchers from the board with delicate fingers and extended it to Jory. Granddaughter, I make this a gift to you. May you find protection in it with the blessings of all our ancestors. It will drive the devil spirit from your thoughts and give you peace.

Jory gave him an endearing smile. It’s really generous, and it’s not that I don’t appreciate the offer. But, Grandfather, you have to understand that the ways and teachings of the old ones are so very lost in today’s culture. I don’t think I have the proper faith to make it work.

Albert grunted. You are saying it is an embarrassment to carry the blood of your family tribe and you find suspicion with things that are held dear and sacred. He glanced at Choice. It is a shame that the tribal youth of today—the Ojibway or Chippewa—have no time for the chants and songs, nor do they understand the words in the old stories.

Choice nodded.

Albert looked at the large, front panel windows and out into the street. This is an age of bending metal, cutting down the trees of the forest, fouling the waters and blackening the earth with soot and chemicals. The sound of the flute song and drums has disappeared, along with the dances and animal pantomimes. Today the music is born of electric violence and its words are lost in savage mutterings and howls. The world—the great circle upon which all creatures great and small live—is an angry, dying spirit. He looked back at Jory. That is the today you speak of, precious granddaughter. You have lost touch with your origins. The spirit cries out for your return. You have only to give heed to that calling. It’s never left you.

"Well, you’ve got me convinced, said Choice and gazed at Jory with soft eyes. You owe it to yourself, girl. You should try this out. Nothing else has been working for you. And your granddad’s right. You are Chippewa, and a real one at that."

You see, said Albert. Even a black Irish man can understand it.

She felt like she was being tag-teamed. It was true that both of them had her best interests at heart, but what would she gain by sleeping under a flimsy tourist charm designed to trap nightmares? This was the twenty-first century—not the Black Hills a hundred and fifty years ago. Yet she felt she could at least compromise.

I suppose so, she said and extended her hand to take the dream catcher.

Wait! Choice said, placing a hand on her wrist. He looked at her grandfather. Mr. White Feather Pike…I have an idea that we might see eye-to-eye on. I have a proposition for you that involves taking care of this problem once and for all. Maybe we can go to your back room and talk about it?

Albert cocked his head. If it involves the welfare of my granddaughter, then I am willing to listen.

Oh, it does.

Jory watched, awestruck as Choice hiked up his leg and slid over the counter, landing next to her grandfather. Her grandfather seemed neither surprised nor angered by the display. The two walked to the backroom and disappeared behind the door. A latch fastened. She had a feeling that whatever those two were up to was bound to have her reaching for Tums or aspirin for the rest of the day.

I’m still upset with you, Jory said as she put her key into her apartment door. You lied to me. Well, what else could she say? He’d played the sympathy card to the hilt and now she

Reviews for Screamcatcher

[bibliodiction · Rating: 5 out of 5 stars]

I have so many thoughts about this book I don’t know where to start…

First – I love this story. I love the complex spin on something most people think of as a novelty from Native American culture. I love the pacing – sounds odd, but you’ll understand after reading the book yourself.

Second – Although this world was a collection of nightmares, it seemed to draw out the true strengths and personalities of the living.

Landon had a bad reputation but acted like the perfect gentleman while at Jory’s house. His true colors were exposed soon after entering the web. Poor Landon suffered the worst of it, but I want to believe, in the end, the experience made him change for the better.

Jory is a Chippewa who, much to her grandfather’s disappointment, doesn’t believe the lore of her heritage fits in today’s world. Maybe she’s right – maybe not. However, the knowledge he taught her came in handy.

Darcy is a 16-year-old genius who was not built for tackling the wilds of the South Dakota Badlands – on either side of the web. I love that she really does try.

And then there’s Choice. I love everything about Choice. I think he was always transparent, but while in the web world Jory was finally able to see him.

Third – I have my suspicions about what happened behind the closed doors at the White Feather Novelty Store…

There is so much more I’m dying to share, like the lack of colors in the world around them and the people who wanted to see them dead, but I don’t want to spoil the excitement of the read. Just trust me when I say everything is a clue. From the boarded-up windows to the yellow dandelion, everything has meaning.

[sheiladeeth_1 · Rating: 4 out of 5 stars]

The dreamcatcher of legend will only allow good dreams to pass through its center. But what happens to the bad dreams trapped on its web-like paths?Christy J. Breedlove’s Screamcatcher is first of a WebWorld series and introduces a group of teenagers who accidentally enter a scary alternate universe. Scornful of magic and lore, they’re looking for sleepovers to heal Jory’s nightmares after the death of her parents. But the old dream catcher has finally had enough.A fascinating premise leads to a cool scary tale, including touches of history and myth together with believable teens and plenty of action. The story is pleasingly original, intriguingly paranormal, and nicely grounded in Native American lore. If the teenagers and their relationships sometimes seem shallow, well, they are teens. And their failures are as fascinating as their successes. I really enjoyed the read (and would love to read more).Disclosure: I was given a copy and I enjoyed it.

[chrisstevenson-1 · Rating: 4 out of 5 stars]

Screamcatcher ReviewsPosted on April 29, 2019 by Christy J. BreedloveScreamcatcher: Web World by Christy J BreedloveApril 23, 2019tumblr_n6hno2qixr1sfxmouo1_500Screamcatcher: Web WorldAdd to GoodreadsBuy on AmazonMy Rating: 4/5 starsAbout the book:Four sleepover teenagers get sucked into a nightmarish world when an ancient dream catcher implodes and lands them in a realm of demonic and monstrous entities. Have they gone to hell? They must search for the light, the center of the web, the opening where all good things are allowed to pass. Their survival depends upon it.My Review:In a never before plot, our main characters get stuck in a living nightmare through an ancient dreamcatcher. Jory has recurring nightmares about her parent’s death and no matter what she does or what her grandfather does to stop these bad dreams, nothing seems to be working.The book is entangled with Indian lore so when Jory’s friend Choice wants to give this old family heirloom (a dreamcatcher) a chance, there’s no point in avoiding it. But things go south when Jory and her friends go to sleep in Jory’s house but wake up in a hellish world.Plot:I loved the plot. It was so unique and fast-paced. After every chapter, I was waiting for new twists and turns, just expecting to read what new amazing instance the author’s imagination could conjure up this time. I especially liked the second half of the book. It was definitely more action-packed than the first half.Characters:There is just some wrong vibe I got from Choice. Every time I would read about him, I’d find more and more reasons not to like him. But Jory turned out to be the most likeable character in the book despite everything. I liked the presence of her grandfather in the book as well.Writing:The writing was the most interesting part of the book and though I liked the world-building and the characters as well, the book would have been nothing without great writing. The dialogues were well-managed and the prose described the emotions of the characters perfectly. Plus, this book was quite easy to read and I could picture all the scenes as if they were playing out like a movie.Climax:Ah, the endings are often something that leads to disappointment. And even in this book, it was somehow the same case. I found the ending to be a little predictable and though there is nothing particularly wrong with that, I just really think there was scope for a major mind-blowing twist at the end.About the author: Christy J. Breedlove, originally born in California, moved to Sylvania, Alabama in 2009. Her occupations have included newspaper editor/reporter, astronomer, federal police officer and part time surfer girl. She has been writing off and on for 36 years, having officially published books beginning in 1988. Today she writes in her favorite genre, Young Adult. She was a finalist in the L. Ron. Hubbard Writers of the Future contest, and just recently took the first place grand prize in a YA novel writing contest for The Girl They Sold to the Moon. She writes the popular blog, Guerrilla Warfare for Writers (special weapons and tactics), hoping to inform and educate writers all over the world about the high points and pitfalls of publishing Christy’s Website| Blog| Facebook | TwitterUntitledALEX THE SHADOW GIRL