Songwriting: Essential Guide to Lyric Form and Structure: Tools and Techniques for Writing Better Lyrics
By Pat Pattison
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Pat Pattison
PAT PATTISON is the TV host of the nationally-syndicated travel show “The Best of California with Pat Pattison” and a Hudson Institute-certified creative career coach. On the heels of a successful career as an executive at Disney, Pat reinvented himself at 55 by becoming a television host, a commercial actor, and a senior print model. His passion now is to help others successfully remake their own lives to fulfill their creative dreams or simply start a new path. In addition to running career reinvention workshops and doing one-on-one coaching, he appears on numerous TV news outlets and is a regular contributor on PBS’s NextAvenue.org and on Forbes.com on issues of creativity, aging and career reinvention.
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Songwriting - Pat Pattison
9781476867533
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No part of this publication may be reproduced in any form or by any means without the prior written permission of the Publisher.
BERKLEE PRESS, BOSTON 02215.
Copyright © 1991 BY BERKLEE COLLEGE OF MUSIC. ALL RIGHTS RESERVED.
Table of Contents
Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three
Chapter Four
Chapter Five
Chapter Six
Chapter Seven
Pat Pattison has been teaching lyric writing and poetry at Berklee College of Music
since 1975. He played a central role in developing Berklee’s unique songwriting
major, the first complete songwriting degree offered anywhere. Doctoral work in
philosophy at Indiana University and a Master of Arts in Literary Criticism
... gave me wonderful tools for digging into lyrics to see what makes them work.
In addition to his work for TV and film, as well as numerous clinics and workshops,
Pat writes monthly articles for Home and Studio Recording magazine.
FOREWORD
This is not a general book in lyric writing. It has a very specific purpose: to help you handle your lyric structures more effectively.
You study the techniques of lyric writing for the same reason you take piano lessons: even though by trial and error you could probably catch on by yourself, it will save you time when someone shows you fingerings that have been proven to work. You get better faster, and enjoy the true creative possibilities of your instrument sooner.
If you have written lyrics before and you want to take a new look, this book will help you gain even greater control and understanding of your craft. If you have not written lyrics before, this book will start you off in a healthy direction. But be warned: this is a very focused book. Good structure is not a substitute for good writing. It is only a part of it.
Along with information on lyric structure, you will find exercises to help you make it part of your own writing. It will give you new tools and help you eliminate some of the trial and error you would normally have had to go through.
Of course, information alone will not help you unless you do something with it to make it your own. Shape it to fit your grip; learn it by practice and experience. Mix it in with your own talents.
This book will show you ways to say things better. It will help you manage timing and placement. That is the point of structure. By the time you finish, you will know more about lyric structure than you ever thought possible. It will help you be a better writer.
PERMISSIONS & ACKNOWLEDGMENTS
Many of the examples in this book are original. These are not:
Be Still My Beating Heart,
by Sting. Copyright © 1987 by Magnetic Publishing Ltd. Represented by Regatta Music/Illegal Songs. All rights reserved. Used by permission.
Between Fathers and Sons,
by John Jarvis and Gary Nicholson. Copyright © 1986 by Tree Publishing Co., Inc. and Cross Keys Publishing Co., Inc. All rights reserved. International Copyright Secured. Used by permission of the Publisher.
Can’t Fight This Feeling,
Kevin Cronin. Copyright © 1984 by Fate Music, ASCAP. All rights reserved. Used by permission.
Eighteen Wheels and a Dozen Roses,
by Gene Nelson, and Paul Nelson. Copyright ©1988 by Warner-Tamerlane publishing Corp., Beleivus Or Not Music, and Screen Gems-EMI Music, Inc. All rights reserved. Used by permission.
The Great Pretender,
by Buck Ram. Copyright © 1955 by Panther Music Corp. Copyright Renewed.
It Was a Very Good Year,
by Ervin Drake. Copyright © 1965 by Chappel and Co. All rights reserved. Used by Permission.
My Old Kentucky Home,
by Randy Newman. Copyright © 1967 by January Music Corp., a division of A. Schroeder International LTD. International Copyright Secured. All rights reserved. Used by Permission.
Slow Healing Heart,
by Jim Rushing. Copyright © 1984 by Maypop Music, a division of Wildcountry, Inc. All rights reserved. Used by permission.
Tickle Me,
by Randy Newman. Copyright © 1967 by Unichappel Music, Inc. All rights reserved. Used by Permission.
Why Can’t I Have You?,
by Ric Ocasek. Copyright © 1984 by Lido Music, Inc. Worldwide administration rights controlled by Lido Music, Inc. All rights reserved
Years,
by Beth Neilsen Chapman. Copyright © 1987 by Warner-Tamerlane Publishing Corp. All rights reserved. Used by Permission.
Haitian Divorce,
by Walter Becker and Donald Fagen Copyright © 1976, 1978 By Duchess Music Corporation. Rights administered by MCA Music Publishing, a division of MCA Inc. All rights reserved. Used by permission.
Your Gold Teeth II,
by Walter Becker and Donald Fagen. Copyright © 1975, 1976 by MCA Music Publishing, a division of MCA Inc. All rights reserved. Used by permission.
I co-wrote some of the original examples:
Homecoming,
with Wendy Levy.
Skin Tight,
with Ken Barken.
Southern Comfort,
with Mike Ihde and Donna Starr.
These are the Days,
with Phil Wilson.
This Bottle and Me,
with Bob Weingart.
Teddy Doesn’t Live Here Anymore,
with Randy Klein.
You Never Let Me Down,
with Jimmy Kachulis.
All original examples contained herein, including those listed above, are by Pat Pattison, Copyrights © 1979-1990 by featherrain Music, PO Box 349, Boston, MA 02123. Used by permission. All rights reserved.
Thanks to Bob Weingart and Jimmy Kachulis whose many excellent suggestions and comments played a major role in the development of this book. To Jack Perricone for unwavering support. To Bob Weingart and Sky Cappeletti for diligent editing and proofing. To Susan Benjamin for suggestions, editing, proofing, and support. To my son, Jason. And deepest thanks to my students at Berklee College of Music for their enthusiasm, their insight, and their love of writing.
INTRODUCTION
LYRIC ELEMENTS: THE GREAT JUGGLING ACT
BE STILL MY BEATING HEART
It would be better to be cool
It’s not time to be open just yet
A lesson just learned is so hard to forget
— Sting, BE STILL MY BEATING HEART
You will have no trouble learning about lyric structure. It is simple, just like juggling. When a juggler keeps four balls in the air at once it may seem like magic, but there is no magic involved. The juggler learned by throwing one ball up and catching it, throwing and catching, stopping and starting the motion; always gaining greater control over the movement of the ball. Then came two balls, then three, throwing and catching, stopping and starting, with greater and greater control.
As a lyricist, you must learn to juggle four balls.
We will start with one ball, then work slowly and carefully to two, three, and finally four balls. Start by looking at the fine verse above by Sting, and answering these questions.
How many phrases does it have?
How long is each phrase?
What is the rhythm of each phrase?
How are rhymes arranged?
Any time you write a verse (or any part of a lyric for that matter) you will have to deal with these four lyric elements.
How many phrases will I have?
How long will each phrase be?
What rhythms will I use in each phrase?
How should I arrange the rhymes?
You usually won’t ask the questions before you begin to write, but you will as you write and rewrite. The more control you have over each of these lyric elements, the better you can make them work together to make the lyric go where you want it to go. Stopping and starting, making it move. If you practice enough you will move your words with the ease of a juggler.
CHAPTER ONE
NUMBER OF PHRASES: GETTING YOUR BALANCE
Who are these children who scheme and run wild?
Who speak with their wings and the way that they smile?
What are the secrets they