Nightcomer

By Emanuel Villanueva

Adriana is in the middle of a spooky, supernatural thriller of about one hundred and tree pages. It uses hate against love to kill every one who gets involve on her way due a jealous evil spirit from the underworld who seeks her love and death.

• Language: English
• Publisher: Emanuel Villanueva
• Release date: Mar 6, 2011
• ISBN: 9781458091291

Emanuel Villanueva

Nací en el pueblo de Rio piedras para eso de los años setenta. Desde muy pequeño desarrollé un gusto por la literatura fantástica o de ficción, dado que mi madre solía contarme cuentos infantiles a la hora de dormir. Creo que eso fue solo la chispa que luego comenzaría con un inquietante deseo muy difícil de apagar. Para el 1994 cuando cursaba el grado once en la escuela superior Adolfina Irizarry de Puig, comencé con mi primer escrito, una novela que aunque fue la primera sigue irónicamente inedita aun.En el transcurso de mi vida he tenido el placer de conocer a un sin numero de personas, en los medios de comunicación y área laboral que de forma u otra han tenido que ver o influenciado con los distintos aspectos de mi vida, mayormente en la escritura que de forma alguna es la que sobresale de los demás aspectos creativos en mi. Después de graduarme de la escuela superior, cursé grados asociados en Ingeniería de computadoras, Teología, Comunicaciones, Alta Costura, Artes Culinarias y Artes Marciales. Sin embargo a pesar de que aún hay otras cosas que deseo estudiar la escritura es lo que mas me llena, creo que de forma alguna sirve de válvula de escape o de instrumento para poder dejar salir a flote parte de mi introvertido yo.A pesar de que me proyecto mas al área del arte en específico las escritas, no me considero como escritor, si no mas bien como un cuentista, guionista o productor de varios géneros literarios; que es a mi entender la mejor descripción a lo que hago. Aunque aun me falta un largo camino por recorrer y entender, en el proceso he logrado hacer público varios de mis escritos incluyendo una película que se escribió y se grabó para la televisión y aun no ve la luz pública.Mientras desde un rincón en el pueblo de Toa Baja Puerto Rico, continúo haciendo accesible al público a cuenta gotas varios de mis escritos aquí en Smashwords.com También cuento con una página de web de tipo informativo respecto a los que desean aprender a escribir y en la que transfiero partes esenciales de lo que he podido aprender y recolectar en estos años de búsqueda. Por Facebook: Escribiendo Ahora. Para preguntas y comentarios puedes enviarlas aquí: [e-mail] Mientras que continuaré tratando de transferirle a mi manera mi forma de ver la vida a manera quizás de como abordar los problemas del día cotidiano y todas las interrogantes que esto pueda plantear como lo es nuestra existencia, que de forma alguna queramos o no, a todos nos toca cuestionar. Excito a todos en la vida, solo no se rindan que pronto irán alcanzando sus metas un día a la vez.

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Nightcomer

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Emanuel Villanueva

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Nightcomer.

Copyright © 2011 by Emanuel Villanueva

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Table of contents

Chapter 1 - The massacre

Chapter 2 - Gotcha!

Chapter 3 - Secluded

Chapter 4 - Mixed up feelings

Chapter 5 - The pile!

Chapter 6 - Nowhere to run

Chapter 7 - Unstoppable

Chapter 8 - Rise of the Nightcomer

Contact the Author

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Chapter 1 - The massacre

FADE IN

EXT. CONVENT OUR LADY OF THE PAINS - NIGHT

A Victorian cathedral type building at the top of a hill erects into the sky, breaking the dark clouds in the middle of a lightning storm.

At the bottom of it there is a narrow muddy path that leads to the main entrance. Hard rain falls, product of the wicked storm; a lightning bolt lights the sky, a second strikes the cross at the

roof top, blasting it.

INT. CONVENT STAIRS

ADRIANA, a blond curly haired, young, good looking orphan, aspirant to be a nun, was sleeping in a white cotton gown; the lightning strikes and wakes her and she descends the stairs to the first floor.

Only her scared face is seen, something has happened, then she hears a deaf scream coming from the hallway and sticking to the wall carefully, she gets to the last step.

Taking a deep breath, she carefully approaches the lobby. A CRACKING sound is heard simultaneously as she looks at the:

ENTRANCE

The Main door shuts and opens repeatedly, hitting against the walls, propelled by the strong wind. ZANE, a corrupt cop dressed as a monk, wearing a hood over his head; can be seen in the lobby, holding a nun by the neck.

His partner TORRENCE, who is also a cop, stands behind him aiming his gun at someone else in the room, a priest; he laid on the floor barely breathing, in a pool of his own blood.

Zane had broken the nun's neck with a quick movement, as he releases her, her body falls to the ground making a dull sound, landing next to the priest.

A lightning strike reveals Zane's face. Adriana is frozen scared; in shock and surprise she quickly covers her mouth.

Zane hears a noise coming from the hallway; he glances and notices Adriana standing by the stairs, when she sees him staring back at her she hides behind the wall that supports the stairs.

Zane draws his gun, a magnum 45, points it towards the direction of Adriana and in an attempt to convince her to show herself, he speaks.

ZANE

Hey, come out with your hands

up or I'll shoot.

She runs up the stairs and Zane looks at his partner.

ZANE

Secure the area and hide the

money, I'll go after her.

TORRENCE

Done.

SERIES OF SHOTS - SECOND FLOOR

A. Adriana runs desperately down the hallway, in the middle of the hall laid a dead man, she stops a few steps away from him.

B. She fears to get closer. Opening the first door to her left, she discovers dismembered body parts all over the floor, she screams, horrified.

STAIRS

C. Zane stops for a second when he hears the scream and looks up aiming with his gun.

HALLWAY

D. Adriana leaves the door open and runs to the next one. She avoids getting closer to the body on the hallway, just to discover another body decapitated on the bed beyond the second door.

E. She had not entered the room, yet she stood in shock, witnessing what laid beyond the door. Zane approaches the hallway and as he see Adriana, screams to her.

ZANE

Freeze.

F. Frightened by the bodies and Zane, she overpasses the corpse that stood the middle of the hallway. She runs and enters her room, number six to the right.

G. Zane shoots his gun and misses, dust came out from the portion on the wall where it received the bullet's blow.

ROOM

H. Once inside, she locks the door and walks towards a small desk located next to the bed and takes a necklace with a small crucifix attached.

I. Then she goes to a window next to the bed and as she opens it, she looks at the door, thinking, for just a second.

J. Zane notices the numerous bodies that laid on the floor as he headed towards Adriana's room, not paying much attention to them, he continues. Once he reaches her bedroom's front door, he reclines against the wall and he begins to speak out loud.

ZANE

I will not harm you if you

come out quietly.

K. Since there is no answer from Adriana, he kicks the door down, smashing its lock to pieces and he breaks into the room.

AT THE ROOM

L. The room is empty and a sliding glass window, that faces the courtyard, is opened.

ZANE

Shit.

M. Zane approaches the window; he sticks his head out to see Adriana running towards the woods from the courtyard.

N. He shoots twice but misses; he smashes the window in anger with a single punch, cutting his knuckles.

ZANE

Fucking nun.

O. He pulls out the monk clothes he was wearing; he throws it on the ground in anger and kicks it to the side.

P. Now showing the SWAT uniform he was wearing underneath; he then replaces his gun on his belt and begins to slide down the drain pipe to the first floor.

END OF SERIES OF SHOTS

EXT. COURTYARD - NIGHT - CONTINUOUS

Once he reaches the floor from sliding down the pipe, he pulls out his gun once again along with a flashlight, he then follows the poor girl's trail through the muddy, dampened soil to the:

WOODS - SAME

The visibility was nearly zero, as she runs; the rain begins to fall even harder, she wipes the rain drops from her eyes. While looking back to see if she had lost him, she trips on something.

She falls down, hitting her head against a mossy rock, losing her consciousness for a moment.

Zane losses track of her; he looks around everywhere but does not see her. Adriana is still on the floor unconscious, behind a dead tree which laid on the ground.

He does not give up, but losing his patience he tries to use reverse psychology while continuing with his search for her.

ZANE

Hey, I'm sorry if I scared

you, I meant no harm to you.

Just come out, let's talk.

Adriana does