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Shawn rips apart Tim's scene (again)

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Tim writes another scene for Shawn to critique.
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Click here to Subscribe in iTunes. Helping you become a better writer. Join Shawn Coyne, author of Story Grid and a top editor for 25+ years, and Tim Grahl, struggling writer, as they discuss the ins and outs of what makes a story great. More at www.StoryGrid.com.

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First Two Steps in the Hero's Journey 2.0: Shawn starts walking through the Heroic Journey 2.0 infographic looking at how it can help you understand the story you are trying to tell. Click here to view the infographic referenced in this episode. https://www.dropbox.com/s/axjngf5r8w6ivcx/Heroic%20Journey%20Macro%20Infographic-01-1.png?dl=0 by Story Grid Writing Podcast
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Quadrant 4 of the Heroic Journey 2.0: We left all of you hanging back in December with the Heroic Journey 2.0 series, so we decided to correct our error. This week Shawn finishes up our series on the Heroic Journey 2.0 by diving into the Quadrant 4. by Story Grid Writing Podcast
30 min listen
Editor View vs Writer View: In Episode 5 of the Masterwork Experiment, Anne continues finding micro beats and scene types in Brokeback Mountain’s middle build, and learns the difference between the Editor’s view of a story and the Writer’s view. Shawn tells her, “Just be inspired as opposed to being literally crazed about making sure you get everything perfect.” by Story Grid Writing Podcast
45 min listen
Finding a Marketable Genre: This is an epic episode. Shawn and Tim talk through finding a marketable genre and how to build a book that fits. Then, once the episode was over, they keep talking with the mics on for another half hour. This is a great behind-the-scenes episode. by Story Grid Writing Podcast
89 min listen
Brokeback Mountain: Defining the Characters: In Episode 3 of the Masterwork Experiment, Anne and Shawn define some Regency-era analogs for the Wyoming cowboys of Brokeback Mountain, and step into some controversial territory about appropriate representation of underrepresented groups. by Story Grid Writing Podcast
51 min listen
Do you have to be depressed to be a good writer?: Another wide ranging episode that eventually lands on an important question. Kurt Vonnegut said "You cannot be a good writer of serious fiction if you are not depressed." Is this really true? by Story Grid Writing Podcast
57 min listen
Listener Questions and More Rewrites: Shawn and Tim answer a few questions from listeners and then dive into more rewrites of Tim's scenes. Check storygrid.com/podcast for a download of Tim's scene. by Story Grid Writing Podcast
50 min listen
Micro Beats and Hidden Story Meanings: In Episode 4 of the Masterwork Experiment, Anne splits atoms, finding eight micro beats to Shawn’s single beat in the prologue to Brokeback Mountain, and learns just how perfectly Annie Proulx’s lean, precise word choices deliver plot, theme, exposition, symbolism and subtext all at the same time. by Story Grid Writing Podcast
62 min listen
Launching the Masterwork Experiment: Welcome to the Story Grid Masterwork Experiment! In this ten-episode summer series, Shawn Coyne and author Anne Hawley are breaking a great masterwork down to the beat level to find out whether an experienced writer can create a new and original story from exactly the same building blocks. Episode 1 of the Masterwork Experiment introduces the masterwork and lays out the experimental protocol. Will Anne write something new and fresh? Or will she wind up with a hackneyed copy of a beloved novella? Join us to find out. by Story Grid Writing Podcast
41 min listen
Story Grid Trinity - On the Surface: Shawn Coyne dives into the Story Grid Trinity and discusses the first, most essential part of the trinity - On the Surface. by Story Grid Writing Podcast
30 min listen
Story Grid Trinity - Above the Surface: Shawn and Tim discuss the second part of the Story Grid Trinity - Above the Surface. by Story Grid Writing Podcast
30 min listen
Brokeback Mountain: The Foolscap: In Episode 2 of the Masterwork Experiment, Anne and Shawn review the Editor’s Six Core Questions and use the answers to complete the Global Foolscap worksheet for Brokeback Mountain, laying the groundwork for Anne’s Regency-era novella. by Story Grid Writing Podcast
55 min listen
Story Grid Trinity - Beyond the Surface: Shawn continues the explanation of the Story Grid Trinity with a discussion of the third and final part — Beyond the Surface. by Story Grid Writing Podcast
28 min listen

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