मनाचा कल

By शीतल अमोल कुंभर

Manacha kal is  my first novel. Is this novel give us satisfied content. Story reveal curiosity what about next... This story is about college going students and there families. 'Manacha Kal' means proper mind set. Character shows own mind set. Story gives us joy and curious theme, thinking abilities, happiness,sadness, anxiousness, excitement, emotions also present. Main characters and sub characters well arranged, justice for story. Story  follow all rule of novel criteria. Graph is starting, rising action, go to climax then falling action and last denouncement. 

     Kunal and Riya were central characters. Also Mauli was  important character. Riya was a soft hearted,shy and always nervousness present in hers face but Mauli is very graceful, active and dashing girl, she face problem very easily but Riya couldn't. Riya and Mauli was best friends. Mauli always takes care of Riya. Kunal was self centered person. Kunal's father is successful businessman thats why Kunal behave arrogantly with friends especially Riya, because Riya is very fond of Kunal but he cant. Kunal decided to plan against Riya.Riya suffering very badly... Mauli is one of  the important character in this novel. she handle condition very strongly... Kunal and Riya both suffering bad condition. Kunal was responsible for bad patch ....how to create problem kunal .which is solution.... Every thing is  explained in enthusiastically, suspense is also present in story, how to develop characters...why gave this name of novel, all these  things properly explained  in novel.... Novels ending is very different and how to change situation in suddenly, falling action turning very amazingly and surprised.

• Language: मराठी
• Publisher: Blue Rose Publishers
• Release date: Sep 6, 2023
• ISBN: 9789357040341

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