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Friday Black
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A NEW YORK TIMES BESTSELLER

“An unbelievable debut, one that announces a new and necessary American voice.”—New York Times Book Review

The acclaimed debut collection from the author of Chain Gang All Stars; a piercingly raw and, at times, heartbreakingly satirical look at what it’s like to be young and Black in America.

From the start of this extraordinary debut, Nana Kwame Adjei-Brenyah’s writing will grab you, haunt you, enrage and invigorate you. By placing ordinary characters in extraordinary situations, Adjei-Brenyah reveals the violence, injustice, and painful absurdities that Black men and women contend with every day in this country.

These stories tackle urgent instances of racism and cultural unrest, and explore the many ways we fight for humanity in an unforgiving world.

  • In “The Finkelstein Five,” Adjei-Brenyah gives us an unforgettable reckoning of the brutal prejudice of our justice system.
  • In “Zimmer Land,” we see a far-too-easy-to-believe imagining of racism as sport.
  • “Friday Black” and “How to Sell a Jacket as Told by Ice King” show the horrors of consumerism and the toll it takes on us all.

Entirely fresh in its style and perspective, and sure to appeal to fans of Colson Whitehead, Marlon James, and George Saunders, Friday Black confronts readers with a complicated, insistent, wrenching chorus of emotions, the final note of which, remarkably, is hope.

Editor's Note

Lauded debut…

A searing debut short story collection that delivers on both style and substance. It skillfully weaves together elements of satire and magical realism with today’s most pressing, politically-charged issues to create otherworldly tales that are haunting and achingly relevant. Forbes named author Adjei-Brenyah as one of the top 30 “young, creative and bold minds” of 2020.

LanguageEnglish
PublisherHarperCollins
Release dateOct 23, 2018
ISBN9781328915139
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Nana Kwame Adjei-Brenyah

NANA KWAME ADJEI-BRENYAH is the New York Times-bestselling author of Friday Black. Originally from Spring Valley, New York, he graduated from SUNY Albany and went on to receive his MFA from Syracuse University. His work has appeared or is forthcoming from numerous publications, including the New York Times Book Review, Esquire, Literary Hub, the Paris Review, Guernica, and Longreads. He was selected by Colson Whitehead as one of the National Book Foundation's “5 Under 35” honorees, is the winner of the PEN/Jean Stein Book Award, and a finalist for the National Book Critics Circle’s John Leonard Award for Best First Book and the Aspen Words Literary Prize.  

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  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    Oh man. This is a tough read, very black mirror. A reflection of all the terrible parts of society, specifically relating to race, magnified to near absurdity. But most of these stories really don't feel like that much of a stretch from our own reality, showing just how far we've let fear and hate seep into our culture. Very well written and hard to put down despite really not wanting to know what horrors are on the next page.
  • Rating: 2 out of 5 stars
    2/5
    Full disclosure to start this review: I've decided to DNF after reading about 35% of the book, just having finished the fourth story in the collection, "Lark Street", which I personally read as being blatantly anti-abortion, whether or not that is the message intended. If I'd absolutely loved the stories leading up to it, I might have stuck with the collection as a whole, but since that wasn't the case and I was able to chat about what was coming with a few other folks, I decided to move on.I'll get back to "Lark Street" in a minute, but I first want to mention that I know a number of folks who've read the collection, and most agree that the first story--"The Finkelstein 5"--is by far the strongest. Of the ones I read, it was certainly the strongest, and I think it succeeded in so many ways. The one failing was potentially in gender representation, as the book has an undeniably male focus/eye, which gets problematic in later stories, and which I've heard becomes even more of an issue in the second half of the book, where the book simply lacks positive portrayals of characters who aren't men (this is what I've heard vs read for myself, but it did influence my decision to DNF at this point since it seems like I've already read the best and the worst of the book, with folks feeling much more so-so about the rest of the collection). Conceptually and structurally, though, the opener of the collection is smart and powerful, as well as being well-written (even though I'd say the prose in what I read overall feels too MFA-styled for my taste).The next story in the collection, "Things My Mother Said", was sort of a non-entity for me. As in, I felt like I'd read similar enough before that it didn't strike me in any fashion, but it was short enough that that didn't particularly bother me after the first story's strength. The next story, "The Era", was far stronger...but it also dragged on and on, and this was also the point where I started to get uncomfortable with gender presentation, wondering if the author would ever write a positive woman or girl into the mix of the story in a way that made them feel real or more than just a stereotype. I read the story, and was glad to have read it...but it certainly didn't blow me away. I think the concept was capable of that power, but the story was just too long to deliver the impact that the concept might have been capable of, and some of the characterization issues brought it down further. It also felt fairly heavy-handed, though I took that to be the author's style.And that's when I got to "Lark Street."Here's the thing. Authorial intention only matters so much. I just finished reading another book where the author started out his Afterword by saying that he hated explaining his stories because his intentions didn't particularly matter--what mattered was what readers took from the story, and if he had to explain them, he'd already failed on some level. Some readers may see this story as satire, but I would argue that if it is satire, it is simply badly done and failed in its execution. I say this because I and many others in my book club did not read it as satire, and could find no good-faith argument for how someone would see it as anything but anti-abortion. And in this climate, in 2022 in the U.S., where I (and many others) am living in a state where my right to get an abortion has been curtailed, if not all but eliminated, it is extremely difficult to bend over backwards to try to read a story like this as anything but anti-abortion. I don't owe the author that time, or the mental health involved, or an acknowledgement that he might not have meant it that way (even though that's exactly what I'm saying here). The point is, it doesn't really matter if he 'meant it that way' once the story is in print and has the potential to do harm.Why do I say it has the potential to do harm? CWs aside, the story rehashes and essentially celebrates all of the anti-abortion arguments which are posted upon billboards, posters, and in videos whenever someone aims to make an anti-abortion argument. It could quite literally be offered to a reader by a conservative anti-abortion activist who would say, "Here. Read this. It'll help you see why abortion is wrong. Why it only leads to sadness and regret." The fact that the story could be used in that manner, and that passages could be taken out of context to argue against a woman's right to have an abortion for any reason, means that it's very difficult for me to see beyond the messaging which seems so incredibly blatant. And, again, I don't owe the author or anyone else that time, because to me this is a harmful story, particularly in the political climate we're in now. Ten-fifteen years ago, it might have been edgy and a conversation-starter and something I could respect from a male writer...but to be honest, in a collection that's just come out a few years ago and would have been finalized far more recently than ten years ago, I can't in good conscience understand the reasoning behind including the story unless the author either doesn't care about a woman's right to choose OR is truly anti-abortion. And in either case, especially given the lack of positive female representation in the book, I see no need to continue reading.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    The first story in this collection -- "The Finkelstein 5," which was clearly inspired by the murder of Trayvon Martin and a hundred similar acts of violence -- absolutely devastated me. It was unbelievably powerful, and I was utterly unprepared for it. I think what made it so effective was the fact that, on the one hand, it felt deeply, darkly satirical and yet, on the other, it barely seemed exaggerated at all. It was like a giant punch in the gut, and after finishing it, I had to put the book down for a while to recover.Part of me thinks that it's almost a shame that that was the first story in the collection, as it overshadows most of what comes after it, even though what comes after it is still very good. There's a fascinating and often disturbing combination, here, of the bizarre and the mundane, with the frequent appearance of a streak of violence that seems equally at home in both worlds. The writing is terrific, too: never showy, but always absorbing and effective.And then we come to the final story, "Through the Flash," about a town living through the same day over and over, and the collection ends damn near as strong as it began. This one is complex, horrific, and affecting in a way that sneaks up on you from several different directions. As I turned the final page and shut the book, I found myself murmuring "wow" out loud. Astonishing stuff.
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    Interesting anthology of stories. Some fascinating albeit macabre, some not quite my cuppa. My favourites were the dystopian tales. Makesnyiu think about the nature of people.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    a stunning debut, reminded me of when I first read Harlan Ellison. That powerful.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    Short stories collections are not really my thing because they're often a mixed bag. It's like panning for gold. Friday Black is an exception in that nearly every one of the 12 stories is exceptional. Adjei-Brenyah throws down the gauntlet with the opening story "The Finkelstein 5." When the second story was sweet but forgettable, I let my guard down and completely unprepared for almost every subsequent story to slay that hard. Highlights: "The Era", "Lark Street", "Zimmer Land", and "Light Splitter". I happened to read this right around Thanksgiving, which made the Black Friday-related stories all the more impactful. I'm greatly looking forward to what he comes up with next.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    Best taken in small doses, these American nightmares leave you trashing in a sweat, and the pain and hope, small that it is, of them are equally terrible.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    An uneven collection, overly hyped. Where it is good, it is very very good (Things My Mother Said; Zimmer Land; In Retail). But not every story is of this quality. What shines through for me is the humanism of the author's perspective, striving to see the positive, seeking change where no change seems possible. I'd recommend reading this certainly, but i look forward even more to see what Adjei-Brenyah produces in the future, works that sit longer and ferment into a more potent brew.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    These twelve dystopian stories of rage and violence in possibly present and assuredly future-time America center around well-deserved vengeance against the prevailing violent white culture. Two of the most heartfelt take place at the Prominent Mall, where shoppers kill clerks and each other for SleekPack PoleFace SuperShell coats. In others, twin fetuses haunt the couple who aborted them, a nuclear disaster replays endlessly in a Groundhog Day-type loop, and a performer at a Westworld-type amusement park revolts when the facility opens to children. Each story is based on a horrible American fantasy or reality we know - the author just makes them that much worse and transparent with his passionate yet controlled writing. In each situation, the narrator tries to inject kindness and, thwarted, saves him or herself and whomever else they can. As terrible as each circumstance is, the interior thoughts and dialogue motivates the reader to see what can be salvaged and if there is any grace to be found.Quote: "I'd become a devotee to a religion of my own creation. Its most integral ritual was maintaining a precise calm especially when angry, when hurt, when terrified."
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    Friday Black received a lot of attention and appeared on several "best books of 2018" lists. So as someone who likes short stories and is a sucker for a good book list, I picked up a copy. It really is as good as the hype makes it out to be. The first story, The Finkelstein 5, hits with all the force of a chain saw swung through the air and then immediately follows with an entirely different, but also powerful story called Things My Mother Said.Many of the stories are set in versions of a dystopian future America and concern events like a Black Friday sale gone violent, a man who works for a company that provides people to engage in live action role-play involving seeing a strange black guy in your neighborhood and a bleak, apocalyptic tale of people having to return to a specific time and place over and over again.I was impressed with this collection and I look forward to reading more by Adjei-Brenyah.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    Friday Black is an impressive début collection of short stories set in a dystopian version of contemporary America, which touches on race, what it means to be an African American man in this country, and the consumer driven culture we live in. The first story, 'The Finkelstein 5', is narrated by a young man who can adjust his blackness level to fit his dress, attitude and emotional state, who is outraged by the verdict of a trial involving five young black kids and a white man and struggles to balance his rage with his responsibilities. In 'Lark Street', a young man who has gotten his girlfriend pregnant is forced to face the consequences of their decision to abort the pregnancy, in a wholly unexpected manner. 'Zimmer Land' is narrated by another young man who works in a virtual reality amusement park, where he portrays a black man who walks in an unfamiliar neighborhood and is confronted by an offended and usually armed resident who challenges his right to be there. The title story is a brilliant and hilarious parody set in the early morning hours on Black Friday in a suburban shopping mall, as store employees face a crazed mob who will bite, maim and even kill their competitors and the staff for a PoleFace winter jacket or other item that will ensure the continued love of a spouse or child on Christmas Day.The best of the short stories in Friday Black are amongst the best and most unique ones I've ever read, as Adjei-Brenyah has his pulse firmly on the contradictions and absurdities of American society. The remaining stories are good ones, but pale in comparison to the best of them. Friday Black is a superb and highly entertaining book, which is deserving of the high praise and recognition it has received.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    Short stories of the if-this-goes-on variety. The first involves a young black man who flirts with joining a new movement, the Namers, who dress in formal outfits while committing violence against whites and chanting the names of black children who’d been murdered with impunity. Others involve working retail in a world in which Black Friday creates zombie-like behavior and routinely leaves multiple people dead per store. The last story, and the one I liked best, featured a protagonist who’d been trapped in a time loop right before nuclear devastation; in possibly millions of loops, she’d turned herself into a monster and then tried for redemption, with unclear results
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    Excellent short story collection. The influence of George Saunders is there but does not overpower the author's own voice. Very dark in a way appropriate for our times.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    Tough and tender and oddly fun to read. In this gruesome, fantastical collection characters are frequently decapitated, crushed, driven beyond reason by pain and fear, yet I didn’t want to turn away. It’s all too gorgeously absurd, even laughable at times; yet it isn’t the humor nor even the wildly inventive bad worlds that make Friday Black unputdownable. It’s the very specific sadness that each story evokes.

    “Through the Flash” is like every end of the world story that you ever read—except for the reminder that the world never really ends in human experience, it just goes on feeling that way day after day after day. “Lightspitter” is, I think, the only believable fiction I’ve read that tries to get into the head of an American shooter, not to mention angels and demons. It gets right into the everydayness of ordinary people’s lives—no, ordinary people’s souls, which outlast our lives—up until the moments that we are either killed or revealed to ourselves as killers. “In Retail” is set in the “real” world—one without near-future water wars, killer characters, or walk-ons by the Twelve-tongued God, for instance—perhaps only because the central element, a jumper at a suburban mall, so effectively merges the real and metaphorical violence of our world.

    Nana knows the American suburbs, particularly the mall, and the violence done there. These stories literally meet me where I live.
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    Adeji-Brenyah offers a new perspective on Twilight Zone-like speculative fiction. The first and last stories are quite amazing. "The Finkelstein 5" captures the rage of the Black Lives Matter movement while twisting it in horrifying ways. "Through the Flash" is a ghoulish but compelling take on Groundhog Day.The stories between are pretty good also with differing levels of success. "Zimmer Land" represents a terrifyingly possibility while reflecting a more terrifying reality. But the retail hell stories, with recurring characters and setting, fell flat for me.This is very exciting work, and I look forward to seeing more from the author in the future.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    A collection of powerful, interesting collection of short stories from the African American experience. It was an excellent read. As with most story collections, they weren't all tremendous, but there are enough that are that make this worth your time. Seemingly all told in the same "world", some told in the same Sporting Goods/Walmart analog clothing store where Black Friday becomes Night of the Living Customer (Friday Black). The Finkelstein 5 and Zimmer Land are both takes on the "stand your ground" and Black Lives Matter. The former is what happens when a white man brutally kills some innocent young African Americans and how the community seeks to get vengeance. The latter shows one way to channel one's fears and tensions into a Westworld like simulations, essentially to cut down on crime and violence. Some of the stories had a Twilight Zone feel, like the very profound Lake Street, to post apocalyptic science fiction like After the Flash which crosses nuclear annihilation with a time bubble. A debut collection, but one worth your time.8/10 S: 1/29/19 - 2/5/19 (8 Days)
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    This debut collection was by an author who was a student of George Saunders. The influence is obvious. These 12 stories are very creative and show Adjei-Brenyah's obvious talent. Almost all of the protagonists were young black men and it deals with racism and consumerism through the use of science fiction and very bitter satire. Some of the stories were too obscure for me but most were on a level that would have warranted a 5 star rating for an entire book. The author's stories about retail were very effective and really showed a lot of awareness as to the impact that materialism has in our lives. The book was around 200 pages and was a worthwhile investment of time on my part. Some of the stories may not work for everyone but there were enough gems to recommend this book.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    Short story collections are always a mixed bag. Nana Kwame Adjei-Brenyah's debut collection Friday Black is no exception. Some of these stories are entirely passable; however, the very best stories make up for these flat ones. They are brutally honest and visceral. They primarily tackle issues of racism and consumerism (hence the title), but do so while mixing the horror of Shirley Jackson with equal parts science fiction and cutting-edge contemporary fiction. The pieces that shine in this collection do so with such vibrance and originality that one cannot easily deny Adjei-Brenyah's future as an accomplished writer.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    A debut collection of short stories, this was very impressive writing. Adjei-Brenyah's stories were evocative, provocative, disturbing, and soulful. The stories are varied, including a post-apocalyptic tale, a tale of the foulness of salespeople and customers on Black Friday Sales day, and a tale of the degree of effort required to manage the suppressed rage accruing from being the victim of racism, and more. There is violence, and it is graphic, yet anything but gratuitous. I look forward to his future works of literature.
  • Rating: 2 out of 5 stars
    2/5
    I think I'm just not made to enjoy collections of short stories. I think its their unevenness that makes me dislike them; nearly every collection I've read has some good stories in it, but you really have to dig for those, because they're surrounded by stories that are far less appealing to me.I didn't have to dig to find the gem in this collection; it was right at the beginning. "The Finkelstein Five" was, quite frankly, amazing. The killing of the children was quite over the top - the white defendant used a chainsaw against CHILDREN and was, miraculously, acquitted. I don't put much faith in our justice system, but I hope that our society isn't THAT far gone? I really don't know, though. I mean...look at the news. Maybe the author isn't so far off. It had a sense of urgency and felt contemporary. This, I thought to myself, is the start of an amazing collection of short stories. Maybe I was wrong - maybe I WAS made to enjoy short stories, and I just hadn't found the correct collection until now.I was let down, however, with the rest of the stories. The first story in the collection far surpassed the remainder, and I was left wondering how this book had received so much hype and praise. Give me more stories like "The Finkelstein Five" and I'll most gladly read them. Unfortunately, there wasn't another one on its level here.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    In troubled times there's always the directive for creative types—writers, artists, filmmakers, poets—to turn their anger, fear, frustration into meaningful statements. And yeah, easier said than done—particularly, done well. But Friday Black is very much that sort of work for these times, and a terrific, unconventional read. Adjei-Brenyah's stories are smart, sharp, often harrowing; about anger, race and racism, consumerism, guilt, culpability, violence and its seductions, and the fierce pull of human decency against all of the dark matter. His voice and style are highly original—nothing here is in any way predictable. And while no catharsis is handed to the reader, there's still a sense of release to reading them, which maybe lies in his intelligent handling of all that complexity. Plus it's just good—rough around the edges in a few places, but a terrific debut, and highly recommended.Standout stories are "The Finkelstein 5," "Zimmer Land," "Light Spitter," and "Through the Flash," none of them for the faint of heart (but who can afford to be faint of heart these days anyway?). And "The Hospital Where" is a wonderful writer's origin story.

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Friday Black - Nana Kwame Adjei-Brenyah

Copyright © 2018 by Nana Kwame Adjei-Brenyah

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Library of Congress Cataloging-in-Publication Data

Names: Adjei-Brenyah, Nana Kwame author.

Title: Friday black / Nana Kwame Adjei-Brenyah.

Description: Boston : Houghton Mifflin Harcourt, 2018.

Identifiers: LCCN 2018006635 (print) | LCCN 2017061489 (ebook) |

ISBN 9781328915139 (ebook) | ISBN 9781328911247 (trade paper)

Classification: LCC PS3601.D49 (print) | LCC PS3601.D49 A6 2018 (ebook) |

DDC 813/.6—dc23

LC record available at https://lccn.loc.gov/2018006635

Things My Mother Said was first published in slightly different form in Foliate Oak Literary Magazine, September 2014.

In Retail was published in Compose: A Journal of Simply Good Writing, Fall 2014.

The Finkelstein 5 was published in slightly different form in Printers Row, July 2016.

Cover design by Mark R. Robinson

Cover images © Getty Images

Author photograph © Limitless Imprint Entertainment

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For my mom, who said,

"How can you be bored?

How many books have you written?"

Anything you imagine you possess.

—Kendrick Lamar

The Finkelstein 5

Fela, the headless girl, walked toward Emmanuel. Her neck jagged with red savagery. She was silent, but he could feel her waiting for him to do something, anything.

Then his phone rang, and he woke up.

He took a deep breath and set the Blackness in his voice down to a 1.5 on a 10-point scale. Hi there, how are you doing today? Yes, yes, I did recently inquire about the status of my application. Well, all right, okay. Great to hear. I’ll be there. Have a spectacular day. Emmanuel rolled out of bed and brushed his teeth. The house was quiet. His parents had already left for work.

That morning, like every morning, the first decision he made regarded his Blackness. His skin was a deep, constant brown. In public, when people could actually see him, it was impossible to get his Blackness down to anywhere near a 1.5. If he wore a tie, wing-tipped shoes, smiled constantly, used his indoor voice, and kept his hands strapped and calm at his sides, he could get his Blackness as low as 4.0.

Though Emmanuel was happy about scoring the interview, he also felt guilty about feeling happy about anything. Most people he knew were still mourning the Finkelstein verdict: after twenty-eight minutes of deliberation, a jury of his peers had acquitted George Wilson Dunn of any wrongdoing whatsoever. He had been indicted for allegedly using a chain saw to hack off the heads of five black children outside the Finkelstein Library in Valley Ridge, South Carolina. The court had ruled that because the children were basically loitering and not actually inside the library reading, as one might expect of productive members of society, it was reasonable that Dunn had felt threatened by these five black young people and, thus, he was well within his rights when he protected himself, his library-loaned DVDs, and his children by going into the back of his Ford F-150 and retrieving his Hawtech PRO eighteen-inch 48cc chain saw.

The case had seized the country by the ear and heart, and was still, mostly, the only thing anyone was talking about. Finkelstein became the news cycle. On one side of the broadcast world, anchors openly wept for the children, who were saints in their eyes; on the opposite side were personalities like Brent Kogan, the ever gruff and opinionated host of What’s the Big Deal?, who had said during an online panel discussion, Yes, yes, they were kids, but also, fuck niggers. Most news outlets fell somewhere in between.

On verdict day, Emmanuel’s family and friends of many different races and backgrounds had gathered together and watched a television tuned to a station that had sympathized with the children, who were popularly known as the Finkelstein Five. Pizza and drinks were served. When the ruling was announced, Emmanuel felt a clicking and grinding in his chest. It burned. His mother, known to be one of the liveliest and happiest women in the neighborhood, threw a plastic cup filled with Coke across the room. When the plastic fell and the soda splattered, the people stared at Emmanuel’s mother. Seeing Mrs. Gyan that way meant it was real: they’d lost. Emmanuel’s father walked away from the group wiping his eyes, and Emmanuel felt the grinding in his chest settle to a cold nothingness. On the ride home, his father cursed. His mother punched honks out of the steering wheel. Emmanuel breathed in and watched his hands appear, then disappear, then appear, then disappear as they rode past streetlights. He let the nothing he was feeling wash over him in one cold wave after another.

But now that he’d been called in for an interview with Stich’s, a store self-described as an innovator with a classic sensibility that specialized in vintage sweaters, Emmanuel had something to think about besides the bodies of those kids, severed at the neck, growing damp in thick, pulsing, shooting blood. Instead, he thought about what to wear.

In a vague move of solidarity, Emmanuel climbed into the loose-fitting cargoes he’d worn on a camping trip. Then he stepped into his patent-leather Space Jams with the laces still clean and taut as they weaved up all across the black tongue. Next, he pulled out a long-ago abandoned black hoodie and dove into its tunnel. As a final act of solidarity, Emmanuel put on a gray snapback cap, a hat similar to the ones two of the Finkelstein Five had been wearing the day they were murdered—a fact George Wilson Dunn’s defense had stressed throughout the proceedings.

Emmanuel stepped outside into the world, his Blackness at a solid 7.6. He felt like Evel Knievel at the top of a ramp. At the mall he’d look for something to wear to the interview, something to bring him down to at least a 4.2. He pulled the brim of his hat forward and down to shade his eyes. He walked up a hill toward Canfield Road, where he’d catch a bus. He listened to the gravel scraping under his sneakers. It had been a very long time since he’d had his Blackness even close to a 7.0. I want you safe. You gotta know how to move, his father had said to him at a very young age. Emmanuel started learning the basics of his Blackness before he knew how to do long division: smiling when angry, whispering when he wanted to yell. Back when he was in middle school, after a trip to the zoo, where he’d been accused of stealing a stuffed panda from the gift shop, Emmanuel had burned his last pair of baggy jeans in his driveway. He’d watched the denim curl and ash in front of him with unblinking eyes. When his father came outside, Emmanuel imagined he’d get a good talking-to. Instead, his father stood quietly beside him. This is an important thing to learn, his father had said. Together they watched the fire until it ate itself dead.

It was crowded at the bus stop. He felt eyes shifting toward him while pocketbooks shifted away. Emmanuel thought of George Wilson Dunn. He imagined the middle-aged man standing there in front of him, smiling, a chain saw growling in his hands. He decided to try something dangerous: he turned his hat backward so the shadow of the brim draped his neck. He felt his Blackness leap and throb to an 8.0. The people grew quiet. They tried to look superfriendly but also distant, as if he were a tiger or an elephant they were watching beneath a big tent. A path through the mass opened up for Emmanuel.

Soon, he was standing near the bench. A young woman with long brown hair and a guy wearing sunglasses above the brim of his hat both remembered they had to be somewhere else, immediately. An older woman remained sitting, and Emmanuel took the newly available seat beside her. The woman glanced toward Emmanuel as he sat. She smiled faintly. Her look of general disinterest made his heart sing. He turned his hat forward and felt his Blackness ease back to a still very serious 7.6. A minute later, the brown-haired woman returned and sat beside him. She smiled like someone had told her that if she stopped smiling her frantic, wide-eyed smile Emmanuel would blow her brains out.

The fact is, George Wilson Dunn is an American. Americans have the right to protect themselves, the defense attorney says in a singing, charming voice. Do you have children? Do you have anyone you love? The prosecution has tried to beat you over the head with scary words like ‘law’ and ‘murder’ and ‘sociopath.’ The defense attorney’s index and middle fingers claw the air repeatedly to indicate quotations. I’m here to tell you that this case isn’t about any of those things. It’s about an American man’s right to love and protect his own life and the life of his beautiful baby girl and his handsome young son. So I ask you, what do you love more, the supposed ‘law’ or your children?

I object?, says the prosecuting attorney.

I’ll allow it, overruled, replies the judge as she dabs the now wet corners of her eyes. Please continue, counselor.

"Thank you, Your Honor. I don’t know about you all, but I love my children more than I love the ‘law.’ And I love America more than I love my children. That’s what this case is about: love with a capital L. And America. That is what I’m defending here today. My client, Mister George Dunn, believed he was in danger. And you know what, if you believe something, anything, then that’s what matters most. Believing. In America we have the freedom to believe. America, our beautiful sovereign state. Don’t kill that here today."

The bus was pulling in. Emmanuel noticed a figure running toward the stop. It was Boogie, one of his best friends from back in grade school. In Ms. Fold’s fourth-grade class, Emmanuel would peek over at Boogie’s tests during their history exams and then angle his papers so Boogie could see his answers during math tests. In all the years he’d known Boogie, he’d never known him to dress in anything but too-large T-shirts and baggy sweats. By the time they were in high school, Emmanuel had learned to control his Blackness; Boogie had not. Emmanuel had quietly distanced himself from Boogie, who’d become known for fighting with other students and teachers. By now, he’d mostly forgotten about him, but when Emmanuel did think of Boogie, it was with pity for him and his static personhood. Boogie was always himself. Today, though, Boogie ran in black slacks, shining black dress shoes, a white button-up shirt, and a slim red tie. His dress combined with his sandy skin squeezed his Blackness down to a 2.9.

Manny! Boogie called as the bus pulled to a stop.

What’s good, bro, Emmanuel replied. In the past, Emmanuel had dialed his Blackness up whenever he was around Boogie. Today he didn’t have to. People shuffled past them onto the bus. Emmanuel and Boogie clapped palms and held the grip so that, with their hands between them, their chests came together, and when they took their hands back, their fingers snapped against their palms.

Emmanuel said, What you up to lately? What’s new?

A lot, man. A lot. I’ve been waking up.

Emmanuel got on the bus, paid his $2.50, then found a seat near the back. Boogie took the empty seat beside him.

Yeah?

Yeah, man. I’ve been working lately. I’m trying to get a lot of us together, man. We need to unify.

Word, Emmanuel replied absently.

I’m serious, bro. We need to move together. We got to now. You’ve seen it. You know they don’t give a fuck ’bout us now. They showed it. Emmanuel nodded. We all need to unify. We need to wake the fuck up. I’ve been Naming. I’m getting a team together. You trying to ride or what?

Emmanuel scanned the area around him to make sure no one had heard. It didn’t seem like anyone had, but still he regretted his proximity to Boogie. You’re not really doing that Naming stuff? Emmanuel watched the smile on Boogie’s face melt. Emmanuel made sure his face didn’t do anything at all.

Of course I am. Boogie unbuttoned the left cuff of his shirt and pulled the sleeve up. Along Boogie’s inner forearm were three different marks. Each of them was a very distinct 5 carved and scarred into his skin. After it was clear Emmanuel had seen, Boogie smoothed his sleeve back down over his arm but did not button the cuff. He continued in a low voice. You know what my uncle said to me the other day?

Emmanuel waited.

He said that when you’re on the bus and a tired man is kinda leaning over beside you, using your shoulder like a pillow, people tell you to wake him up. They’ll try to sell it to you that the man needs to wake up and find some other place to rest ’cause you ain’t a goddamn mattress.

Emmanuel made a sound to show he was following.

"But if he’s sleeping on his own, not bothering you, it’s supposed to be different. And if that sleeping man gets ran up on by somebody that wants to take advantage of him ’cause he’s asleep, ’cause he’s so tired, everybody tries to tell you we’re supposed to be, like, ‘That’s not my problem, that don’t got a thing to do with me,’ as he gets his pockets all the way ran through or worse.

That man sleeping on the bus, he’s your brother. That’s what my uncle’s saying. You need to protect him. Yeah, you might need to wake him up, but while he’s asleep, he’s your responsibility. Your brother, even if you ain’t met him a day in your life, is your business. Feel me?

Emmanuel made another confirmatory sound.

Two days after the ruling, the first report had come through. An elderly white couple, both in their sixties, had had their brains smashed in by a group armed with bricks and rusty metal pipes. Witnesses said the murderers had been dressed in very fancy clothes: bow ties and summer hats, cuff links and high heels. Throughout the double murder, the group/gang had chanted, Mboya! Mboya! Tyler Kenneth Mboya, the name of the eldest boy killed at Finkelstein. The next day a similar story broke. Three white schoolgirls had been killed with ice picks. A black man and black woman had poked holes through the girls’ skulls like they were mining for diamonds. They chanted Akua Harris, Akua Harris, Akua Harris all through the murder, according to reports. Again, the killers had been described as quite fashionable, given the circumstances. In both cases, the killers had been caught immediately following the act. The couple that killed the schoolgirls had carved the number 5 into their own skins just before the attack.

Several more cases of beatings and killings followed the first two. Each time the culprits screamed the name of one of the Finkelstein Five. The Namers became the latest terrorists on the news. Most of the perpetrators were killed by police officers before they could be brought in for questioning. Those who were detained spoke only the name of the child they’d used as a mantra to their violence. None seemed interested in defense.

By far, the most famous of the Namers was Mary Mistress Redding. The story was, Mistress Redding had been detained wearing a single bloodstained white silk glove over her left hand, once-sparkling white shoes with four-inch heels, and an A-line dress that was such a hard, rusty red that officers couldn’t believe it had originally been a perfect white. For hours, Redding answered all of the questions with a single name. Why did you do it? J. D. Heroy. He was just a child! How could you? J. D. Heroy. Who are you working with? Who is your leader? J. D. Heroy. Do you feel any remorse for what you’ve done? J. D. Heroy. What is it you people want? J. D. Heroy. Redding had been caught with a group that had killed a single teenage boy, but there was a train of ten 5s carved into her back that trailed down to her left thigh, including one that was dripping and fresh when she was caught. According to reports, several hours into an advanced interrogation session, a single sentence had escaped Mistress Redding. If I had words left in me, I would not be here.

Emmanuel remembered how the news had reported the bloody phenomenon: Breaking this evening, said one anchor, yet another innocent child was mercilessly beaten by a gang of thugs, all of whom seem, again, to be descendants of the African diaspora. What do you think of this, Holly?

Well, many people in the streets are saying, and I quote, ‘I told you they don’t know how to act! We told you.’ Beyond that, all I can say is this violence is terrible. The coanchor shook her head, disgusted.

The names of each of the Finkelstein Five had become curses. When no one was around, Emmanuel liked to say the names to himself: Tyler Mboya, Fela St. John, Akua Harris, Marcus Harris, J. D. Heroy.

This is just the beginning, Boogie said. He pulled a small box cutter out of his pocket. Emmanuel

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