Intertwined

By GENA SHOWALTER

Most sixteen-year-olds have friends. Aden Stone has four human souls inside him: One can time-travel. One can raise the dead. One can tell the future. And one can possess another human. With no family and a life spent in and out of institutions, Aden and the souls have become friends. But now they're causing him all kinds of trouble.

Like, he'll blink and suddenly he's a younger Aden, reliving the past. Or he'll walk past a total stranger and know how she's going to die. He's so over it. All he wants is peace. And then he meets a girl who quiets the voices. Why? Mary Ann Gray is his total opposite. For her sake, he should stay away.

But it's too late. . . . Somehow, they share an inexplicable friendship. A bond about to be tested by a werewolf who wants Mary Ann, and a vampire princess Aden can't resist. Two romances, both forbidden. Still, the four will enter a dark underworld of intrigue and danger–but not everyone will come out alive. . . .

• Language: English
• Publisher: HarperCollins UK
• Release date: Mar 1, 2011
• ISBN: 9781408929179

GENA SHOWALTER

Gena Showalter is the New York Times and USA TODAY bestselling author of over seventy books, including the acclaimed Lords of the Underworld series, the Gods of War series, the White Rabbit Chronicles, and the Forest of Good and Evil series. She writes sizzling paranormal romance, heartwarming contemporary romance, and unputdownable young adult novels, and lives in Oklahoma City with her family and menagerie of dogs. Visit her at GenaShowalter.com.

Reviews for Intertwined

[ahnya-2 · Rating: 3 out of 5 stars]

First and foremost I appreciate the lack of a love triangle. I get so sick of those. I was a good story and I enjoyed it. The reason I only gave it 3 stars was I didn't have that "Holy Crap I can't put this book down feeling," and it was fairly predictable. I will continue to read the series cuz I want to see how it ends.

[bubblyair-1 · Rating: 4 out of 5 stars]

This was definitely an addicting read, and i could not put this book down. But I think the beginning of the book was far better than the abrupt ending. THere is a sequel on its way but I found that the characters were best developed during the first half of the book. What gave this book a 4/5 was its creativity and characters, but I thought it needed more editing because lots of things were left unanswered.

[laphenix · Rating: 4 out of 5 stars]

I loved the world, loved the characters, and liked the story.

[spazzydragon13 · Rating: 5 out of 5 stars]

This time around, I was looking for a refreshing read but one with a bit of meat to the plot. Intertwined was one such book.

The story revolves around a teenage boy, Aden Stone, who has four souls trapped in his head. That sure caught my attention, so I plunged on. Turns out, each soul has an ability. One can time travel, one can raise the dead, one can tell the future, and one can possess others. By that time, I was all for this book.

As you read, Aden Stone finds a girl (Mary Anne) who knocks the wind out of him - literally. When they meet, they both have this unexplainable urge to hug each other...and run away from each other. Soon after meeting, they're both plunged into a world of vampires, werewolves, fairies, goblins... you name it!

Aden falls in love with Victoria, a vampire who is somehow going to save him. Vampires are always iffy ground for me, since I'm afraid another Twilight will crop up or it'll be something super cheesy. However, Intertwined was pretty neutral. Nothing super creative, but it was all tolerable.

They're all drawn together by the burst of energy Mary Anne and Aden created when they met each other. Which leads to one of the bigger plot devices! Yeah for plot devices! (And the crowd goes wild!)

Of all the characters, I love Riley & Caleb the best. Riley is a werewolf who has the best attitude in the whole book. He's got style and he's cute. Caleb is one of the souls trapped in Aden's head and he's just down right funny.

I gave the book five stars because it was an all around good book. Awesome plot, hilarious scenes, great solemn moments, and just the right amount of romance. I can't wait to read the second book now!

[nycke137 · Rating: 1 out of 5 stars]

It's like this author wanted to write a book about every type of supernatural being out there. A teenaged zombie slayer, who has 4 spirits in his head that talk to him and do specific things. He meets a teen girl, a vampire and a werewolf, all while living in a rehab facility. Way too much going on, I stopped reading it.

[librarydanielle_1 · Rating: 5 out of 5 stars]

I liked this one quite a bit. the cover put me off at first because its a bit cheesy, but the premise was interesting.
aden has four extra souls in his head. something that gets him labeled schizophrenic and passed from one institution to another. nothing quiets the souls until he meets mary ann. mary ann can quiet the souls in his head and give him the peace he wishes for. but there are complications. victoria and riley to be specific. victoria is a vampire princess and riley her were bodyguard.

[krumbs_1 · Rating: 3 out of 5 stars]

Oh, how I dislike cliff-hanger endings. I suppose technically the immediate threat was resolved at the end, but to leave a big plot point hanging the way this does...not good!

That said, a good venture into YA supernatural romance.

[avigi_1 · Rating: 5 out of 5 stars]

I really, really like the plot. I love the plot. It may have had the 'Twilight' effect for Aden and Victoria in some ways, but it's totally different. It got zombies, faeries, wolves, vampires, witches and goblins, to name a few, and yeah, ghosts. Intertwined has a rich plot that I can't wait to see the unraveling (the second installment) of the next intertwining events. How Mary Anne can neutralize Aden's ghosts and 'power', how Riley, the shapeshifter can suppress Mary Anne's 'neutralization', how Victoria, the vampire princess just made Aden her King, how the other ghosts can get free, what power does Aden really has, where they got it from, their interaction with the witches, how they would deal with the goblins and faeries, and demons. It really has a Charmed factor in some. I don't want to spoil the fun by spilling beans here, but if there's one book I recommend you to add - this is it! When you start reading it, you won't be able to put it down. You would love the interaction of Riley and Mary Anne. Especially the words they interchanged in one scene (ok, a spoiler) -'Go away'.Look at me.'Can't you do anything I ask of you? Anything at all?'Please.It was the first time he'd ever asked her for something nicely.Absently, she rolled to her back, then her other side, and petted his neck. One of her tears spilled over, and she fought the rest back. No reason to add 'sobbing like a baby' to her list of embarrassments today.I'm sorry you're hurting, but I can't say I'm sorry he's out of your life. You were too good for him.'Him, I'll get over.' Her voice shook, the vibrations affecting her chin. The trembling then spread to her jaw.It's the girl, then. Penny. She's your friend?'Was. Was my friend, My best friend.' Oh, God. So many years of love and trust, now ruined.Why not still? People make mistakes, Mary Anne.That was only the second time he'd said her name. She liked the way he said it, drawing out the A's. 'I know they make mistakes. I'm studying to be a psychologist, you know. I'm highly aware that some impulses are harder to ignore than others. I'm aware that fear of consequences causes us to guard our secrets. But it's our actions when we faced temptation that define who we are. It's our courage in admitting what we've done wrong that makes us forgivable...'Just love it! (NOTE: This is the second Gena Showalter series that I love. The first series I've read was the Tales of an Extraordinary Girl - Playing with Fire and Twice as Hot - and now this and the second installment, Unraveled).

[wyvernfriend · Rating: 4 out of 5 stars]

The opening sequence with the bodies coming out of the grave, ick, and it almost put me off. Haden aka Aden has a strange life. Orphaned and in and out of psychiatric institutions since he was very young because he hears voices. They're actually souls and he's not sure why they're there. It makes him strange and isolated.He's now in a new town, Crossroads, and he meets Mary Ann who causes the voices to stop for a while. However it's Victoria he's been seeing in his dreams, and Victoria is a vampire, isn't it lucky that her bodyguard Riley is a werewolf and attracted to Mary Ann?It's not a bad start to a series, it does pull you in and ask almost more questions than you have answers for, but it's also a bit clunky, if I didn't know better I would swear that it's a first novel, but it isn't. I was entertained but wanted more from it than it gave.

[kassilem · Rating: 3 out of 5 stars]

I got this book off of katelisim's thread. I had been warned ahead of time that it wasn't phenomenal. At the time I was looking for a simple young adult book that I didn't have to try hard to get through. That's exactly what I got. I give Showalter props for the story idea. It's the first of its kind that I've come across. But the romance was juvenile and predictable and the characters mostly flat. Nothing's really concluded. Indeed, I'm not quite sure what the overall plot is. There are a lot of questions. I'm thinking maybe that was a method used to keep you reading the series and maybe eventually I will read the sequel to see what does happen, but not anytime soon I think.

[djlibrarian · Rating: 4 out of 5 stars]

I've been a bit of a Gena Showalter fan ever since I read The Nymph King. There's just something about the way Showalter writes that really pulls me into the story. Intertwined is the first YA book I've read by Showalter, and wow, is there a LOT going on. Not that that's a bad thing, there's just a lot of material to absorb and process within just the first 100 or so pages. We have four major players in this play of life: Aden, the boy who everyone thinks is insane because he has 4 different souls inhabiting his body; Mary Ann, the girl that somehow neutralizes the souls within Aden; Victoria, the mysterious girl who is drawn to Aden; and Riley, guardian of Victoria who has a habit of hanging around Mary Ann.Let me first say that I am impressed with Showalter's ambition with Intertwined. Most titles deal with one or two supernatural beings while Intertwined encompasses vampires, werewolves, fairies, witches, ghosts, demons, just to name a few. Fortunately, rather than try to explore all of these supernatural beings at once, Showalter examines only a few within this first novel, namely that of two main characters who are a vampire and a werewolf. I actually like the idea of setting up an entire world living within the "normal" everyday world that most humans live in, and obviously that supernatural world would be composed of many different supernatural beings.The characters really do make the story very enjoyable and engrossing. I'll admit that Riley is my current particular favorite simply because of his protectiveness despite his somewhat brooding nature. Aden is a doll in his own right, especially with having to share his head with 4 other people. That would definitely be enough to put someone in an institution. In the way of the relationships among the major four, I feel divided in my thoughts. On the one hand, the hopeless romantic in me wants to go "Awwwww" about how the couples come together because of the sweetness of it. However, the logician in me says that clearly they would need more time to truly fall in love. Fortunately, the romantic side wins out simply due to the tense situations both couples are placed in. That can definitely create a stronger bond between a pair of characters. Understandably, this is the first part of a much greater story, so while the climax wasn't as immense as I thought it would be, it definitely made me curious to see what will happen in the next installment of the series, Unraveled.

[eheinlen_1 · Rating: 3 out of 5 stars]

I couldn't get past the grotesque zombie beginning or the description of the characters. This was definitely not my type of book and I stopped after about 20 pages.

[mrsboswellbooks · Rating: 3 out of 5 stars]

Haden Stone, whom everyone refers to as Aden, is a "disturbed" young man. Since birth - or maybe even before - he has been different. His parents gave him up as a child, and he has been shuffled between numerous foster families and mental institutions. Most people who come across Aden label him "Schizo". Why do they think he's schizophrenic? Aden has four souls living inside his head. Eve can time-travel, Julian can raise the dead, Elijah can tell the future (usually how/when someone will die) and Caleb can possess another human. They cause Aden all types of trouble, but they are the only friends he has ever known... until Mary Ann comes along. Whenever he's around her, she quiets the voices giving him some minuscule sense of peace. He attracts the paranormal, and she repels it. Maybe she can help free the souls trapped in his head?This story has it all: Vampires, werewolves, witches, goblins, demons, fairies... and humans. I was wondering how this story was going to tie all of these different "creatures" into it, but the author did a good job. It was a rather quick and easy read. I enjoyed getting to know the different souls trapped in Aden's head, their different personalities and their interactions with one another. I had the second book in the series at home, but had to return in because more books came in for me at the library that have longer hold queues... so I want to get those read, and then I will get back to Unraveled. Looking forward to finding out what happens with everyone.

[mrsmich02 · Rating: 2 out of 5 stars]

Personally, I had a very hard time getting through Gena's first dip into the YA pool. I'm not sure if it was her intention to have you feeling confused through most of the story just like her characters seem to be but that was the effect on me. After trudging my way to the end, I might look for the follow-up, Unraveled, but it's going to be near the bottom of my want-to-get list.

[storyteller1020 · Rating: 4 out of 5 stars]

Like Meridian by Kizer, this book has a different twist on the whole teen, urban fantasy storyline. Doesn't have to just be about werewolves and vampires anymore.

[sunnysd_1 · Rating: 5 out of 5 stars]

A boy possessed by four souls with supernatural talents, a vampire princess and her ferally handsome werewolf bodyguard, and a teenage girl with a fifteen year plan - strange companions, all: in a world filled with demons, witches, faeries and goblins, few if any of them friendly, can four teenagers keep each other safe? Showalter's take on the wildly popular vampire/werewolf-themed thriller is a suspenseful, rewarding read. I'm looking forward to following up with Unraveled.

[mariah7_1 · Rating: 5 out of 5 stars]

Spoiler!!!!!!!!!!!!!I loved this book! Lots of action and romance! I fell in love with Riley and Aden right away. The only thing that had me a bit confused was the very begining of Adens and Victorias relationship. I thought she was out to kill Aden so I didnt like her. But then I figured out she was all good! =)I loved Riley and his dark attitude. I loved the "voices" in Adens head with their sarcastic humor. I loved the different point of views!Awesome book. Read it. =)

[mthomas1975 · Rating: 5 out of 5 stars]

I loved this book. It was a very interesting concept. Aden Stone is not your average teenager; he happens to have four human souls living inside his head. One can time travel, one can see the future, one can raise the dead and the fourth can take possession of other living beings. All of his life, Aden has been in-and-out of mental institutions because he talks to himself and people thought he was schizophrenic thus making him an outcast. His mother and father abandoned him when he was a kid and other than the four souls inhabiting his head, he has never had a friend or known love. Aden moves to a ranch for derelict kids in Crossroads, Oklahoma and his whole world changes. He meets Mary Ann, a girl who makes the voices in his head go away, Victoria, a vampire Princess and Riley a werewolf. I didn't want this book to end and I can't wait to read Unraveled, the next book in the series!!

[hrose2931 · Rating: 4 out of 5 stars]

Most sixteen-year-olds have friends. Aden Stone has four human souls living inside him:One can time-travel.One can raise the dead.One can tell the future.And one can possess another human.With no other family and a life spent in and out of institutions, Aden and the souls have become friends. But now they're causing him all kinds of trouble. Like, he'll blink and suddenly he's a younger Aden, reliving the past. One wrong move, and he'll change the future. Or he'll walk past a total stranger and know how and when she's going to die.He's so over it. All he wants is peace.And then he meets a girl who quiets the voices. Well, as long as he's near her. Why? Mary Ann Gray is his total opposite. He's a loner; she has friends. He doesn't care what anyone thinks; she tries to make everyone happy. And while he attracts the paranormal, she repels it. For her sake, he should stay away. But it's too late....Somehow, they share an inexplicable bond of friendship. A bond about to be tested by a werewolf shape-shifter who wants Mary Ann for his own, and a vampire princess Aden can't resist.Two romances, both forbidden. Still, the four will enter a dark underworld of intrigue and danger but not everyone will come out alive.... (Summary from Good Reads)I just finished reading "Intertwined" and have to say I wasn't disappointed. I'm used to reading Gena Showalter's adult novels so I didn't know what to expect when she jumped to the YA genre. I picked this up previously and despite fighting zombies in the first few pages I wasn't into the book. So I set it down and read some other things. Then, while waiting for my next stack of YA books to come, I started reading it again. It started to get really interesting around page 82 as Mary Ann is walking to school. Many of you may get sucked in before then, but it took until there for me to care about the characters. All of a sudden the action starts and it doesn't stop until the end at page 440. There's a girl Mary Ann, that shuts the voices up in Aden's head, but they aren't attracted to each other, just friends. There's a vampire that Aden has been dreaming of kissing that shows up. A werewolf walks the girl Mary Ann to and from school and talks to her in her head. Betrayal by friends. Mary Ann finds out things about her past she never imagined. Aden travels back in time to discover something about the present and he loses one of the voices in his head.Then there's the Halloween Ball, where he's to meet his girlfriend the vampire's father, Vlad the Impaler. The original. And, Aden already knows he's going to die soon thanks to one of the voices in his head that can see the future. He's just not quite sure when. Add to that, Aden has somehow called all types of supernatural creatures, vampires, werewolves, fairies, goblins and witches. The book ends satisfactorily, but with a lot of things left open. Everything is definitely intertwined in this book. Of the four main characters, I thought three were very well developed but felt the vampire,Victoria felt a little flat. Of all the characters, Mary Ann had the most growing up to do. She seemed to be little Mary Sunshine in the beginning of the book, but by the end, her eyes were wide open and she'd shown amazing character growth. Aden really didn't have any growth to make. He was already so mature with everything he had to deal with except he does need to learn to hold back on his urge to fight. We don't know the characters of Riley and Victoria very well, even though we only just meet all of them in the same book, but the story is told from Mary Ann's and Aden's points of view. There were a few subplots that didn't seem to add much to the story but perhaps the reason for them will come out in the next book or they were a subtle hint about what was in Aden's head. The next book is due out in August and I can't wait. This is a great series and I'm guessing there will be three other books including the one coming out in August as there are three other souls in Aden's head.

[yourotherleft_1 · Rating: 4 out of 5 stars]

Intertwined is the first in a new series by Gena Showalter featuring Aden Stone, a hot sixteen-year-old guy who would be totally normal but for the four disembodied souls taking up space inside his head. Since his parents abandoned him as a small child, Aden has been bounced from mental institutions to foster homes to prisons and back again. Finally, he's landed at D and M Ranch, a home for troubled teenagers run by a former football player. Unfortunately, Aden's troubles have just begun. You see, the souls give Aden powers - powers to raise the dead, see the future, travel through time, and possess the body of another; and those powers are attracting creatures that Aden never believed existed. A few of them are on his side, but the others' motives could be far more sinister.Aden knows the only way to stop what's going to happen is to find the four souls bodies of their own, and he may have just met the girl who could help him do just that, a girl named Mary Ann who inexplicably neutralizes the souls. Before he knows it, Aden, a guy who has never had so much as one friend is friends with Mary Ann, in love with a vampire princess, and at odds with a werewolf. All this, and he has to convince the owner of the D and M that he's changed his ways and is living a normal, upstanding life or chance being sent away yet again.I'm so torn about Intertwined. Honestly, it was a bit over the top for me. There's more paranormal stuff in this book than you can shake a stick at. It fairly reeks of its Harlequin brethren which I abandoned shortly before I graduated from high school. Its male characters are all strikingly beautiful. Its female characters, even the would-be strong ones, seem to be always in need of protection, or, at least, so all the male characters seem to believe. It's all just a bit too contrived with problems a bit too easily solved by unlikley powers seemingly invented on the fly. I found myself more than occasionally irritated, even patronized by its wanderings into the ridiculous.Ah, but wait. I also devoured the story with alarming speed. It's well-paced and packed with action and mystery. Its characters, including all of the souls Aden's mind plays host to, are a sympathetic bunch, even the ones who have slightly more evil leanings. I had an easier time buying one romance than the other, but both were played out in interesting and often unexpected ways. Showalter tells an absorbing story even if it does require a hefty dose of suspension of disbelief. All in all, Intertwined is a book that I have a hard time admitting that I liked, but I did.

[seescootread · Rating: 3 out of 5 stars]

My feelings are a little mixed on this book. The plot was interesting and overall I enjoyed the book. However, the story just seemed to have too much going on. It was like the author said "lets see how many different paranormal things we can cram into one book." I wish there were less paranormal elements and more development into a specific focus of "paranromalness". The romance element between Aden and his love interest was a little cheesy and super fast; I prefer to have some 'lets get to know one another' before instantly IN LOVE. I felt like Mary Anne's love element was a little more realistic. The book has plenty of action and is well paced, even if the character's reactions were sometimes over the top. Overall it was a fun read and I will be keeping an eye out for the sequel since there was plenty of plot left to unravel at the end of this one.

[urbanfan · Rating: 4 out of 5 stars]

I was surprised to find Gena Showalter had a young adult book out. I have read all of her adult fantasy books and was curious if she would transfer over well into young adult. I must admit, I was skeptical, but ended up pleasantly surprised. I really enjoyed this first book in her Intertwined series. So much so, I finished the rather lengthy book in one day.The book starts out action packed very quickly. The main character Aden is able to raise the dead and accidentally happens upon a cemetery. Quickly we learn that Aden isn't an average 16 year-old, but knows how to wield daggers like a gunslinger wields guns. Right after this first action scene, Aden meets another important character, Mary Ann. Their meeting is one that puts in motion the plot of the story. It seems Mary Ann is the opposite of Aden and can neutralize his abilities. This first meeting of the two opposites, however, brings about a force of power that has summoned all the suppose to be non-existent magical creatures in the world to Crossroads, Oklahoma. Being an Oklahoman myself, this pleasantly surprised me too.Aden has been in foster homes his whole life. He hears voices and is a diagnosed schizophrenic. He has been sent to the D and M Ranch for wayward boys and one slip up could get him sent away from the ranch, public school, and his soon to be love Victoria, a vampire. She is one of the creatures that has been summoned. Her bodyguard, Riley the werewolf, also becomes an integral part of the story. He and Mary Ann seem to have a connection that negates her ability as a neutralizer. With all these abilities in play, the creatures are flocking to Crossroads in order to find Aden, the source of this power, and use him for their own purposes - none friendly. There are love interests that will make you feel happy certain characters are together. I can say I am glad I was not left with a love triangle that I needed to decide what "team" I was on. Very refreshing.Until almost half way through the book, it feels like it takes time to set things up. There is a lot of background knowledge that happens before you come to the climax. At first, I wondered when we would get to the connecting aspects of why certain things were being explained. I thought the book was going in a totally different direction than it ended up based on how the story unfolds. I was still interested in the book at each step. This isn't a complaint, but a reference to how the book may seem to take longer to get going with the real plot, not that it is a slow read. The book reads easily, flows, and you do not want to put it down. There is the feeling of several different stories going on leading up to the climax. Each story is interesting in itself and flows into the climax quite cleverly. This climax is what will lead the reader into anticipating the second book in the series, Unraveled, released August 31, 2010. I can only hope the different story lines presented means Showalter has several more books planned for this series in order to unfold them all.I highly recommend this book to young adult fantasy readers. Showalter has taken fantasy and added her own brand of magic to young adult. I can honestly say this is a new take on the vampire, werewolf, witches, abilities type of fantasy book. This is a unique book of ideas and characters. I'm glad I took the time to discover how well Showalter does transfer to young adult and I have already downloaded Unraveled to my Kindle, so I can continue this journey with Adan and his friends.

[59square · Rating: 4 out of 5 stars]

Judith says: Intertwined went soooo slowly for me. It was a little over half of the book before I really got interested. However, I must have known it was worth the wait because once I got past the first half, I could not stop reading.Funny, but even after I got into the book, the characters still have not captured my interest. I love the plot and am very interested in the sequel (there will be one, won't there?). I honestly can't say that a book has ever afftected me in this way. Perhaps the next book, will find me really liking and caring about Aden, Victoria, Mary Ann and Riley. Good names for movie characters, don't you think?The spotlight is strictly on the teens. They are all very attractive, smart and willing to take risks for one another. I like their various and troubled backgrounds. They complement one another. The young women who enjoy romance will like this. Guys might also be willing to read Intertwined since there are two strong male protagonists and some fairly decent fight sequences. The only things was the beginning, it went slowly. I know that the author had to set up the characters and the environment the kids were living in, but I wonder if she could not have speeded things up a bit. Anyway, I did like reading the story. Very interesting plot and I want to know what happens next. Soon, okay?

[thebooknerd · Rating: 4 out of 5 stars]

This was such a great book that I actually tried to read slower in order to prolong the experience. I loved all the characters -- which is no surprise since Gena Showalter always creates wonderfully intriguing characters. The story was an excellent combination of sweet teenage romance and paranormal thrill. This is one of the most sophisticated and clever young adult novels I've ever read. I can't wait to get my hands on the sequel.

[acg233 · Rating: 3 out of 5 stars]

Title: IntertwinedAuthor: Gena ShowalterGenre: YA paranormal/fantasyWhere I got it: Oregon Digital Library Consortium AKA my local library's electronic book site (audio and e-books).One sentence: Aden Stone, a teen with four other souls living inside him, each with a different paranormal talent (time traveling, raising the dead, seeing the future and possess other people), meets Mary Ann Gray, who silences the voices, and the two of them are dragged into supernatural danger along with a werewolf shape-shifter and a vampire princess.Themes: Forbidden love, supernatural abilities, family issues, danger and intrigue.Main character: Aden Stone was abandoned by his parents because they thought he was crazy. He's been in and out of multiple foster homes and institutions. He is an outcast with few friends, has an interesting back story and connection with Mary Ann. I didn't really feel like his personality came through as very unique or memorable, just the fact that he had four other people living inside of him.Secondary characters: I first thought that Mary Ann and Aden would fall in love, but it was actually really refreshing that they just remained friends. Mary Ann has had everything in the past, a stark comparison to Aden. She didn't really make much of an impact with me, although the past with her mother turned into an interesting plot point.Their love interests; Victoria, the vampire princess, and her werewolf-shape-shifter bodyguard, Riley, seemed entirely one dimensional. Both seemed attracted to and sought out Mary Ann and Aden for no apparent reason. The romance was not very convincing and the characters seemed very stereotypical.Writing style: Showalter's writing style was both fast paced and detailed when the situation required it. Nothing popped up that jolted me out of the story, and that's how I can often judge if the writing is awkward or badly written.Plot: The concept of this book really drew me in, but it turned more into werewolves, vampires, faeries and goblins more than the voices in Aden's head. The first half of the book was quite different from the mess of paranormal creatures that swooped in toward the end. The twists and turns were entertaining, but also slightly overwhelming.Best scene: The beginning scene in the graveyard where Aden fights off zombie corpses.Positives: Concept, fast paced action and writing, multiple story lines with two romancesNegatives: Characters, ending, some of the plot points were lost on me.Ending: Slightly thrown together. The ends were somewhat tied up (leaving room for a sequel, of course), but there was no closure.Other/Random:Verdict: Fun and entertaining, but not anything with depth. Good for a quick, light YA read.Rating: 6.7 / 10

[bookwormygirl · Rating: 4 out of 5 stars]

Although Aden might seem crazy to some - talking to thin air, acting peculiar around cemeteries, etc. - he is far from it. The voices inside Aden Stone's head are real. He has four human souls living inside him - Eve can time-travel, Julian can raise the dead, Elijah can tell the future and Caleb can possess another human. He has spent his life from one institution to the next, being prescribed all sorts of pills and at the mercy of his doctors and caretakers.Now, living on the outskirts of a new town with a couple who has taken him (and other troubled boys like him) in, he plans on a fresh start. But that all changes when he catches a glimpse of a girl who not only quiets the voices in his head, but basically knocks him on his butt at first glance. He knows he must find out who she is and how she can do what no one has done before.Riddled with all sorts of supernatural beings (i.e. vampires, werewolves, fairies, goblins, demons and witches) you are taken on a journey with Aden and Mary Ann - who not only form an inexplicable bond of friendship but whose limits will be tested by a werewolf shape-shifter who wants Mary Ann and a vampire princess that has been the star of many of Aden's dreams. Together the four face intrigue and danger, doomed romances and the possibility that not all may come out alive.As a big fan of Gena's adult novels, I was excited to read this first installment of her YA series and, I must say, I was not disappointed. I loved how so many elements of paranormal fantasy were thrown in here and jumbled all together - giving it a fresh and original idea. The chapters are told through either Aden or Mary Ann perspectives. So you get to not only hear what Aden is thinking but you also get to see it through Mary Ann.The characterization was great. Even the voices in Aden's head were well-developed. It got to the point where I knew which had spoken by just the way they said things. Very engaging and imaginative. As for the romances, I have to admit that although I did enjoy reading about Aden and Victoria, my fave couple was Mary Ann and Riley. I found myself looking forward to their moments together. But overall, I think it was well done.This was such a fun book and although many of its problems were resolved by its end, there were also many questions left unanswered and, one of those pesky cliffhangers. All in all, a fantastic start to what I can tell will be a very enjoyable series. Book #2 - Unraveled, releases September 2010... I'll be anxiously awaiting it.

[youthgpl · Rating: 4 out of 5 stars]

Intertwined went soooo slowly for me. It was a little over half of the book before I really got interested. However, I must have known it was worth the wait because once I got past the first half, I could not stop reading.Funny, but even after I got into the book, the characters still have not captured my interest. I love the plot and am very interested in the sequel (there will be one, won't there?). I honestly can't say that a book has ever afftected me in this way. Perhaps the next book, will find me really liking and caring about Aden, Victoria, Mary Ann and Riley. Good names for movie characters, don't you think?The spotlight is strictly on the teens. They are all very attractive, smart and willing to take risks for one another. I like their various and troubled backgrounds. They complement one another. The young women who enjoy romance will like this. Guys might also be willing to read Intertwined since there are two strong male protagonists and some fairly decent fight sequences. The only things was the beginning, it went slowly. I know that the author had to set up the characters and the environment the kids were living in, but I wonder if she could not have speeded things up a bit. Anyway, I did like reading the story. Very interesting plot and I want to know what happens next. Soon, okay?

[vampiregirl76 · Rating: 4 out of 5 stars]

Intertwined is the second book to be released from the new Harlequin Teen line. What drew me to this story was that Aden has four souls living within him. Something I hadn't come across before. I knew his story had to be very interesting.What at first seems to be a boy meets girl type of story, really it is so much more. Especially when a vampire and werewolf are thrown into the mix. Intertwined was an exciting, fresh new world to delve into. And of course not to be missed is the wonderful wit of Ms. Showalter. She brings it to every book she writes, which never fails to put a smile my face.

[zeek319_1 · Rating: 4 out of 5 stars]

Aden Stone has never been normal. He's heard voices in his head all his life and everyone thinks he's crazy. But they are not just voices he's hearing, they are actual souls, drawn into him and trapped since the time of his birth. And that's not all, they have special abilities- abilities that he can possess as well.Orphaned and having spent most of his life in mental institutions, he's finally found a home for boys with a leader that he actually likes. But his comfort is once again in peril when a chance encounter in a graveyard with some supernatural creatures leads him to a girl who silences the voices in his head. Though she's not the girl he's been dreaming of these last couple months (thanks to the precog living inside of him), something about her draws him and he makes sure he's enrolled the very next day at the school she attends.Though she lost her mother a few years back, Mary Ann Gray has lived a happy, if not bittersweet, life with her father. When a strange boy knocks her for a loop one evening while visiting a friend she has no idea her life is about to be turned upside down.Aden & Mary Ann sense a connection between them and when supernatural creatures start coming out of the woodwork, they become fast friends in a race to figure out what that connection means. When a vampire princess and her bodyguard join them, the danger ramps up as they soon discover everyone is out to grab the mysterious source of power that is drawing supernaturals from across the globe to the very heart of the Tri-City area.Though I'm not a huge YA reader, I thoroughly enjoyed this tale. Where Twilight felt too emo and sappy for me, this one just worked. The characters have chemistry and are not forced and though there is a fantastical element, their relationships feel real.Aden is a sweet, misunderstood, but really kind of noble, kid who finally begins to find a home and family in the new friends he's making. (Always a sucker for a loner/orphan finding a home). He also is beginning to see that his curse is really a gift. The ending felt like it should have been a couple books into the series, but it didn't make me like the story any less. I'm def. continuing one!

[bookreader_11 · Rating: 3 out of 5 stars]

In my opinion i would give this book a 3 star. It wasn't a bad book and it certainly kept me turning the pages, but my greatest disappointment was at the end of the book. I felt that it ended abruptly, and without a sequel to it, I feel like the book has no proper ending. I still recommend this book however to teens, unless your the kind that needs to read book with a good ending to be satisfied. Hopefully some of Gena's other books are better.