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Her toes peep from the plaster,gently he puts on the sock.

Go carefully, he had said,taking her hand. Slippery leaves.Still she went down.They heard the snaplike the crackle of a bonfire.

Shetells me all over againwhile Dad pops to the shops,buys a few bits for lunch.He comes back, makes more tea,answers the phone, gives her an aspirin,alert to her every grimace, sigh, look.The ambulance manbrought my glove round you know.Yes, Mum, I say. Lovely of him.

In the kitchen Dad tells mehow he fears his cancer;loss of dignity, pain, how he will die –leaving Mum behind.I take out the rubbish, cry into thedustbin.

 she calls as I step back inside.He rolls his eyes, grabs another sock warmfrom the radiator. She nods.He leans towards her; they touch noses,smile into one another’s eyes,kiss again and againas if in

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