Writer's Digest

Managing Point of View (Part 2 of 3): Emotional Distance

Just how “into” your narrator’s head and heart do you want your readers to be? Do you want them to feel emotionally embedded with your narrator(s)? Or observe your characters’ experiences from afar? What emotional distance (close, far, or a mix) should you strike to achieve the best point of view for your story, novel, or memoir?

The answer, of course, depends on the type of story you’re telling as well as the experience you want your readers to have.

Luckily, you don’t need to know the answer before you begin writing—though it’s fine if you do. Somewhere in the process of drafting and revising, you’ll need to figure out the emotional distance that’s right for your story’s point of view (POV)—and your readers.

You’re reading a preview, subscribe to read more.

More from Writer's Digest

Writer's Digest2 min read
Yourstory
THE CHALLENGE: Write a drabble—a short story of exactly 100 words—based on the photo prompt below. By Meriah Osterhout of Pepperell, Mass. A rancid smell seeps into the Aegean Sea. Keadia, a sea nymph, is miles away but senses the passing ship’s leak
Writer's Digest3 min read
Poetic Asides
Writing poetry is very helpful for processing emotions. Fall head over heels in love? Write a poem. Tumble down the stairs of a broken heart? Write a poem. Get in a heated argument? Write a poem. Dealing with the aftermath of a tragic event? Write a
Writer's Digest2 min read
Characterizing Through Relationships
Today is her forty-fifth birthday. She finds it hard to believe. Once she’d been young and she’d thought forty-five would come slow and impossible. She’d thought forty-five would be another world. But it came fast and it’s not what she thought it wou

Related