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The first five pages: Peach Blossom Spring

1 ‘He is from walking and walking and walking.’

This line was always going to be the beginning of my novel, even before I knew it was a novel. The line came from a writing exercise I was leading in one of my workshops, based on a poem by George Ella Lyon called Where I’m From. The exercise is to finish the sentence ‘I am from…’ but in a metaphorical, not geographic, sense. For example, I told the participants, instead of saying ‘I am from Los Alamos, New Mexico,’ I might begin, ‘I am from snow fall and leaf shadow, from hot bubbling tar on summer streets,’ and go from there.

When they started to write, I picked up my pen, planning to carry on with my example. Instead, the line ‘He is from walking and walking and walking’ appeared the page. Intrigued, I continued: ‘He is from shoes filled with holes, blistered toes and calloused heels

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