Writing Plots With Drama, Depth & Heart: Nail Your Novel
By Roz Morris
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What keeps a reader curious? It’s the story. You might have a dazzling prose voice and plausible characters, but if they don’t do anything, the reader is likely to lose interest.
So where do you find story ideas? How do you make them into a captivating read?
Do you know what genre you are best suited to write? What is literary fiction and how do you write that? How will you give your book depth without seeming preachy or bringing the plot to a standstill?
What are the hidden patterns that ply the reader’s emotions, regardless of your genre or style? How can you use them with originality? If you want to write a story that breaks the usual conventions, how do you do it?
Whatever type of novel you want to write, this book will show you, in down-to-earth tutorials, games and exercises.
Use it before you write and when revising, to diagnose your story’s strengths and weaknesses, to decide how to begin, what to put in the middle, how it should end. If you’ve had feedback from critique partners and editors, use it to decode what’s really wrong - instead of what they think might be.
Most of all, use it to find out where you already have spellbinding plot material. Discover where your best ideas are hiding and how to tell stories with drama, depth and heart.
By a bestselling ghostwriter, literary author, creative coach and book doctor.
Roz Morris
STOP PRESS! Roz Morris's novel Lifeform Three was longlisted for the World Fantasy Award.NEW RELEASE! Ever Rest, Roz's long awaited 3rd novel, launched on 3 June 2021. Read it now!Roz Morris writes fiction and essays about unusual ways we can be haunted and how we seek people and places we belong with. Her work has been profiled by The Guardian, Literature Works, the Potomac Review, Rain Taxi and BBC Radio.Her fiction has sold more than 4 million copies worldwide, although you won't have seen her name on the covers - she began her career in secret, ghostwriting fiction for big-name authors.Now she's coming out of the shadows. Her own novels have been described as 'profound tales and compelling page-turners', with fine-honed language, unforgettable characters, and gripping, unusual storylines. Plaudits include a top-ranked title in the American Library Journal programme, a longlisting for an international award alongside Neil Gaiman and a finalist position in the People's Book Prize 2017.She is a writer, journalist, fiction editor and the author of the Nail Your Novel series for writers. She teaches creative writing masterclasses for The Guardian newspaper in London and is also the author of a series for writers - Nail Your Novel.If you want to get to know her a little better, drop in at www.rozmorris.wordpress.com and her blog www.nailyournovel.com - where she keeps a regular diary of challenges she's tackling in her writing. Follow her creative adventures in her newsletter https://tinyurl.com/rozmorriswriter
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- Rating: 4 out of 5 stars4/5I quite enjoyed this book. It jumps right into the meat and delivers exactly what it promises: no-nonsense, easy to digest tips on how to make your plot sizzle. Unfortunately, I only found out when I was quite far in that this is actually the third in a series... oh well, I've added the first (Nail Your Novel: Why Writers Abandon Books And How You Can Draft, Fix and Finish With Confidence) to my to-read shelf.
My only real problem with this book was in the examples from literature. Just about every chapter mentions at least one famous or bestselling book to prove its point. The author briefly explains how the author of that particular book achieved whatever effect the chapter's talking about, but in general, mostly assume you've read them. The problem is, I've read maybe 5% of all the books she referenced.
The other thing is that the formatting was strange. I don't know if it was just Scribd (I doubt it, because I've never encountered this particular problem before), but most of the chapter headings appeared after the closing paragraph of the previous chapter, followed by a page break, followed by the first paragraph of the next chapter. It was weird, but I got used to it.
Anyway, this is definitely going on my "Reference" shelf in Scribd, and I'll be referring to it often.1 person found this helpful
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Writing Plots With Drama, Depth & Heart - Roz Morris
Writing plots with drama, depth and heart: NAIL YOUR NOVEL
Roz Morris
Published by Roz Morris
Copyright 2015 Roz Morris
Smashwords ISBN: 9781311595799
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Introduction
1 Storytelling essential: show not tell and why it’s important in plotting
‘It was gorgeous’ shows us nothing – character’s reactions summarised in a judgement and therefore weakened
What ‘show not tell’ is not
It’s about the emotion, not the action: Raymond Chandler
When to tell
For your toolbox
2 What are the fundamentals of plot?
Straightforward hero journey
... and other kinds of plot
Four Cs for a good plot – curiosity, crescendo, coherence and change
Four questions to identify your genre – and how you should handle your plot
Finding coherence
For your toolbox
3 Where do plots come from? Setting, character, theme and significance
Plot from setting and the novel’s world
Plot from character flaws and relationships: Revolutionary Road
Plot from theme
What’s your story really About? Story metaphor, symbols and themes
Other ways to overstate themes
Statement of theme – the nucleus moment
Challenge your themes, issues and messages
Bursting at the themes: writer tries to cram in all possible ramifications
Only here for the Lear – a pitfall when creating a plot from significant literary parallels
For your toolbox
4 Conflict, stakes and plot – are you looking for trouble?
Making the threat matter – stakes
Conflict begins at home
Different views are there but they don’t turn into action
For your toolbox
5 Back story: before I tell you that, I’ll explain this...
Most engaging events are buried in summary of back story
Back story and secret wounds used instead of character development
Dramatic issues and secret wounds are never used in the story
Back story in one major chunk at the beginning
Not all your back story is needed in the novel
Flashbacks
Be gentlemanly with your research
For your toolbox
6 What’s happening? And is it gripping?
Events are dramatic but they don’t seem to matter
Instant breakdown after a shock or bereavement
Dramatic act of self-sabotage not properly seeded
Nothing happens except conversations
All the action follows a predictable path
The ‘you are here’ scene and other smart ways with plot exposition
Mystery – writer doesn’t play fair with secrets
Mystery – too little or too much?
Mysteries solved before you’ve got them started
The power of choices
For your toolbox
7 When the reader stops believing: cliche, coincidence and convenience
Coincidence – the dos and don’ts
Characters jump to correct conclusions or interview only the right people
Obstacle overcome too quickly
Disasters and acts of God – prime the reader with foreshadowing
Same handy plot-changing event happens to two separate people
Characters tread water until they save the day
Desperately seeking coincidences for a spectacular finish – The Kite Runner
Most story revelations come when a character blurts something out
A fight isn’t enough – the reader knows you control the outcome
Unavoidable plot events and devices
Contrived conflicts and dumb plot moves
Why doesn’t the character give up or walk away?
For your toolbox
8 Adding richness – do you need a subplot?
Subplots that steal the show
Subplot not developed
Irrelevant subplot
For your toolbox
9 Story structure and plot points – let’s twist
The midpoint – and stories with a sagging middle
Middle is predictable or uninteresting
For your toolbox
10 Pace – the storyteller’s spell
Back story at the beginning? Think forwards
More pace, less speed? Rushing emotional moments
Rushing – no context to help reader understand why events are significant
Too many emotional beats in a scene
Nothing is changing
Scenes take too long to get to the meat
Vary the pace with a contrast scene
Kill your darlings – a precious scene that had to go
What to cut? Tune into the rhythm of the story
Pace yourself to edit well
For your toolbox
11 Endings – surprising, inevitable, right
Should you tie up all the ends?
End is unsatisfying – have you missed the most compelling conflict?
Ending outstays its welcome
Ending with a different emphasis – the deleted epilogue from Rebecca
End is too abrupt
Don’t introduce anything new at the end
For your toolbox
12 Beginnings and prologues
When you reach the end of your revision, edit the beginning again
Prohibitions examined: starting with weather, waking up or looking in the mirror
Starting with a dream
Starts with confusing detail – fights, battles and moments of high emotion
Starting with minor characters
Introducing too many characters at once
Hook the reader with head and heart
Prologues – yay and nay
What was normal?
For your toolbox
13 The games department – exercises to help you develop your plot
Thirty-nineish steps on the hero’s journey - a question template to find your plot
Who has the biggest struggle?
Check the point of view
Rock your structure
Creating a subplot – from where?
Work your back story (and exposition)
Several possibilities for the ending – how to pick the right one?
For your toolbox
14 Games 2: Where are you going? The synopsis
Plot is not as described in the synopsis
Did you try to make the story sound more slick for the synopsis?
The fairytale synopsis – finding a plot in a muddled manuscript
How to write a synopsis with drama, depth and heart
For your toolbox
Appendix: top nine novice mistakes with plots
Story metaphor seems far-fetched and trite
Getting muddled: when to stop adding ideas and themes
Inner conflict: keep it hidden
Uninventing the cellphone – a convenient blindness about technology
Dreams: part 2
Fantasy sequences, parallel worlds, timeslips and genre mixing
Stories within stories, books within books
Beginning belongs to a different kind of novel
Tunnel vision: writer afraid to go with the flow
For your toolbox
About the author
Other books by Roz
INTRODUCTION
In some ways it’s false to split fiction-writing into departments of plot and character. The reader gets it as one organism – plot with character with style with setting with themes. But when coaching, writers’ strengths and weaknesses tend to fall into these divisions so it’s helpful to consider them separately. So if plot is your bete noir – or your keenest interest – this book is for you.
Drama, depth and heart
Why do we write fiction? Indeed, why do we read it? For a thrill, a chill, a world that is simpler, or more interesting, or cruel, or more loving or just. To laugh, to cry, to understand, to think, to forget, to remember. To – as Kurt Vonnegut said – meditate with the mind of another.
Of all the novelist’s disciplines, the department of plot contains the most mechanical terminology and thinking. It’s replete with theories of structure, forms, paradigms, plot points, conflict, classic journey shapes and tropes. Often these rules are made more complicated than they need to be, or appear to reduce storytelling to a soulless execution of formulae.
But they are attempts to understand how stories work, what makes them poignant, happy, uplifting, thrilling, enlarging, transforming. They are useful as a way to translate and scrutinise a complex reaction that takes place between the novel’s text and the reader’s mind. Knowing these ideas doesn’t confine you to formulaic or simplistic stories, any more than knowing the laws of physics stops you being able to invent an aeroplane or a rocket that can travel to the moon.
In this book, I’m delving into what works, from two decades of dealing with raw writing, near misses and audacious triumphs – and helping writers create the effect they were striving for. It’s not about rights and wrongs, it’s about taking charge of your art – whether you write genre or literary fiction. I like this remark by the artist Mark Rothko: ‘I’m not interested in colour or form. I’m interested in tragedy and doom.’ Hold that thought.
An awareness book
This is a book to help you build your awareness as you write and edit. Is your plot intricate or impenetrable? Clever or contrived? New or nonsense? Often the distinctions are fine. I see a lot of manuscripts where the author has stabbed at an effect that hasn’t worked – but would succeed with a tweak of character, or better foreshadowing, or a stronger subplot to direct the reader’s receptiveness. You can have a dazzling prose voice and brilliant characters, but they won’t hold us spellbound unless they do something that grabs – and keeps – our attention.
A book to help you revise
Much of the work on plot and story happens in revision. This is often a surprise to inexperienced writers. Many of my editing clients think revision is just about blitzing typos or finding a fine phrase. They’re shocked when my report spends a half-page on their prose style, and twenty-nine on the physics of their story, how the characters could be tested more and whether they have kept the reader enmeshed.
One of my masterclass students shared a story that illustrates this. She described how she had come close to a publishing deal. The editors mentioned the book had problems and would need a thorough edit. Unfortunately, the imprint folded and she found herself on her own again. Worried that her book wasn’t right, she embarked on more edits, and assumed the problems must lie with the style. So she worked to write the book in a more suitable way. Still, though, she was unhappy with it and didn’t know why.
Editing veterans will be nodding sagely here, knowing that language is only one of many considerations when we revise. I’ve leaped into this trap myself. In the early days when I was querying agents with my first novel, I was told the book had a few rough areas. I made the only possible assumption – that I needed to improve the ‘writing’. And so I fiddled, line by line, adding and pruning here and there. It was many years before I realised I wasn’t touching the real issues. I had no idea about the mechanisms that work under the words, and that language is the skin on top of the structure, pacing and character arcs. This is the guts of the book. These are the devices that take charge of the reader’s emotions. The more we are aware of them, the better the novel will work.
And so this is a revision book as much as a planning book or a writing book. It will help you diagnose your story’s strengths and weaknesses. It will also help you if critique partners, beta readers and editors remark that they didn’t believe a story event, or that the subplot was dull or the middle of the book was slow.
A book for the unconventional writer
Of course, you might want an unusual story. If so, bravo. The very effect I’m warning against may be exactly what you want. and conventional or not, all plots have certain qualities in common. They offer an experience. There is a careful order to the events, even if it isn’t apparent to the reader. The reader’s curiosity is directed with clues and mysteries. If there is a cave in the woods, or a man losing his dog, or a gun being loaded, or a couple having a row, readers will hunt for the reason it is being shown. They will seek connections with what has come before. They make a chain in their mind. Good storytellers understand what breaks it and what pulls a reader further in. Under the words, remember, is where you do this – whatever your purposes.
Is it plot or is it story?
Plot and story are not the same, although I’ll use them as synonyms where the distinction doesn’t matter. Strictly speaking, plot is the events; story is what you make of them – which is part of the art. (And the fun.)
Who am I?
You’ll have seen my novels in the bestseller charts, but you won’t have seen my name because I was a ghostwriter, hired to write books as other people. I’m now coming out of the shadows with my own fiction. As well as writing, I have an extensive background in publishing and editing. I’ve appraised manuscripts for a London literary consultancy and also as a freelance, and my clients include winners of prestigious national awards. I teach creative writing masterclasses for the Guardian newspaper in London. From my work with authors I wrote the other books in this series, Nail Your Novel: Why Writers Abandon Books and How You Can Draft, Fix and Finish With Confidence, and Writing Characters Who’ll Keep Readers Captivated. Others are in the works.
Tragedy and doom (again)
Let’s go back to Rothko. When I’m talking about structure or form, I’m striving for tragedy and doom. Or comedy, or romance, or complexity, or sadness, or wonder. I’m interested in the essence of what does this and how. Use this book to make your thrill, your suspense, your enlightenment, your exploration, your night of dark forces, your transformation, your drama, depth and heart.
Now let’s explore.
1 STORYTELLING ESSENTIAL: SHOW NOT TELL AND WHY IT’S IMPORTANT IN YOUR PLOT
Show not tell is a fundamental dramatic principle. It is writing with the intention of giving the reader an experience.
Show not tell makes us feel as though we’ve been present as story events happen. It’s persuasive when you need to teach us something about a character, an event or even an object. It’s a great way to explain information to the reader in a way they will effortlessly remember.
It’s also a memorable way to present back story. It can demonstrate how characters feel about each other, or how they hate the new town they’ve moved to (where something life-changing is going to happen, of course). In a nutshell, this principle makes a book vivid and alive.
Showing gets you more oomph out of your story events. It is the illusion that makes the reader forget they’re looking at print. They’re not reading, they’re living alongside the characters, sharing their hopes, happinesses and disappointments. They’re tasting the diesel fumes rising from a city street on a sweltering day as a character feels suffocated by the pressures in her life.
Showing requires more effort than planning and outlining, and a different mindset, which is one of the reasons writers need to be nudged about it. In our notes we might write ‘the noise was frightening’, but when we draft the scene we want the reader to taste the character’s fear.
There are times, though, when telling is entirely appropriate. We have to be selective with what we present to the reader. It’s not necessary to turn the emotion up for every scene. Not everything will be relevant to the emotional story. You might say ‘John got up early’ and what he felt about it doesn’t matter.
And telling can have unexpected power. Occasionally, a dignified distance from an emotional scene strikes a better note than lingering close-ups. We’ll discuss that later. But if you develop a habit of ‘showing’ as default, you won’t go far wrong.
Here’s how showing can improve your plotting and story.
‘It was gorgeous’ shows us nothing – character’s reactions summarised in a judgement and therefore weakened
A character leaves her chaotic life to stay in a retreat in the Lake District. We’re curious to know what her new life is like. The author writes: It was the most relaxing, enchanting place she’d ever known.
That statement may be accurate, but what does it share with us? If this character’s reaction is important, we don’t want it swept aside in a few judgemental adjectives. Writers often say a place was ‘relaxing’, ‘enchanting’, ‘uber-cool’, ‘quaint’. Or this:
Her bedroom was garish and oriental, like something from a film.
But if you want us to see the bedroom, it’s much more effective to give us details – perhaps a giant gold fan on the wall, a forest of red paper lanterns hanging from the ceiling, porcelain gods on the shelves, giant vases in the corners and dragon murals on a screen in the corner. You could add ‘garish and oriental’ as a comment as well, if it fits with the narration or the narrator. Indeed it might underline your point nicely. But on its own it won’t be as